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The Fluffer - Pg.17 [Ink]

🕑 Added 2019-02-27 18:03:39 +0000 UTC

Comments

Ruaidri

Thanks! I'm not super strong with perspective, but I've been trying to keep it interesting.

Kulza

Really like the perspective in some of these panels

Bloudin Ruo

Shaping up to be the new highlight page of the comic! Though I think each new page after this will have that commendation :P Love where you put Kyle's hands in the last three panels, especially panel #3 with him gripping down on the stallion's thighs. Great reference, along with his bushy tail, as to how difficult his task is! The short stopped "Oh fuck-" works really well and as SanHusky said, is good enough to be a standalone little image :D Every panel in this page has something new and unique, and each one is defined with a role of portraying something very specific and meaningful to the whole progression of the page. That being said, none of them feel choppy, misplaced or otherwise disorganized, and I think this is one of your most well laid-out pages to date. I think this speaks volumes about how much you've learned and improved in less than 20 pages of production! I absolutely can't wait to see this get colored and the extent of the mess your planning on making of our poor little fennec friend!

Ruaidri

You just like seeing little fennecs get abused, don't you? :P

Eddie SanHusky

That's fine, the wide-eyed "Oh fuck" is priceless enough to be a stand-alone page in any format XD

Ruaidri

Yeah, I think I probably should. There's been a few comments about that so far, so when I'm done it I'll look into sticking it all together in one place for people.

sonicmega

Sorry for the random question, but I've been really slow on the process of saving the pages as you complete them - will you be offering a collected ZIP/file of all the pages once the comic is done?