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The Fluffer - Pg. 17

🕑 Added 2019-02-28 20:06:56 +0000 UTC

Comments

Ruaidri

Aw, thanks! :D

Ruaidri

I definitely concur! :P

Rhewlif

You did a fantastic job!

Kirien Fost

Messy fox is best fox! ^^ <3

PsyMar

Soundtrack: "I'm so excited / I just can't hide it / I'm about to lose control / and I think I like it"

Shadewing

He is taking it like a champ

Samt517

Lovely!

Bloudin Ruo

Also I realized I never answered your question from the description. You definitely gave it the required, expected and necessary 'oomph'! I'm now wondering if a "Fluffer 2" is in order, with Kyle having a more permanent position on the crew and maybe hiking tail for our stallion friend :D

Ruaidri

Hah, thanks man! For the kind words, and for the input you've given all this time. You're a big part of the reason it's been getting better!

Bloudin Ruo

Holy moly, Ru! I know you said you were going to add mess, but this is just above and beyond my already high expectations! You already know my thoughts on the dialogue, blocking and layout, so I'll focus more on the feel of each panel. Panel #1 is just awesome, the expression in Kyle's eyes and the clear fluids you did are spot on and perfect. Panel #2 is really awesome, even for how simple it is, because it gives us such a powerful perspective from Kyle's vantage point! #3, I mean, come on. The colors, shading, definition, mess, and all the other little details just make it work so spectacularly. The mess and explosiveness of panel #4, plus Kyle's struggling expression, really sells the whole scenario for me, like it's really difficult and not just 'furry fantasy' levels. Then finally panel #5 rounds out the whole page so well with his blissful expression and the slow, stringy river of horse jizz dripping from his chin. All of Kyle's markings are accounted for, and I can't find a single thing to point out in the page for critique. You've outdone yourself here, congratulations!