Chapter 84 of Shrouded Destiny (SD) is out for Squires!
🕑 Added 2024-10-07 04:18:03 +0000 UTCA far humbler chapter, but still over my og word limit. For some reason, this one gave me plenty of trouble to write despite being smaller. Don't be shy with the critique.
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Comments
Based_Bass
Ah I remember now. I’d say poor Balon for thinking that he still had a child left to save…but fuck that guy. The Greyjoys really are their own worst enemies.
Gladiusx
Jon hasn't arrived. It's just that the people under him have started emulating his methods. Skulls.
Gladiusx
Asha died when the Redwyne heir (her husband) caught her fucking her boytoy, and he killed her. It's the first Paxter PoV.
Based_Bass
Fantastic chapter as usual. How did Asha die again? Anders might have his own designs on humbling and usurping the Martells but he’s not wrong about them being inept. Can’t wait till he finds out Aegon is fake. That the Martells tied Dorne to a false cause. Gods that is going to be epic.
pangoid
When the “filler” chapter is one of your best. I feel so bad for Garlan man, poor guy.
Omar Syed
Good filler chapter. But... Moar! More blood for the Blood God! More skulls for the Skull Throne! Oops...that's another fandom altogether. Anticipating Eddard "I will pull down your wall, slaughter your citizenry, and raise princes" Stark, Jon "I do know something" Snow, and Shireen "I am my fathers daughter" Baratheon. Also, the sacking of Oldtown, meeting between Robb and "Aegon", and the reaction of everyone to the end of House "We have a storied history of creating nothing" Greyjoy.
Zombie45
only problem I see in this chapter is that there's no Jon pov
Abhishek Kumar
somwhow I still want Renly to die by Tommen's hand
ND518
I’m sooo excited for whatever happens to Hightower. Jon is so close! And I also just want him to reunite with his family. He literally ran away from them once he came to this reality.
Happy
Lmao I wonder how many of the smallfolk would believe the king’s lies when the Redwynes suddenly became vegetarians and left their plates full! At this point it may serve them better to just kill Baelor themselves and get the heck out of the North. I hope Garlan gets justice for his sister and her ladies. Who knows if he’ll stop at just blaming the bastard of House Wyl though… Jon has pretty much arrived right? All those skulls appearing overnight? Oh he’s CLOSE! 😭
Ulquiorra Schiffer
Thanks for the chapter