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Chapter 78 of Shrouded Destiny (SD) is out for Squires!

🕑 Added 2024-08-26 04:56:07 +0000 UTC

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ND518

Regarding Shireen, she’s literally the Stark/Lannister’s navel force right now. Her and Robb were single handedly carrying their victories for a long time. Getting the royal marriage is due to Joffrey’s crazy but she’s been earning the praises she’s gotten.

suspicious

Outstanding performance on this one. I've read so many fanfics over the years that I'm hardly surprised any longer, but you've managed it in the most pleasant ways. In CoF by the way as well. Writing looks crisp as always. I think we're all looking forward to how Jon will satiate his bloodlust now. I think Shireen is getting a lot more goodwill than she would've gotten realistically, but it's your story and I'm not really vexed, it's just that her struggle seems less tangible then that of Jon to my eyes who had to carve out his destiny with his own bloodied hands. Anyways, before I start to ramble on even further wishing you the best and eagerly waiting for more (CoF as well!)

Senseo

You killed Arya... you killed... !!! I congratulate you for having the balls- nevermind, you're worse than Hitler!!!

Ambrose Young

Yeah I think Jon may go a little Theon Stark happy on the Reavers after this and now the worst of the Free Folk tendencies can come to bear

Happy

Just now finished the chapter! Myrcella is officially a Stark after this chapter! She knows even the deepest secrets of her family. I feel for the hard choices she has to make and I swear I see some of Tywin Lannister when she’s deciding what’s best for everyone. The reunion between Rickon and Jon was wonderful. But I feel terrible for Rickon. He really tried to get help for Arya but she was way too defiant for her own good. I had the thought that maybe Melisandre would be able to resurrect Arya but I don’t think it’s happening. I think killing Arya will make Jon reluctant to take any hostages so Desmera Redwyne I’d hold on to my head if I were you!