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Responding to Your Comments and FLTG
🕑 Added 2024-09-03 08:43:58 +0000 UTCHi, patrons! Thank you so much for your honest feedback. This kind of feedback (both positive and negative) is very helpful to me. I thought
Hi, patrons!
Thank you so much for your honest feedback. This kind of feedback (both positive and negative) is very helpful to me. I thought about replying to your comments but realized that there were a lot of duplicate responses, and they were long, so I decided to write a separate post.
ES Series
I already told you guys once when I made FL, but it's been a while, so I'll repeat it. The ES series had both advantages and disadvantages because it did not have text or dialog. The lack of text forced me to create unnecessary images to explain the situation. Also, while creating ES, I felt that if ES had text, I could have made more erotic and dramatic scenes.
FL Series
When I planned and conceived the FL series, I wanted to eliminate these shortcomings, so the text was included in FL Volume 1. I also inserted HUDs (character emotional states and cums), but as I worked on the series, I realized that HUDs didn't add much value and increased the work time, so I removed them.
At the time, I was struggling with the amount of footage Karen and Suzi had, so I decided to completely separate them and create relatively simple and interesting stories so that I could easily insert sex scenes between them. Initially, I had planned to include Jenna and completely separate the three of them, but this would have made the story too long and the project too big, so unfortunately, all of her scenes were cut.
P5G Series
P5G was actually made before I moved on to FQ(Fallen Queen) because FQ is a sequel to FL, and there were so many things I had to think about and decide.
So, P5G was going to be a more straightforward, shorter story than FL because while FL was well-received, its story was also too long and getting more and more complicated. So, I was going to take a plot from a classic fairy tale you can easily understand, and everyone knows and then twist it a little bit.
However, I made a big mistake at the beginning of the P5G series: I added some settings to the story that were already in the early stages, completely changing the story. The tale of P5G became complex and huge, and I couldn't take it back because it's tough to change something once it's released. Overall, the story is often neglected in erotic comics, but since FL was well-received for its story and sex scenes, I think my greed for P5G to have a better story than FL led to that mistake. What was supposed to be a three-chapter project grew to eight chapters. I knew this the whole time I was making P5G, but I couldn't abandon it.
Drop Out Of P5G
Indeed, P5G hasn't been well-received by everyone, and I've debated many times whether to abandon it and move on to my next project because it was difficult for me to make it. However, I don't think it's ever suitable for an artist to abandon a work, so I wanted to finish it properly, even if it's unpopular. Also, there are still fans who love P5G, and I did my best to make it a complete series, even though many people don't like it.
And there are probably some fans who are asking, what happened to MSG and MEO? If I had stopped making P5G, it would have been a wholly failed project, but MSG and MEO are still living projects. If FLTG is loved by you guys, MEO or MSG will be the next project of FLTG, and it will be made into a game.
What P5G Left Behind
There are definitely some good parts of the P5G series, especially Chapter 4, which is one of my favorite chapters. I don't hate NTR, but I haven't dealt with it much in my work so far (Suzi's part in FL is similar but different). Chapter 4 was a lot of fun to make, and I'm glad you guys did so well received it. The various outfits that Karen and Suzi wore will definitely help me in my future work, especially the Chain outfit, which is my favorite outfit and many of your favorites.
FLTG's Direction
As I've learned from my previous works, the direction of FLTG is clear. Some people may wonder why my next game is FLTG and not FQ. Unlike P5G, I wanted to make a simple story like ES. Since FQ is a sequel to FL, the story is bound to be complicated because it has to carry on the setting and story of FL.
FLTG is simple: a female character trains for sex, becomes more slutty, wears slutty clothes, and seduces men. The plot and story of FLTG give her a purpose.
Also, FLTG is a tale that takes place in one or two locations, so it doesn't require a lot of backgrounds and props. A lot of the dialog can be conveyed to you through standing images, just like in a typical visual novel game, so I can focus on creating the scenes we want to see (slutty clothes, nudity, and sex).
FLTG: Face and Body Shapes
I've gotten some feedback about Suzi's face and body shape, and I'll touch on this again. The previous version of Suzi's face had long, full eyelashes and dark eyeliner to hide her imperfections. I'm not going to show you a no-makeup image of previous Suzi (I want her to always be a pretty girl). The updated Suzi's face corrected her existing flaws, lightened her makeup, and shortened her lashes.
