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Commentary on ES5-(jpg)
🕑 Added 2020-02-23 17:08:33 +0000 UTCWhen I first started making the ES series, I thought about its ending it in about four episodes. Perhaps the mid of the ES4 could be the ending scene.
But if the ES series was popular, I wanted to increase the volume of the ES series. The last scene of ES2 was the device for it. It is Vics (the goblin with hair) was looking at Suzi at the end.
- Vics is already in love.
In ep 5, I added some clue for the next episode. At the end of the ES, you will know what it is.
Now let's talk a few things about ES5. I hope you are interested in this. ES5 can be divided into three parts. Karen part, Suzi part 1 (ES4 extension), and Suzi part 2.
Human Sam
Sex with Karen and a human man (Sam, same as the guy in Message2) is part of how Boer Orcs deals with her. I could skip this part and go straight to Spiky Orcs part, but I wanted to show you how Boer Orcs handled her. They gave her body with very little money to a poor man. Just kill him is even more straightforward for them than that. At that time, to them, she is not of great value. Since they already enjoyed her body, and they no longer find it interesting. It was only a bit of entertainment to see sex with Elf and a poor man.
There is no dialogue in my works, but she probably told him this. "If you don't have sex with me here, you'll die."
- Karen said, "If you don't have sex with me here, you'll die."
As mentioned earlier, Boer Orcs was taking her to sell her to Cult. Then they met Spiky Orcs and will lend her body a short time to Spiky Orcs.
- Elf Slave, Karen
I think these parts fit the "Elf Slave."
Goblin Vics
The second part, Suzi Part 1, is an extension of the ES4 endings. Of course, I skipped this part and went straight to Suzi part2. But this part was necessary for Vics to show his attitude toward their friends and Suzi.
- "don't touch her !!"
- Did she really hate having sex with other goblins? She has already had sex with her husband in front of another goblin. Isn't she ashamed of it?
And by showing that other goblins are making evil plans, this part could raise your expectations for the next scene. Without this part, I think part2 would have been a bit less erotic.
New Bride Suzi
First, I wanted to make Suzi, a new bride, feel innocent. I thought that the paradoxical action(masturbation as she read a book) she showed later would make a good contrast with her costume and give a very erotic feeling to you. A neat hairstyle, blue accessories, and a white & lace poncho could give this impression. I put on a couple of hairpins on her hair to give her a cute feeling.
- a very obscene book
The outfit, poncho, is not erotic because it doesn't reveal her figure. But I wanted to show you her paradox by giving the texture of white translucent lace to the poncho. White lace can provide a pure feel. It goes well with the new bride. But the translucency of the lace reveals her body. Also, there is no clothing inside so that you can see even her camel toes from various angles.
- Unintentional exposure, I made her pose as feminine as possible.
This contrast was New Bride Suzi's concept.
Location and lighting
The first character's position was somewhere else in the background. I wanted to make some changes to the background with these changes, but it was inconvenient to set the lighting. So I changed the character's position to be the same as in part1.
- the unused image
- the used image
Basically, in outdoor lighting, at least two directions are open to facilitate setting the lighting. Rendering only one scene is not a problem for any position in the background. However, when making several consecutive images, keep in mind the lighting of the intermediate and final scenes in advance.
Show or not show
It would be very erotic to masturbate in secret while pretending to read a book without her husband knowing. Besides, I thought dildo play would be more awesome. But another concern was whether I showed you her dildo from the first or not. I didn't show you a dildo at first because I thought it might be better to surprise you.
- ashamed Suzi and Goblin who noticed it.
- Surprise!!
Note that when rendering, the dildo was always precisely in her anal. Not Pussy It's easy to understand why not pussy if you think about Suzi part1.
Fruit, or wine
The green goblin prepared aphrodisiac and sleeping pills. The problem was how to deliver it. My first thought was wine. They were drinking wine together and mixing aphrodisiac with Suzi's glass. I purchased a potion bottle of the appropriate shape for it and finished setting up the material.
But it was later changed to fruit. The reason was Snow White, one of the fairy tales (you know, Snow White ate a red apple). The fruit seemed to be a more familiar metaphor.
- Red for her, green for her husband.
At first glance, the two fruits that the goblin handed over were red fruit for Suzi and green fruit for Vics. At this point, if Vics had eaten them without doubt, Suzi would have fallen asleep, and the story would have flowed a bit differently. The green goblin thinks Vics will doubt him and has already prepared two fruits with different effects.
- Here I intentionally showed you his wedding ring. It tells you once again that he is her husband.
If Vics did not doubt their friends, the ES5 would have been a bit less miserable for Vics.
Next Elf Slave
The storyline for ES is over. As schedule, the ES will end in ES8 or ES9. ES series is the most popular project I've ever created. On the other hand, I'm worried about when ES is over. Therefore, two new fantasy projects are in the works(concept stage). One of them is to let you know before ES is over.
Thank you.
* the attached file is "ES5-unused images", download it, please!
Comments
Jared999d
Thank you! I will make a detailed post on various points about the work whenever I have the opportunity.
taka
Thanks for this commentary Jared. Story makes it a lot more erotic. I would love to see more!!
Jared999d
Thank you very much! I will try to make it easier to understand next time. Your interpretation is also nice. A very exciting setting!!
