Banished Shadow
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Some lore mapping i guess?
🕑 Added 2024-02-09 09:31:09 +0000 UTCI guess this has lil lore drops in it? I've been trying to use this more. Putting down notes is much easier when you cant write for shit. And kinda helps my plan out how to do my frames for the month
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Banished Shadow
No problem, you guys are always welcome to correct my bad spelling
Fiona
ohno, I just wanted to help out in case you want to adjust it, this is your world and notes you can do whatever you want! no worries <3
Banished Shadow
Its fine, i always state that writing and just words in general is not my strong point, so always expect me to mess things up. Just putting notes down.
Fiona
just a tiny nitpick, feel free to ignore me, the sentence "known for its colosseums" doesn't work. Because 'The Colosseum' is only the name of the place in the real world. The actual type of this ancient open-air venu is an amphitheater. The Colosseum itself is only one, notably the most famous by far and largets still standing but yaknow. cheers!
Enjoji
With even just these notes/droplets, you paint such an immersive world already - thank you for sharing!
Alice Wonderland
I want to write a book about this story !
