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The Wanderer – 041

🕑 Added 2022-04-12 18:32:49 +0000 UTC

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Thanks man, It's really hard to write conversations so that they don't sound wooden. Not sure yet how good I am with these, but I always try to be careful and think every word through. Ah, you noticed my little spoiler. If you wanna know, then I can tell you, just say the word.

The conversation was well-built and thought through, man. I can't wait for the consequences of this situation to happen. And what is with mentioning being a candidate for the brotherhood from Pietro?

bwahaha... I guess my thought manipulation has finally started to work bwhahahahaha. your welcome guys

I think she will. Would break my own heart, if I split them apart.

I really can't bear to do that anymore, I just love them together. With every chapter they grow more and more inseperable.

DarkThunderNinja

Yeah I have to agree. At this point I really hope Jean stays as the main pairing for the story.

Shadi Elmowafi

If you break this couple, we are going to have problems


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