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A Helping Hand - Page 11
🕑 Added 2018-06-20 00:30:57 +0000 UTC Things finally move into the bedroom!Art is a bit rough in this one- still figuring out the new lighting for this scene. I think I made things overall a bit too dark, and I took the opportunity to play with an idea for painting the BG that didn't 100% work out, though with some adjusting it might...
Just lots of trying new things here, so it's a bit bumpy. Hopefully the next page will be a lil' smoother, but as always I hope y'all like it despite the issues. :P
As always, would love to hear your thoughts!
Comments
Ruaidri
I more meant technique wise- with watercolours it's a little tricky to keep things clean when they get this dark, so lightening things up slightly might help tidy it up a little. If I do it right the room won't even look 'lighter', it should just look better. That's a fairly big 'if' though. x3
Ruaidri
Aww, you're too kind. Thank you! :D
PsyMar
I don't think it's too dark. I mean I keep my brightness down and blue-dampening glasses on and it looks just about right on my screen.
Shiloh Skye
I cannot even begin to describe how awesome this comic has been so far. You really have a talent for the comic style. Even your dialogue is fantastic.
Ruaidri
Aw, thanks! :D Fortunately they chastity thing isn't really a huge theme in this comic- it's mentioned because I couldn't see a way not to, but it's not really 'about' that. So it shouldn't become too distracting hopefully!
Bloudin Ruo
"No talk, only do" :)
arcticfox12x
Also keep experimenting, its like night and day between this page and the first. really good work
arcticfox12x
As someone who has zero experience drawing, this scene looks great to me. I would imagine drawing darkness while portaying a scene in it is easier said than done. So good work!
Magitechnician
I may not be into the whole chastity thing myself but my god Gale&Deer are *so adorable*
Ruaidri
He definitely knows how to push all the right buttons!
Ruaidri
It seemed like the most clear way to get his message across. :P
LexOunce
Love that 3rd frame, pulling him in!
Nana Lu
There's something about Gale that is so enticing. That kiss <3<3
