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Chapter 62: Removed from the Equation

🕑 Added 2022-08-08 16:57:01 +0000 UTC

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hefeystus

interested to see how perry deals with counterintel stuff since we haven't seen him catch any sources/methods by his dad etc...extra senses seem to be default for these supers but he has none.

RepossessedSoul

I would like to see some sort of interlude or something that setts expectations of what happens when a city falls or is under risk of falling. As it stands we have some nebulous threats from the prawns. Yes we saw how strong a prawn is and saw the robots, but there's no vision on what happens when shit goes sideways. We don't know what the fallback plans are, how evacuations are handled, what is the process for evacuating a city. Are there attempts to send reinforcements to help a city withstand a High Tide? Are there missions to scavenge supplies from cities that fell? Why is there only one wall, are there not attempts to 'sally forth' and kill prawns? These are questions that I think would be good to explore to help show how this world is on a knife's edge. If that is planned for the upcoming chapters that would be a good way to show more of the world. If not it might be worth it to make some interludes or 'historical videos' that are used to explain the importance of the efforts of current society. Also, it would be good to see Solaris meeting with the different major powers of the city so readers can see the different major factions that matter within the city. Solaris may be king, but no man rules alone.


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