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MT 160 - Dread Star II

🕑 Added 2024-08-06 17:37:36 +0000 UTC

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Retroburn

Thanks for clearing things up!

Cornman

Howdy! 1) Traits are bonuses that don't really fall into another classification, acquired either at specific break points or when satisfying some condition like understanding an ability or improving it in some unorthodox way. They're generally static and predetermined. Right now they appear on passives and stats. I was originally going to include a trait for every stat at 10, but it wasn't working out the way I wanted so I moved on. Traits may appear for the other stats at different break points or after achieving certain mile stones or feats. 1.5) Mundane damage are common damage sources that are not magical in nature. A sword strike from a regular soldier, being slammed into an ordinary wall, a bite from an angry chihuahua, etc. 2) The third revelation is mostly an easter egg for people who check out the character sheet. It shouldn't be considered canon and I don't plan on having it appear in the text. 3) I'm glad you like The List :) It's as much a tracking tool for myself as anything, but maybe when Arlo and crew get some down time they can review it to decide what they wanna tackle next.

Retroburn

Finally got around to reading Arlo's chracter sheet. Surprisingly fun to do while watching the Olympics. Some questions: 1. What are traits? For example under Fortitude, there's "Trait (10): 90% resistance to mundane damage." I can't really remember this or the other "traits" and what's mundane damage supposed to mean anyway? 2. Arlo's got a third revelation that's basically a message from Fortune. It doesn't say much, but was this shown already? 3. I love The List at the end, you should include it in a chapter.

Nine

One thing this story does really well is the divinities. It’s always fascinating how complex they are.

thaughton2

Nice. Very disturbing image to picture. What the hell did Arlo do to make a being at that level even glance at him?

Cornman

But the level says 10 and he's 12 so ignore that part, the stats are right.

Cornman

Oh, I also added a character sheet for Arlo as an attachment.

Cornman

A day late and a dollar short :( I struggled with this chapter, more than I probably should have. I usually have a pretty good vision for a scene, but things kept going off the rails so I'd write, rewrite, delete, add, rage and take a nap. I've got some IRL stuff going on (nothing bad, in fact it's pretty good, but still stressful), so I'm pretty sure I was overthinking it. Hopefully this gets us past this weird bump I've been having with Avarice. She's been a tricky character to deal with, although I've enjoyed writing her. But now we get to have story time. Anyway, thanks for everybody's patience. This one took me 3 times longer than a regular chapter and twice as long as I think it should have, and that's even with Sir Raiu Koren building the bedrock of the JuRoQi section. (He wrote the poem, among other things. I'm less good at poems, especially narrative ones.) Hope you're having a good week!


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