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Book 2 cover Rough draft feedback
🕑 Added 2024-01-17 00:00:18 +0000 UTCSo, Here's the rough draft. We're probably gonna do one more revision, then call it good. The artist sadly couldn't fit Mass Driver in the picture and still have space for Heather and Perry's expression to be visible in thumbnail.
Give me feedback! Then scroll through the feedback you like, and heart the stuff you think sounds like a good idea. I Personally like the background and posing but want Heather to be more aggressive/animated.
Perry looks a bit too much like prof. X, lol.
Lemme know what you think!
Comments
Samuel Terrazas
Why would it be super suit when Perry's whole thing is armored iron man?
Jackson Andrews
I like most of the suggestions but i want to stress that I want the armor to be slightly more super suit and less body armor. and it really shouldnt match right?
Kiew
I think even slightly altering the eyebrow shape and angle you can change Heather's vibe. Look how Perry is giving brainy and low key mean because he has vulcan/elf brows.
