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Power Play - Revamped n Repowered
🕑 Added 2017-11-06 22:25:35 +0000 UTCThis took a bit longer to put together than I thought it would, but I am very happy with the result.
In my review of older art, I put myself to the task of going through all the pages from Power Play. I think there was a lot of room for improvement. I did a number of color and line edits across a chunk of panels, and rewrote pretty much all the dialogue.
When I set out to make a webcomic on Patreon, I made myself a general script for all the events of the comic, then went ahead and made it page by page each month. I learned pretty fast that I'm definitely NOT good at doing this kind of thing. I'm way more comfortable writing stuff in bigger chunks. In re-reading the pages, I still liked what was there, but it felt disjointed. So now it's changed. Some stuff to look forward to:
Color updates
Drake is snarkier
The demon king finally gets a name.... King Sethan! And he actually talks little bit (when Drake is not plugging his throat.)
I hope the comic is more entertaining this time around. With this revamp and Aftermath done, I can move on to more new stuff.
For new patrons who don't have the earlier pages and want the comic right away in full, it's available on gumroad: https://gum.co/wSKs
If you have been a patron for a long time and already have all the pages, please message me requesting the new release. You'll get an exclusive Hi Res version of the comic :)
I attached a preview of the first 4 pages of the revamp to the post. Check em out in the attachments.
Comments
hotcha
hehe. Drake's definitely gettin in his licks ;) check your messages for the updated pages.
Patrick Fillion
Always such a treat seeing Drake in action, and he really does seem at his best when he's dominating some muscle bottom (even if I love seeing HIM dominated on occasion, too! LOL!)! Love the "revamped" pages, my friend... the action is INTENSELY HAWT! And your art is gorgeous and crazy sexy! Great work, as always!!
hotcha
that's his m.o.!
Orleos
Cocky fuck of a powerful demon! Damn he's so hot and commanding.
