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The Wanderer - 264

🕑 Added 2023-11-02 04:50:04 +0000 UTC

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Potato

Absolutely love this fic but these chaps do drag on a little bit

Nieus The God Of Magic

Hey man i get what you are saying but author-san has also explained before that this story is slow-paced and this chapter i see as necessary along with the last one because its solidifying the trios relationship and intimacy

Hi author-san. Welcome back. Now for the real thing. Not that I'm complaining, but don't you think it doesn't make sense to have so many 18+ chapters in a row? It's just not interesting, especially looking at the size of them. 18+ looks cool when it comes up periodically in 1 chapter, at most in 2, but it would be even rarer, but now it reminds me of the situation of another fic "Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires". It's a problem there too. Just asking to look at the situation from the side that the last four chapters are mostly 18+, and 263 in general pure intimacy between Jean and Laura. I understand that you want to reveal their feelings and all that.... but I think it would be better to cut the 18+ and just write something light. Like a date or a sit-down or something. Maybe it's just me, but it's really hard to read 18+ chapters one after another, especially since this fic is not in the right genre. Please bear with me and don't throw slippers. Congratulations on your return, and I hope you're doing well.


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