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CxC Chapter 29: Ira

🕑 Added 2025-02-25 17:57:37 +0000 UTC

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Colin Peden

As many have said already, expies are okay, when in moderation and don't cross purposes with someone there already having that ability. I know you asked for suggestions, mine would be Yoruichi from Bleach. She could be Bobby Black the 3rd and teach him shunpo or a variant he could use. Just food for thought.

Rauko the varment

Expies are ok, just limit it accordingly since too much could ruin a good story. TFTC and I look forward to MOAR!!!

Dave Steele

Damn. Would’ve been cooler if [Transfer] was more than just “Haha power increase makes them moan!” The regen thing is just the tip of the iceberg, imagine transferring to a holy artifact and just disintegrating a devil, or transferring to the gravity in a set area, transferring to someone’s blood flow specifically and just making their bodies explode. It would have to balanced by requiring greater and greater complexity, but it would be sick.

BronzDeck

I share you opinion with expies when I read stories too, and I personally would only insert them if their background and powers made good sense with the story, and not insert them when they overlap their roles with other characters.

BronzDeck

Boosts and transfer work more like a baton pass, he wouldn't be able to transfer it to their natural regeneration but he could use it specifically to enhance his own if he trained.

Finn Ryan

I am generally against expies, i prefer characters made by you. obviously you decide what to do its your story, just my thoughts

Chichi son

it doesn't change shit What about it?." an extra period there

Jaded

Expies from what show? I think that matters the most really.Because different shows have different power scales and levels to strength. Like for example people from Bleach being real shinigami could be cool when Bennia is introduced.

Better World Project

Can't wait to see how yuta trains for his shot at Riser. Also expies are fine. Just don't go overboard as I seen some good fics go to heck by putting too many in there and losing the plot. If they are mostly minor then yeah go nuts.

Rez

Time to call in the training favor from Tiamat 💀

Loghead101

Love expies. Anytime someone would want an OC I would much rather them take an expie from some where and make them fit. I don’t see any issue with doing that in Isekai type stories because nowadays, everyone can just believe it’s all part of some multiverse or omniverse that some beloved character can have an alternate in other worlds. That and I just never really cared for OC’s unless it from their point of view. However, I myself would only use expies for a role that some other character can’t be used for it or you will try some original content with those expies in mind. Also, I hope Bobby Black the 3rd comes in on the training camp. Could be a good opportunity for a certain mischievous cat to make their proper debut and possibly help another reserved cat get past her issues and get some solid pulls. Good stuff man and while Riser is a threat to Yuta, you really hyped him up in the last two fics so he doesn’t need to be that dangerous.

Dave Steele

Had a thought that wasn’t really relevant to the story since Yuta lacks the Boosted Gear, but could someone theoretically transfer their boosts into someone’s natural regeneration, and cause them super cancer? Anyway great chapter, and on expíes the source material allows all kinds of them since all of the supernatural is real, so crossovers don’t conflict at all. Character bloat might be a concern, but as long as they’re relevant and don’t take away screen time from the cast they’re fine.


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