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The Wanderer - 101

🕑 Added 2022-11-26 01:12:26 +0000 UTC

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I am excited too. :D

Thank you for the praise! And I am glad that I could convey Elijah's character well enough for you to grasp the reason for his aggression. Though it is true that he does have an incredibly destructive side to him, one that is practically the manifestation of ruthlessness, Elijah is very much in control of his actions. Still, it isn't easy for him to act in a way that may benefit him the most, for example through staying his hand and playing weak, as he is very aware of the danger that awaits him and Jean. It is a difficult path he wants to tread and his affection for Jean has not made it less dangerous. On the contrary, he now has something to lose, besides just his own life, and this fact weighs heavily on his mind and shoulders.

Edar

Honestly one of the best pieces of fiction i've read in years. From the way your characters (especially Elijah and Jean), make me want to invest my affection in them, the way they are developing, the possessiveness they have of each other in the best way (for each other's safety and well being). When I first started the story, I was a bit apprehensive of Elijah's characterization because he always seem to be blowing up at everyone for the slightest mention of Jean's name, but i have come to see that it isn't so much a loss of control and a sign instability, but a message to anyone that would think to hurt or use her in their schemes. I admire that, because I have come to realize those things that I had apprehension of Elijah for, is also part of me, especially when it comes to those I care for. Thank you for your amazing work!

Willskys

Thanks! Excited to see what you cooked up for his next power up


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