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The Wanderer - 135

🕑 Added 2023-01-08 02:38:37 +0000 UTC

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Can't really argue with that. Thank you for mentioning it, I will make sure to keep an eye on that and try to avoid it as much as possible.

Alex I

The only thing I'll say is that you should dial back the shear number of romance moments or Elijah waxing poetically about Jean. Absence makes the heart grow fonder, and the opposite is true. Most people cannot keep eating the same thing everyday, even if it is their favorite meal. One of our main drives is curiosity, and as much as stability as routine offers it also dulls our senses, eventually that meal that used to be your favorite is just another meal out of several because you normalized it instead of cherishing it and saving it for proper occasions or as a 'surprise' to yourself. You are slowly doing the same to this novel, it might not be noticeable right now, but eventually you will lose readers who get tired of you filling space with fluff or filler. Not every chapter has to be action or plot progression, but the opposite is just as true and not every chapter in between has to be sexually or romantically leaning. Please, for the long term health of your book, think of other 'slice of life' type chapters that aren't the MC's rubbing against each other in all the same ways but with different flowery words this time...

It's rather simple actually. You will see.

Alkole

Mans about to get a second omega level ability and i still can't figure out what he did in the dark dimension


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