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Commentary on ES6
🕑 Added 2020-06-29 13:17:50 +0000 UTCHi, patrons!!
I want to post the commentary on ES6 mentioned previously.
Appearance of Suzi
As many patrons already know, Suzi's panties changed. her panties were the images below.
The reason for this change was to present several scenes. Please refer to the image below.
This is a technical issue, not a taste.
The color of the costume has been changed from white to black so that it contrasts with ES5. The color of the hairpin has also changed to red, and the color of the shoes has also changed. As one patron mentioned, it symbolizes Suzi's Lust.
Red Goblin
The three main goblins from ES are Vics (Suzi's husband), a green goblin, and a goblin with beards. Vics and green goblins have almost the same color-code. But Vics has hair.
The green goblin didn't appear because the green goblin had sex with Suzi in ES2, so this time, the red goblin appeared. And because he has a beard and different color from Vics, it is convenient for you to distinguish him from Vics.
I wanted to emphasize that the goblin has a tricky side, unlike the orc. There are several monsters in the ES series, but I wanted them to have different personalities. Such personality is similar to other fantasy content. But I thought it would be nice if it appeared in the sex scene.
The red goblin was able to take Suzi to Vics free and enjoy sex with her, but he wanted to bother her. So he deliberately decided to tease her where Vics could see. It is also vengeance for Vics not to share Suzi with them.
At first, I wanted to put in a scene what a red goblin inserts anal beads to her anal hole. But it would be better to delete this scene. In ES5, it is the same as Suzi reading a book while inserting a dildo. It is a small surprise.
Commentary for each scene
Why is she taking off her panties while reading a book? Vics wants to know more about this, but Suzi pretends to be sick and prevents Vics from asking. Suzi is indeed a bit annoyed by Vics, who breaks her secret pleasure.
In ES5, I described her as drinking a magic potion and having sex with Vics' friends due to the power of magic, not her will. It turned out that her eye color changed to red. The green color of her eyes, as before, indicates that the current situation is not only goblins but also hers.
In the image above, Suzi puts a slight smile on her face and closes the book. This shows that she wants sex with a red goblin. Suzi is fallen and desired Elf, not a noble and pure Elf. Already she has been conquered by the huge cocks of the orcs. Just sex with Vics is not enough to satisfy her lust.
The early of the Karen part overlaps ES5's Karen part, but the lighting and art styles have changed, so it is re-rendered. If you have ES5, you will know it at once.
I think the patron who read my comment will remember this. Boer Orc did not sell Karen to Spiky Orc(Karen's partner in ES6). If Boer Orc was selling Karen to them, the above scene could not be produced (The front Boer Orc is surprised to see them).
Boer Orcs decided to take a break from this ruin for a one night, and there were just Spiky Orcs there. Also, there was no physical conflict between them. Because the Boer Orc's chief(black orc with horns) and Spiky Orc's chief were friends.
The chief of Boer Orcs lends Karen to Spiky Orc for a while. By the next day, they will enjoy Karen's body. Spiky Orcs, as you know, treats her like a sex toy.
Vics prepares a small gift to comfort her, but at the same time, she is having sex with her husband's friend. In this contrast, two scenes were used together in one image.
Intentionally, the wedding ring was clearly visible.
She resents Vics, who returned earlier than expected.
She wonders if Vics noticed her previous behavior. At the same time, she is looking to see if the red goblin was hiding completely.
Suzi is very impressed with Vics' devotion. And naturally, she decides to have sex with him. This sex is not because of her sexual desire, but because of Vics' love.
The red hairpin depicts her lust, and the blue flower symbolizes Vics' love. So ES6's subtitle is Love and Lust.
Suzi never expects that the red goblin gets into sex with Vics.
When the red goblin's anal fisting excites her and Vics is surprised, she asks Vics to caress her right breast to keep him out of sight.
Anal fisting has completely released her anal hole. Vics is puzzled but never notices that it is due to his friend, the red goblin.
It is one of my favorite sex scenes. This is 1on1 sex, as well as threesome sex.
I agonized the last sex scene. Even gangbang scenes like ES5 were considered, but it is repeated with ES5. Of course, there would be patrons who want it. But I wanted you to have a new experience.
In this theme, often called NTR, the sense of immorality is added to the pleasure of the main character to maximize eroticism. In general, NTR is the scenes where a married woman(or a girl has a boyfriend), recalls her husband (or boyfriend) while having sex with another man. But this situation has already been covered in many contents. Then, because the goblin's body size is tiny, I came up with the idea of being 1 on 1 and being a threesome at the same time.
This scene will make Suzi a very immoral woman. She had sex with her husband while having sex with other men at the same time!!! As mentioned before, Vics didn't know exactly what happens to Suzi.
She feels intense remorse. After deep pleasure, a deep regret followed. So Suzi refuses to kiss him for feeling guilty for Vics. Also, she closes her legs so he can not see the cream pies. This is because cums are coming out of two holes. The last sex is the decisive reason for her leaving Vics.
I will leave the commentary on ES7 next month. Unused images need a post-process for good quality before being shared with you. I will upload it when it is complete.
Finally,
The advantage of the image set is that it is non-verbal, but it has obvious limitations in telling the story. I will try new features to improve telling the story in Fallen Ladies. I will tell you the details next time.
Certainly, without your support, there would be no ES series. Thank you very much for loving ES series and your support.
* All characters in my work are fictional characters.
* All acts are part of the role play and consensual.
Comments
Jared999d
Thank you for your interest :) For FL My current female characters will also be upgraded this time. Before ES8 is over, I will tell you a lot about it.
robinhood0111
That`s why Suzi leave Vics at last.We all hope that the unused images will be as interesting as the previous MESSAGE and ES5.As well,I`m looking forward to read the preview of FL.
Jared999d
I'm glad this post was helpful. What I want is to tell the story to you without this additional explanation. I will try for it in the new work (Fallen Ladies)!!
Jason K
Great commentary! Helps us to understand the story.
Jared999d
I am very happy that you like this. I like to conflict between two opposing emotions of female characters, like between pure and desire :) And Suzi still considers himself pure. In ES7, she hesitated when giving her body to a human man :)
Of course, Jenna and Karen are also very good! They are all my favorites, but I personally prefer Suzi.It's just a matter of taste, just like Karen and Jenna have a lot of fans who like them.
Jared999d
Thank you for loving Suzi. I hope you love other girls, Karen and Jenna, too. In FL, each female character has detailed settings. I think it will make you very interesting :)
I have seen many kinds of women, but only Suzi fascinates me so much. Thank you for creating this character. I love Suzi so much!In addition, I am curious and looking forward to the new content of Fallen Ladies.
