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splash page art
🕑 Added 2024-04-19 16:52:57 +0000 UTC
So I figured the team's fight with Karth would make for a good splash page. Here's the 1st draft sketch. I was like, 'damn! 99% there already!
Thoughts?
Comments
ForverSOlo
Don't worry too much about it. A lot of web novels are know to have a character that is in all respects a child except in age and I think you've done a good job of making Nat feel like a person with small person problems lol.
Ronin
I really, really dig that Karth's head is vaugely Baboonish instead of the stereotypical Orcish face and head. Feels both menacing and unique.
H
Isn’t Karth supposed to have a visible demonic glyph on his forehead?
Owen Kaz
Could you perhaps alter where Karth's arm meets the bionic/robot arm? That little gap between it and his arm just looks off. Especially with a trolls regeneration. It looks like he has an amputated stump rather than an integrated arm. Other than that, it looks pretty damn good to me. Although I will agree with that other commenter to a degree, Nat seems to reach up to Perry's waist right now height wise. Everything else is fine, she just needs to be a bit taller. Currently my brain puts her as a halfling Artificer when looking at this.
Macronomicon
I don't....know?
Fervent Fiend
Looks great! But Nat looks a little too child-like. I know she’s small, but is she “you’re on a list” small?
Kiew
Amazing
Sanairb
Wow, that's a great picture. Karth needs a red bionic eye though.
Hayden Leech
Not sure! I like this one a lot more. I think the humanoid arms/fingers adds something. I’ve definitely anthropomorphized boomer so maybe the humanoid shape just resonates. Not sure!
Kurt A
Pregnant heather-body in the background acting as a cheerleader?
Macronomicon
you think he just looks bad in print as an ovoid? The possibility has occured to me.
Hayden Leech
I especially like boomer. The other cover makes him look a little funky.
Macronomicon
yeah, i wasn't specific enough, i think.
Hayden Leech
Homeboy needs a the symbol of Gna’Kis glowing on his forehead.
Ghost4576
Damn, looks great
Hayden Leech
Epic!
Clifton Thrasher
Looks great, I thought boomer was still kinda egg shaped with magnetic arms?
Macronomicon
fixed it!
Thando Nkadimeng
Jt good
Timothy Dana
Right?
Macronomicon
Where's the damn picture? 1 sec...
