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New Comic! Page 1 - Title TBD (Colour!)
🕑 Added 2018-11-05 20:26:16 +0000 UTC So! I'm working on a new thing!For a while now I've been saying I want to make a new comic with a hypnosis or mind control theme. This is not that comic, hah. I find myself struggling a bit with the writing side of that comic- I've got a basic outline that seems to work but I'm struggling to get the details into a place that I like. But I don't want to faff about with writing forever, I wanna draw smut! So here's an alternative idea that's been kicking around my head for a while that should be pretty simple.
Short, stupid and filthy. Should hopefully be fun!
I tried out a slightly different method of colouring for this one, and I think it worked out well- it's pretty simple and low detail, which makes it a pretty snappy way method for colouring comics so it doesn't take all day. A few highlights here and there keep it from feeling too flat- I think it's working nicely! I also experimented a bit with some different paper. Makes things look a little grainy but the effect isn't entirely unpleasant.
I'd love to hear what y'all think so far!
Comments
Ruaidri
I have a bit of a bad habit of making all the fluids I draw look like cum, so I tried to fix that here. It's possible I overcorrected and didn't make them visible enough. I'll see if I can fix that up next time it comes up! Thaaanks. :D
Ruaidri
I have a title in mind, to be honest, I just didn't want to use it quite yet to ruin the cold start the comic is going for. I'll add it in when the next finished page goes up!
Bloudin Ruo
I think the combination of the quicker coloring technique and grainier paper will work well together; any small issues with the color will be hidden underneath the texture, and I think the texture itself is a fine addition too. However, fluids may need some extra definition since the texture of the paper overpowers the delicateness of how you usually do them (as I think is demonstrated well in panel #2 and #5). Maybe since it is only saliva and pre (for now!), clear liquids, it makes it seem that way, but it's just my 2c! But my god Ru, panels #5, #6 and #7 are just heavenly. I can practically put myself right in the little guy's shoes the page is so well done!
Predictable porn comic names: "Office Politics", assumes it's an office based on the shirt and tie. "Warehouse Audit", assumes horse = warehouse worker?. "Performance Review", "Oral Presentation", "Office Meating". I think that's all I got right now.
Ruaidri
Fantastic, thank you! :3
Ruaidri
Poor guy just wanted to enjoy the moment. D: Thanks! :D
James Dawes
Agreed It looks great and I'm looking forward to seeing the whole thing.
Taki Kuroi
That final expression is so great. :D I am here for this comic.
