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Phoenix Pink Hemy vs Metal Deicide
🕑 Added 2021-10-09 12:40:58 +0000 UTCHello Patreons!
All right?
I was supposed to release the second part of this story yesterday, but I ran out of electricity in my house. Sorry.
Today I bring you the second part of the story "Phoenix Pink Hemy vs Metal Deicide".
This story has its ending in the second part where I continue testing some new destruction techniques and other details.
I also tried to make a more balanced combat and if you see the full story (which are 150 images in total!) you will see a fight with some plot twists.
But I don't know if that's what you think is a balanced fight, so I'll ask you your feedback on the pace of this fight.
I decided to use Hemy in this story because she is the Hardcore Lady more "underdog". It would be strange to put, for example, Lechoslawa getting beaten up, since she is brutally strong. But of course it can happen, Lechoslawa in a more balanced battle.
My inspiration was totally the Tokusatsu series and there are many references to series that show in television in my country and are very old, from the 80's. I don't know what the international name of the series is, but it has references to: Jiraiya, Spielvan, Flashman, Maskman ,Winspector and other series.
I made a very "Out of the box" story to have a little more creative freedom and also to empower the girls with some explanation (the special clothes and super powerful enemies).To be more easy explain the destruction and girl and enemy resistence also.
This story would already be "the end" of the adventures, moments before the Deicides Sisters enter the world of humans. That is why it is said that the barrier between the worlds is weak.
However this story will only continue if you want, so I also ask for feedback on that.
Do you want me to close this story arc?
The script is pre-written from the series' ending (which is short), having one more story showing Hitomi, another story dedicated to Agnieszka and then the final confrontation of the heroines with the Sisters Deicides.
If you want to see the sequence of these stories, I will intersperse this series with the others as I always do, so as not to get too repetitive.
In it I intend to make the fights balanced and explore different techniques. It would almost be an experimental series.
I ask you why I don't know if this theme is to the Patreons' taste.
Hope you like this second part of the story, I ask a lot for your feedback, don't bother criticizing or saying you didn't like it, I really want to read what you have to say. This help me to keep improving. :o)
Thank you all for your support, ideas, comments and messages.
The next story is a script that a Patreon sent me starring in Lechoslawa.
Thank you all so much and let's go to the next story!
Comments
Hardcore Ladys
Thank you very much for the Feedback Ffejl! It's great to know what they like! It helps me a lot.
Hardcore Ladys
Thanks Darrell! I really can't imagine something more balanced with Lechoslawa.
Hardcore Ladys
Thank you Eline! It was very important in this story to be able to use some new effects and I will be able to use them in other stories. For the moment, let's put this series to sleep.
Hardcore Ladys
Thank you so much Gaiden! I'll do it.
Hardcore Ladys
Thank you very much for the Feedback!
FfejL
My personal preference is for the unbalanced story. I love seeing B.Decide or Lech rip an opponent to piece. But I did enjoy this! The effects were great, Metal Decide is an interesting character, and I like how Hemy's power increased as the story progressed.
darrell14
You were so correct. It would be absurd to try to put Lech in such a 'more balanced' story since Lech's strength would bend and break this metal adversary in just seconds. This story was great because we never knew for sure whether Hemy would be strong enough to prevail. While I prefer Lech or B destroying their opponents, this change of pace to a balanced battle was fun and exciting! Thanks for the story.
Eline beesje
Thanks for the cool story hardcore! I do like the new effects especially the one where hemy is put into the ground literally! As for the story it is cool but for me I'll think it's good to store it in the 'fridge' and workout the rage day and dark tournament first. I think this sideline saga will be cool when there is a lot more brutal script ready in the future! Thanks and really looking forward to she Lechoslawa and here enormous strength combine with you're new techniques! XX Eline,
Gaiden
I wouldn't mind seeing more though I would prefer the Another Side and Witch stories coming first as far as the spinoffs go.
anonymous
Du not continue!!
