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CxC Chapter 13: Rage

🕑 Added 2024-12-22 17:59:07 +0000 UTC

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Colin Peden

Now, I know Yuta is mad at Freed and his bosses, but could he maybe spare Kalawarner? She is a business suit wearing big tiddy girl. She should be spared so she can be lewded. As for the fight? Holy shit! That has been the most creative use of devil wings I have ever read about. I understand it is needed for progression, but I personally think Freed should have gotten axed there. Still, an awesome fight, great comeback by Yuta. Lastly, is Asia going to be pervy from the get go? As to her question, YES!!

Chichi son

"What a shame." Freed swung his sword down, making the blood in veins go cold for a second before I noticed that Asia wasn't hurt, he cut her clothes in half. in my veins go cold?

Better World Project

Honestly love the chapter. 10/10 Awesome use of the wings. Freed is a scary early-game villain, but most fics go into overdrive ASP, so people forget that. Also, his later showings make him look like a smuck.. which isn't the best for one's image. However, damn, Yuta is mad. I knew we would feel that cold fury eventually, but now the fallen are as good as fried chicken. Should I get the ketchup or BBQ sauce? Can't wait for the power up. Also merry Christmas.

Rez

You're not wrong, but there also cant be a story if he dies to the first major villan , not saying he needs the omnitrix or a omnipotent ability but his fight with freed shows he needs to get stronger, and he shall the author is excellent at writting and power scaling fortunately

Evilhippy

Also, there wouldn't be much of a story if he became an omnipotent godling lol.

Dave Steele

Even tho freed is fodder in the grand scheme of things, it’s good that you portrayed his threat level accurately. He’s a highly skilled experienced fighter who is a clone of a legendary figure. If he wasn’t he’d be kind of scary.

dragongod0117

damit. guess he isnt poke-balling the fallen

Rez

It would be such a curveball if he rolled something of that power 💀

BronzDeck

Omnitrix as Ben had it? 9.9, Rarity is transcendant, aka. You are never ever rolling this, since it makes you immortal and omnipotent. Basic omnitrix without any aliens stored is 6.0 or Legendary.

Rez

Love the way natural weapons works , cant wait for that gold ticket from raynare and the rest of the fallen , our boy needs more assets to assist against the power scaling of this busted world, also is the omnitrix in the gacha? And if so what level of an item would it be?

BronzDeck

Creativity is the name of the game with the gacha, I love figuring out creative ways for the mc's to use their ability sets, its also why I limit ability slots too so I am forced to get creative When someone is normally so apathetic their rage is even fiercer, Freed and Riser will wish they faced Akira or Takumi. Yuta will personally crucify any of the fallen before he lets them touch a hair on Asia. Yuta wouldn't mind a cute former co-worker in the devil business is all I say. I am glad to hear that.

Vinicius Vieira

Damn, the use of his wings with natural weapos was cool as fuck, maybe he can shot his hair with Venom like a porcupine

Loghead101

A+ and kudos to you good sir. I’ve read a lot of DxD fics and never have I seen someone try and use there wings as weapons. And it was only two weeks ago I read a fic that did something different too with Rias and Sona sharing a servant. That aside hope we get some more creative use cases like this. And I was waiting for the ball to drop. No matter how apathetic or numb to the world one can be I don’t believe that there can be a true death to emotion. So was waiting for him to go ape shit. Right now it’s Freed and we all know Riser is gonna fuck around till he finds out. Also since Asia is going with Yuta early then that may mean she won’t have to die. Will she actually choose to be a devil then? Your last few doesn’t have her be one but Yuta doesn’t have a great deal of autonomy and Asia is already acting a little sinful with that comment so maybe. Good stuff man love it. I still love both your other fics but this one is slowly taking that top spot. If you don’t release anything soon than have a Merry Christmas!


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