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The Wanderer - 204

🕑 Added 2023-05-16 03:57:22 +0000 UTC

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Shawn Muradzi

It’s a shame tho because, I really like the story but it’s becoming too much and I don’t believe I’m the only one…other people will eventually drop it too, if it wast for his other story i wouldve already dropped and unsubscribed by now

Virb24

Yea I do the same. I just skim read through it to see if it ends or if it’s a whole chapter.

Shawn Muradzi

Yeah bro the sex scenes are getting repetitive and borning to point that I’m now skipping all chapters that are about just jean and Elijah and I’m probably not the only one…it’s fun at first but by thi so point it’s just draining like we get it they love eachother and are dependent to an unhealthy degree but do we have to shown this all the time?

Virb24

Thanks for the chapter. It’s your story and it might be your style. But It feels like almost all scenes with Elijah and Jean are all sex or them feeling each other up . I remember you talking about how this story is about Elijah and jeans feelings but just writing about their obsessive feelings and desire for sex then writing about them having sex gets repetitive. Over all I’m just wondering if there will be more of them interacting with the world around them more in upcoming chapters? Anyway thanks for all the chapters so far 😀

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter


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