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Chapter 110: Blessed Steel

🕑 Added 2025-02-19 19:20:56 +0000 UTC

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Spoolofwhool

Chapter 111 hasn't been released for Basic Readers

Mariposa

It'd be on track for them if they use the ashes in their 'blessed' steel.

Mariposa

I wonder if a long term end goal of theirs is to eventually force everyone to live in Graneshian controlled areas. That way the Decievers will be caught faster and they can control the populace like a tyrant.

Ruan Labuschagne

HYYYYPEEEE, I NEED IT TO BE FRIDAY

Apiris

I generally like POV swaps as long as they’re still focused on Will and as long as we get some of Will each chapter. These were good

Jeff Wells

Honestly I would be shocked if there wasn't a potion that was called 'speed' this world. The reason amphetamines are called Speed is because they amp you up and make you faster. The drugs in this world would do that x1000.

Jeff Wells

A legendary set is what the Paladin was referring to, not just a set, and it is the kind of set that makes one nigh unkillable and one of the things you need to be qualified to be a Lord.

Ryan Naquin

Found it. Candide was sentenced to run the gauntlet 36 times for desertion, which meant he had to take 36 blows from each of the 2000 men in the army. One run meant a blow from each soldier. He made it through twice before asking to be shot.

Ryan Naquin

I thought lynching is when a mob or other non judicial group kills a person. A beating with batons may be a flogging. I remember Voltaire's Candide, talking about a military punishment by walking through a path with both sides lined with men beating you with batons, but i dont remember what its called.

Sam Oppy

It was a bit difficult to follow - maybe worth putting a divider in so it’s very clear when the POV switches

Emily Gurnavage

Aha so the lack of stars was previously mentioned. And has a bad result. Thanks for that info.b

TheShadowSlayer_

That first part is very interesting. It would be very enjoable if Caddock started an internal purge following the next fight with Will, or at least threw a reasonbly sized fit. As for the missing stars, well, there IS a far-off section mysteriously devloid of stars and sun-mirrors. I beleive it's called the outer frostlands or something.

SunderGoldmane

I’m glad the vocabulary lessons returned.

Nate Oppy

William Oh wished upon a fallen star... Baker girls everywhere found their buns a little bigger and risen to perky perfection.

closeded

I noticed too, but the rest of the chapter was good enough that I forgot.

Ethan Barrow

TFTC!! I am really looking forward to what the items will turn out as.

Emily Gurnavage

Stealing the stars to forge into... well, anything you'd want to use steel for? That sounds hella blasphemous. Like, to the extreme, lol. They believe that the stars were placed there by Granesh himself iirc a few chapters back. Surely this has to be one of the closer guarded secrets of their organization, although it seems like a challenging secret to keep the source hidden for so many years. If the more religious aspects knew of it I feel like itd be a problem, no? But I also feel like the more religious side would be strongly opposed to not being allowed to know the origin of the blessed steel. So im a good bit curious to know if the truly pious higher ups *know*, or if theres maybe a fake ceremony/ritual they think is the origin that the military branch puts on as a show when a pious leader gets too interested in the blessed steel? It feels like stealing from Granesh himself to me. Something crazed fanatics would definitely not go for lightly. . Slightly separate topic - they have a fuck-ton of this steel. Armies outfitted with it. Enough to hand out ingots to that village and others. So the supply isn't rationed or in danger. So where the F do they get so much of it? And with the "coils", this is surely not the first time a group has had this idea. Does the tower repair itself between coils and replace the missing stars? Or is there a far-off section of the world "mysteriously" devoid of all stars and each coil the missing stars helps hint to the idea? How friggin huge of an area is missing its stars?

Emily Gurnavage

The "backup plan" is what I just assumed. As others said, speed buffs exist and im sure alchemical/medical stuff to do the same does as well. Its a believable phrase to exist in this world.

SirReality

A set is any group of items that give you a bonus for using them together. Classically, in RPG's, it was, wear 2 of 4 for a moderate in theme boost, or 4 of 4 for a big themed boost. In this, they often have matching names and CAN refer to others but don't have to. There's also "soft sets" which are two or more items that happen to synergize well but aren't linked any other way.

Adam Roundfield

Good Chapter

Vinohr

Could always go for an alliterative 'hasted hare'

Sam

I loved the different POVs and had no trouble with the transitions

Sam

I didnt catch the on part of of on speed, I thought they were just talking about how fast hares are

Ryan Nguyen

A set has never been formally defined in the story (explicitly stated). In context whenever it was used, however, it just means any relic combination that synergizes with each other. Boots of outflanking + misty escape was a soft set. A legendary set probably has stringent requirements but massive payout.

Ranger Science

Multiple POVs were great, and it was mostly easy to follow, but I like it when you do "*** William Oh ***", etc, to indicate which POV we're in. Definitely also do it for the first POV, but after the chapter quote (which... technically exists in this one?)

Enzo Elacqua

Just to confirm, a Set is what makes a Lord unkillable/unbeatable right? Sort of like the rapidly accelerating thorns that the one guy had

Uroš

They have healing potions, rage pills and who knows what other drugs. Who's to say they can't have speed pills? :)

Uroš

Thatnks for the chapter, I needed my daily dose of William Oh shenanigans.

Jacob Lawlor

+1

Macronomicon

I was hoping no one would notice, lol, but my backup plan is that because of language drift, 'speed' became slang for any drug or buff that acts as an upper.

Kronos

Came across quite seamless and was helpful in establishing Will’s actual growth.

Daemion

"a hare on speed" might need some more work considering that speed stands for amphetamines that probably don't exist in this world. Blessed steel is stolen from the tower? Man, that church isn't missing a step on their march to hell.

axel jensen

so damm nice to see that the church of granessh is decently to very competent. sad that will is a perfect counter and that you didn't get rid of those ashes.

Quex

Not a problem. If anything it contributed to the feeling of panicked flight from this chapter.

GoodMornin2U2

No I quite liked it! Tyftc

Thomas

The transitions were clear from the phrasing because you indicated a change in setting then the character that was in that setting, each time it happened. You could format with some line demarcation if you wanted, but it wouldn't add much clarification, but that little bit added might be worth it.

EDMANGO

The multiple povs is good, you've peppered in alternate povs enough in previous chapters that it isn't jarring The weird part is not knowing when the pov shift happens through some visual demarkation or spacing because I'm on mobile, but that's probably a me problem

Andrew

Thank you!

ImYou

Bet

Macronomicon

Lemme know if having three different POVs bothered you this chapter. was just trying to show what Will looks like from a civilian's perspective.


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