The Fluffer - Page 15 [Ink]
🕑 Added 2019-02-12 20:22:16 +0000 UTCMaybe if someone had just been nice to the little guy from the start, we could have avoided all this!
Comments
Ruaidri
I never intended for the horse guy to be a complete jerk, just sort of amusingly disinterested in everything that's happening. I intended the shove at the beginning of the comic to be played for humour, but I did it badly and everyone took it super seriously and started hating the guy. I've been looking forward to this moment so I could hopefully turn that around a little bit. x3 I do have to admit, I'm pretty happy with how this page has come out so far, overall. All the various expressions were a lot of fun!
Ruaidri
Thanks! I'm fond of the little ear fold, m'self. x3
Ruaidri
Hah, well thanks! I think I'm okay with a 'charming piece of shit', I think that could make for a fun character if I play it right!
ThatFennec
I know Kyle is a piece of shit but he's also a charming piece of shit, just gotta say. I think your characterization is getting better, Ru
Matsi
that first panel is fucking adorable!
Bloudin Ruo
Just wanted to say that I like the personality coming from the horse actor in these pages! Seeing that he's really focused on his work and is a nice guy at heart :) Glad to see him redeeming himself a little! I think panel #4 has some really good charm with Kyle's eyes. Maybe sparkling a little with that stallion praise, and then taking it in stride with panel #5! Great work on this page so far! Kinda nice that the crew has faded into the background, letting these two have some real chemistry without butting in!