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[Mini Story] Substitute Teacher

🕑 Added 2024-08-23 15:00:12 +0000 UTC
[Mini Story] Substitute Teacher

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BarucAI

Thank you for the feedback! I will look into the culture you mentioned!

Pepsi_Dose

Interresting story, I quite like it, represents the teaching atmossphere quite well. But in 3038, they still wearing traditional dress and all, with no technology? Now that's more interresting with the whole FMG-35 thing! I personally studied one culture in China the Mosou in Yunnan (the last matricharchal society) and would definitely love for you to explore cultures like that especially if your going in such a field like that. Especially combined with this universe, it definitely would have some nice topics! Nice job there! But I gotta mention something to the picture, as I did a bit of ethnicity in my field of studying, I can tell the AI didn't do so well with Asians, Ms. Liu looks fine but Ms. Chen definitely has more Eurasian traits in her face, more specifily her cheekbones and eye sockets are rather more european/western looking. Plus skin colour wise, depending on the region of china, especially in the more hilly terrain of China, pure white skin isn't a normal thing, I do not believe the FMG-35 also changes pigments to fit Chinese beauty standards. Plus the clothing rather more looks untraditional of Miss Chen if I may say so. Especially in a place like China, where white skin would be seen as something great, you would most likely hide it from the sun to protect such from UV-Light to keep the lighter skintone. I know this is massively nit-picking but especially about something set in China and me having a bit of experience in more traditional and remote places like Yunnan, where technology is rather more little, like in this scenario it seemingly is, I simply had to nit pick. But apart form all of that, nice story, was a nice read and wouldn't mind an continuation! Love your works <33333


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