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The Wanderer - 227

🕑 Added 2023-06-25 04:14:53 +0000 UTC

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Virb24

20 years old I think

Shawn Muradzi

I’d just assume that considering she hangs out with them in her free time she’d at least be close enough to call an friend by association…but okay you’re right we’ll say he’s not petty…but you can deny that it’s creepy, like how old was he before he died and decided to start banging a 16 year old

Lord Shiva is right. There is no reason for Elijah to just help Rogue simply because he can. They aren't friends and Elijah has already shown that he is not particularly 'heroic'. That isn't to say that he won't help her in any case but why do you expect him to help her escape misery for no reason at all other than that you pity her? Elijah isn't petty in his actions, he simply does not care about Rogue all that much.

Shawn Muradzi

Very true, he’s already a creep since he’s a grown man in a kids body having regular sex with kids so it wouldn’t put it past him to be petty…I like his character but after thinking about him being an adult in a kids body i just been thinking how creepy it is u know and since then I’m finding hard to like him anyway

Lord Shiva

It’s a slice of life fic, ur just gonna have to deal with it. Beside I like those chapters, it literally the whole point of this story.

Lord Shiva

Or you know…he doesn’t know her all that well. People just don’t help someone they don’t know that well for the sake of it. Unless they are a Saint or someone who can afford it. And safe to say Elijah so far has been shown to neither be a saint or someone that just helps someone for the sake of it unless he feels like it.

Shawn Muradzi

He’s a grown ass man in a child’s body being petty over a 16 year old girl who because of her genuine trauma and inner demons got jelouse and had a moment of weakness over her best friend who in her eyes was ditching her to go have everything she could never get so he needs to grow the fuck up if that’s the reason he won’t help rouge…like could you imagine never being able to touch anyone skin to skin for years on years? Then your BFF who was struggling in a different way to you meets a boy for less than a few weeks and is already leaving with him…at 16?!? She was wrong to be mean to jean but Elijah is just being a pretty prick

I think it’s because he doesn’t like her all that much

Clutch Shadow

I hope he pulls a Andrew Garfield Spider-Man on him with the basketball

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Elijahs about to make lebron James look like a amateur

As I said, the problem is not the pace of the narrative, but the repetition. For example, for 100 chapters there are overly similar love scenes between Elijah and Jin, and these scenes are stretched out over 1-2 chapters. I like the story, but the same 2 chapters about karaoke did nothing from any point of view. They just are and there is literally nothing new or any development in them. Selena loves Laura, who in turn loves Elijah. In fact, for most of both chapters they admired the singing. The first hundred and fifty chapters were much more interesting in terms of everyday life than they are now. And by the way, I've read all of this author's work.

Shawn Muradzi

I agree it’s a good story but so much slice of life that it’s easy to forget it’s a marvel novel

Nieus The God Of Magic

Impunity is absolutely correct, the issue you guys keep pointing out is only an issue for you guys, this is how the story is going to go and thats what you have to read if you want to continue, the author is the writer not you, if its too slow read something else, because i know i dont mind reading 100 to 1000 more chapters if the author continues the story that long

Impunity

There was a whole conversation about this a while ago captain. To reiterate, it only really drags if you look at as such. The pacing of the the story is described in the synopsis(on WN) and in the title of the fic. The whole point from my view is the full account of Elijah's or "The Wanderers" journey(assuming that'll be his title). Shortening it by speeding into space exploration within the next 10 to 20 chapters would take away from the overall flow of the book especially at this point. So rather than trying to get it sped up just relax and enjoy or go and read some of the author's other work if you haven't already, those are also great and likely more to your taste since they are faster paced. I on the other hand prefer a slower pace if it enhances the story which i believe it does in this case

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

On the one hand, these chapters are kind of important to the plot... On the other hand, you could just as easily fit all the events into one chapter. After 2 chapters about karaoke, I would like something more interesting. And, in principle, there is too much everyday stuff and water. It's hard to read such a big story when 4/5 of the story is literally about how Jean and Elijah adore each other. At the rate this story is going, God forbid we see Elijah begin his journey by chapter 400. I'm not trying to belittle this story, there's just too much everyday stuff... and it's repetitive. And lastly. I like Jean and Elijah's love... Only the description of their feelings is already boring. Author-san has written about them so often that some parts of the text are repetitive. I don't think I'm the only one who has noticed that.

Shawn Muradzi

Why doesnt Elijah help rogue with her powers using a barrier to teach her how to turn it off and on till she can do it herself? Life must be hell for her not being able to have any physical contact


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