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Rewrite the Stars | Page 01
🕑 Added 2021-01-22 16:54:50 +0000 UTCIt's finally here! The first page of the first issue of this comic! Setting up the mood, almost like a prologue.
The page both in English and Spanish. Hope you guys enjoy! I'll be posting the sketch for page 2 next Wednesday, only on Patreon.
Comments
Lord Malachite
I really like the earnest dialogue. Lynn isn't someone to talk about her feelings openly, so this feels like a very special moment. One where she's wistful and making sense of it all in her head one more time, reminding herself the prices she's paid in life have been more than worth it. That perhaps she even found her better, truer self in the bargain. Or perhaps I'm reading too much into it. Either way, it's a fantastic hook!
Bmacky5
I love this! ❤️
Jonathan Sharp
Ooh I like this already. I like this little bit of dialogue between the two. It really sets the tone for how things are (or have) turned out. I absolutely love the premise that you're gonna be exploring their relationship from children to adults. Can't wait to see more!
