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The Fluffer - Page 15

🕑 Added 2019-02-14 03:37:45 +0000 UTC

Comments

Matsi

HE'S EVEN CUTER NOW IN FULL COLOR!!! xD god I love that first panel <3

Bloudin Ruo

'Decent', come on Ru, you can pat yourself on the back more than that! The page came out fantastic, I think you're right in that there's a great balance of dialogue, story and smut in here. The balance of the speech bubbles, as well, is really nice! Overall just really aesthetically pleasing from a layout perspective :) Maybe the drooliness is a survival trait? In order to always be prepared and able to accept even the largest on a moment's notice... Anyways, the fluids all look really good, and I love the trail between the stallion's tip and Kyle's chin in panel #2. His expression in that panel is amazing, as well. Again, like I said in the lines, the eyes you put on Kyle in panel #4... Just to die for. Amazing job is all I can say, words can't express how nice they turned out and how full of emotion and spirit you made them. As for panel #3, in the sketch and lines I felt that the stallion's pose felt a 'bit' weird, and when I say a bit, it wasn't even enough for me to point out anything (and as you know, I point out everything I can, so that's saying something to how minor it was) but here, now, looking at panel #3 it looks great! Just enough relaxed, apologetic and embarrassed. One final thing... All teardrop markings present and accounted for! :)