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The Lone Wolf - Chapter 030

🕑 Added 2022-04-04 09:48:18 +0000 UTC

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Yeah, I am not really a fan of MC's struggling for 99% of the story, especially transmigrators. I get it if they have learning curve, but if they struggle constantly and mostly because they are rash and reckless, than I can't really enjoy the story.

This was amazing don’t stop making op characters like lupin, it just makes the story so much more fun watching someone with overwhelming strength.compared to watching someone struggle the entire time

Great story but way too short

I will sometime in the future.

One of the best one piece novels/story’s I have ever saw hopefully you make another one

Maybe I will add one in the future, but I was pretty burned out after finishing that story and in now state of mind to write up an aftermath.

Really good story wish we could have got a reactions chapter though from other major characters after the fall of the redline and world government and the aftermath it brought.

Also thanks for your support!

Thanks man! I really like the ending too. It brought the whole story togeter with them being back where they started - living together peacefully.

koby smith

really good story and defiantly is worth joining Patreon to read all of it, chefs kiss on the ending

Truth be told, ending this story was incredibly hard on its own, as I made some mistakes along the way that haunted me till the end, so I was overjoyed when I finally managed to find an end for it. BUt you are right about the part with multiple points of view, and I may do that in another epilogue someday. Also thanks for the short reivew!

What a great story, I thoroughly enjoyed every part of it, although if I'd be wanting to find a fault in it, I'd say that the ending was a bit rushed, I feel like you could have squeezed a couple of extra chapters out of it just to flash out the post ending World's state, maybe another multiple POVs chapter like after his freeing of the slaves or something like that. Still, an amazing work of fiction nonetheless.

Yeah, I think once you start to drop stories, it becomes a habit, which is something I want to avoid at all costs.

Kayden High

I’m glad you don’t just drop stories but finish them a lot of people just drop them .

Thanks man. This means a lot, as this was the first story I started and it caused me number of headaches to figure out the plot and all that. But I also like Lupin as a character very much. For me he is the true definition of a powerhouse. He doesn't rely on anybody but himself and doesn't take crap from those weaker than him, without abusing his power.

Jeremiah Eleko

I can't believe I'm saying this; but this story might be better than silverfire, which I also enjoyed immensely.

Same for me. I just finished this story because I didn't want to drop it, but I wasn't as into it like I was with Silverfire.

Arsh Mittal

Nice story. The plot wasn't as gripping as silverfire for me but still pretty good ending.

Well, people die for stupid reason every moment. Yeah, the ending was my favorite too, with all of them back together being a family.

GluttonousAngel

Kind of sad for such a dumb reason but satisfying at the end


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