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Liliana Vs Jazz: The Rookie
🕑 Added 2023-02-22 15:23:52 +0000 UTCHey everyone!Today i wanna show you some advances in the new comic.
The title will be :"The Rookie". The reason for this title is because the main focus of the story will be Jazz perspective: Even she won her first fight for disqualification, she feels angry because the twins ruined her debut and did a joke of her, so for her next fight she demands a more "serious" rival, one that could really let her show her fight abilities and strengh, and that's when Liliana enters the scene not just to fight but to teach her a little bit of humbleness.
Also, as you can see, the girls will wear more elaborate clothing than the classic bikinis and as a last detail they will also be able to sweat in combat, something I've been trying to do for years but never managed to get it to work properly until now.
What do you think? I hope you are as excited as I am, I am currently working on the storyboard so hopefully I will have the first pages by saturday, will keep you update.
Comments
Wanderer
the outfits and sweat are an amazing touch, looking forward to this
D G
And I thought I couldn't be more excited for this project! I really love the outfits--Jazz looks great in gold (IIRC, the chains are the ones from that one photoset you ahd for her), and the BDSM look suits Liliana (heh, the little ring in her collar... dunno who will win, but her getting leashed if she loses might be fun)--love all the details from the straps along her wrists to the fishnets (*man* those fishnets). With the costuming and the effort you're putting into the sweat, I really have to thank you--I've loved your stuff for a good long while, but you're constantly upping your game and adding more detail and fun design elements. Each of these is really fun--the invidual posing is really hot, and I love the cover. Just love the determination on Jazz's face and Liliana's whole vibe. Thanks man, as always your stuff is killer!
UpRex
These clothings are fire! Nice work.
Zipper
Looking forward to some good old-fashioned Ultimate Surrender-style hate-fucking of the loser. 😏
Samuel
Oh, in that case I can enjoy a good old aggressive fight where the fighters are nasty to each other. Would still like to seem them maybe earning a begrudging respect between them, but I would not be opposed to them being more intense rivals that trade wins and losses between them.
LordJerle
I'd lose orgasmically, unless both of them decided to fight over who gets to eliminate me from the match
H-SNACK
the fight opens with Liliana sucker punching Jazz so friendly will not be😁
H-SNACK
why not both?😀
Samuel
Like the idea of someone getting a serious rival. In this case I would like to see both Liliana and Jazz sharing a rivalry and friendship, i.e. pushing each other in the ring but being civil and friendly (maybe really friendly wink wink) outside it.
LordJerle
Both damn sexy queens. I'd love to be in the ring alone with either of them. It'd hurt so good.
