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Spear Devil - 030

🕑 Added 2022-11-03 20:23:19 +0000 UTC

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Thanks! Yeah the different POVs are a tool I use with great caution. It's very useful to give other characters and the story in general more depths, but it could just as easily affect the story negatively. It a balance act, though I have improved a lot since my first story Silverfire, so I am more confident in trusting my judgement when using 'tools' like that.

Yeah, Akira will have to learn how to be a true dragon and how to rein in his emtions now that he is a half-dragon. Not an easy feat for someone that had been a normal human his whole life. Thanks, I try to incorporate this theme into all my stories while try to portray it from different perspectives each time. It's tricky though but I am glad you enjoy it!

Evening Star

Excellent chapter. I think you're doing the different POV's excellently so far. Not many i read switches POV often it's rather refreshing. Nice to see bit of draconic rage too. I'm excited to see what kind of offered one could put forward to join a peerage that ISN'T reduced to a servant, or a slave rather. Since even if they say they "guarantee" freedom it don't since not doing what you're told run the risk of becomnig stray devil and the piece mutating you.

Zack

Love me some draconic rage!😁 Thanks for chapter - Really enjoying your general theme of freedom as well.


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