Notes: I'm not done with Suzi's face yet, minor tweaks are still going on, and I'll keep tweaking until she's completely to my liking.
Karen's body type will be a "Thicc" version, slightly thinner than her in P5G8, but overall she will have a stronger Milf vibe. Suzi will return to her old body type(P5G4), but her waist is too thin, so that will be fixed.
So far, Karen and Suzi's body types have been fairly similar, but in FLTG, they will look different. It's hard to follow your feedback on body types and faces. Some fans are bound to be disappointed because the feedback is contradictory. So, I will go with my preferences on these.
FLTG: Hardcore Features With Different Tastes
Another exclusionary feedback is nipple fuck. My work has always included hardcore and weird stuff, including oviposition, pregnancy, etc., and now I've added nipple fuck. As I've mentioned a few times, my work never deals with violence, rape, bestiality, etc. but I want to accommodate other things.
However, for those who find these things difficult to accept, I will include a toggle in the game to turn these hardcore traits (spawning, pregnancy, nipple fuck) off and on.
I'm curious how many patrons dislike and like these features, so I've opened up polls for this preference. These polls don't determine if these features will be included in the work, I just want to know your preferences.
FLTG: Your Participation
I want to increase your involvement in FLTG. It's not easy to do this with a monthly release, but the game is a long project, and there are many ways you can be involved in making the game.
Whether it's adding your name to the villagers or private, dirty conversations you have with Karen or Suzi, I'll be looking for your input, but unfortunately I can't make everything everyone wants, so I'll have to prioritize the Orc King tier, a few of my oldest Patrons, and the fans who have backed me the most so far. I'll get those things back in order and let you know.
I'm always deeply grateful for your support, and I want to make work for you, the people who support me. So please know that I'm always listening to and considering your feedback. Sometimes, I may be unable to accommodate your feedback or suggestions, but I'm never ignoring your input. I just can't implement them. One of my biggest regrets is when I have to turn down your suggestions.
Thanks as always!
Comments
Jared999d
Thanks! Her face will look better.๐
Dantes 555
I really like this image and her hairstyle
Jared999d
Thank you. As you say, I will continue to work on it with pride. Your words mean a lot to me.๐ญ
Jared999d
Thank you. As I make the game, I'll be asking fans for their input often and I'll make sure they can participate in the game in a variety of ways, but I hope you understand that I have to prioritize those opportunities.
Jared999d
Don't worry. Chain outfits are my favorite costume, so stay tuned for scenes of her walking around the village in a chain costume.๐
Jared999d
I'm really happy and grateful that you like the story of the P5G Series. There are actually a lot of hidden and omitted stories in the P5G series, and maybe someday I'll get a chance to organize them and tell them to you. I feel like the game is getting bigger and bigger, but I want to make it as awesome as I can. And like the other games, it will have multiple endings, and I'm working on some challenging content. Stay tuned, and thanks again!๐
zackkkky
proud of your work keep going!
Tonberry
Love the stories, I have text on myself I think it adds to it so Iโm glad the game will be story related
JJM
I hope new series have more chain outfit!!!
balancedtack
i applaud your dedication and hard work. i recently discovered you and your output seems consistent and high quality. in terms of story i think P5G is your best work. It feels more focussed than Fallen Lady and MEO. Like others i think Chapter 4 was the best by far. Foloq stealing away Suzi was great. I also respect your ambition with this game and the only concern is you making too much work for yourself by trying too much. That said, it would be great to see you develop multiple endings in the game. I think some of your audience want to keep the girls to themselves, making them have as little sex with 'other' characters as possible. Others might want to see them end up as whores for the bandits or playthings for the Orcs. I think this is one of the main benefits of making it in a game format- allowing the girls' stories to take lighter or darker paths, though, as i said, this is one of the things that will add to your workload.
Jared999d
There will be many raunchy, fun, and exciting situations in FLTG, so stay tuned.๐ Thanks!
Speed
Agree. Simple story is fine.
felix taferner
thank you for ur hard work! I also liked P5G Chapter 4 the most in the series. I have no problem with a simple story bc I enjoy ur work textless more ;)
