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MHA Chapter 53: Pink Fever
🕑 Added 2025-03-21 05:51:07 +0000 UTC~Kotaro Hakari~
I sat there in stunned silence for a moment, just taking in the sight of Toga and Ashido dressed up in nurse costumes.
"Mina? What are you doing here?" I couldn't help but voice my thoughts, I suspected she held a crush towards me as the girl who I had known for the longest other than Toga but I hadn't expected her to come into my hospital room together with Toga dressed up slutty nurses.
She blushed a fierce red, as if regretting ever doing this but also sticking to her guns as she tried to face me with confidence.
"E-ehe, I have come to nurse you Hakari-kun." A moment later however her facade fell apart "-It was Toga's idea!" And she immediately cracked under the pressure that I didn't even apply, pointing to Toga while blushing, Toga simply held her grin.
"Yep! You see Mina-chan has been wanting a piece of you for a looong time but she hasn't been able to just say it!" "H-hey!" "So I thought, why not help her get a move-in? I am sure you won't refuse a sexy pink nursing you back to health right Hakari-kun?"
Toga wriggled her brows while I nodded. Truly she was the best wing woman a scumbag like me could ask for.
"Yes!" I put my most shameless face on, if I did not play along with the scenario Toga had set up for me I could not call myself a man. "Please take care of me, nurse."
Mina looked visibly relieved as I obviously expressed my want for her and seemed to regain her confidence. But before she could fully regain her bearings I decided to strike.
Nothing Wrong Here™ dont fail me here now!
~~~~~~r18 - Start~~~~~~
I pulled my blanket off and ripped off my pants along with it, exposing my completely erect and raging penis. I was very thankful at the moment that we were inside of a personal hospital room that Nezu had reserved for me knowing my tendency to get mauled spectacularly at every opportunity.
Mina's black and gold eyes widened as she took in the sight of my erection throbbing violently, beckoning her as she walked over to my bed, leaning over the side with a sultry look that I could tell she had practised, probably with the help of Toga.
"W-well, I did agree to take care of you!" She looked at me in affirmation, gulping all the while. "Can I touch it?" I nodded and Mina poked my dick with her cool finger, inspecting it curiously like a cat.
"Whoa... it's so warm."
She slid a finger down my length making it throb. She then wrapped her finger around my shaft, her hand was so smooth and cool, but then Mina seemed to get an idea as she perked up and suddenly her hand wrapped around my shaft got even smoother and slicker like a hand pussy(?) What the fuck do I call that?
"This should feel better right? I covered my hands in slimy neutral acid. I hope you enjoy this Hakari~"
With confidence renewed seeing my pleased expression she stroked my length, and she was giving me the best handjob I have ever felt, smooth, wet and with good grip thanks to Mina being an athletic girl. She was leaning over and attending my cock with an eager expression while Toga was on the other side of the bed, propping her chin up with her hand, watching us.
"Mina! I'm cumming."
She stroked ever faster before a stream of cum erupted from my penis, covering her breasts and face in my jizz but my penis refused to go down like this. I had fared far harder before and it refused to back down from a challenge. Mina inspected my jizz on her breasts with a wondering expression and a blush of arousal.
"Whoa... it's so sticky and warm. And it hasn't gone down either. Oh! I think I got another idea. I think you'll like this Hakari-kun~" Mina was taking to this whole sexual interaction thing incredibly well, she was even taking charge on her own.
She got on the bed, sitting on my thighs with a sultry expression before popping open her nurse outfit, revealing her pink breasts topped with slightly darker pink nipples that looked very juicy. She pushed her arms together emphasizing her size.
"So, do you like it Hakari-kun? The girls back in middle school used to say I looked freaky with my pink skin, but you don't seem to mind." She wore a smile seeing the focused expression on my face.
"They must have said those because they were jealous. Because for me, you are beautiful Mina." She blushed but smiled at my words before I grabbed her arms. "Now, let me prove my sincerity."
"Prove it how-? Uohhh~~"
I pulled Mina towards me and placed my mouth on one of her pink nipples. Sucking and licking furiously to her arousal, I felt her body respond to my actions, her hips bucking on my thigh. Her hands grabbing my head for support, lewds moans that she couldn't reign escaping from her mouth.
"Mh~ Hakari~kun~ s-something weird is gonna happen~"
I didn't know what before I felt a taste in my mouth, only to realize Mina's nipple was actually leaking acid(?). but even though I was ready to thug out my mouth being disintegrated to keep sucking I realized that whatever acid was coming out of her nipple kind of tasted nice, a bit like citrus even.
I looked up at Mina who covered her face with her hands while blushing a tomato red, absolutely mortified.
"S-sorry Hakari-kun, this just kinda happens sometimes with quirk, sometimes when I exercise or m-masturbate you know? Sorry, it its-"
My grabbed Mina's arms and pulled them from her face before kissing her furiously, I released the kiss a moment later and gave her a roguish smile.
"I love it, Mina, it's so sexy. Your body is so sexy, so let me keep tasting it." She nodded as I returned to sucking and caressing her breasts before Mina took her turn.
"Well, since you like my breasts so much Hakari-kun, how about I give you a different taste with them?"
With that, Mina pulled back a little to put herself between my legs before wrapping her plenty large breasts around my shaft and lubricating them with her negligibly mild acid that felt like lube. She pushed them together and started stroking my dick with her lubed breasts. Her soft and slick breasts and the pressure from her hands made it an incredibly pleasant experience for me.
"Do you like it Hakari-kun? My breasts stroking your cock? I thought about this in my room, you know? I thought about using my quirk like this at night when you taught me about it." She talked dirty as she stroked my cock with one of the most heavenly boobjobs I have ever felt, her quirk was basically made for the bedroom.
She licked the tip while stimulating the shaft with her breasts, this continued for several minutes until I felt the dam ready to burst. Cumming all over Mina's face and breasts once more. Adding another coat of white paint onto the pink girl.
"Haah~ how'd you like that Hakari-kun? Think you're ready for the main course?"
I raised an eyebrow, she wanted to move that fast? I knew I dove into it full force with Setsuna but she was kind of a fast-paced girl anyway.
"You want to go all the way, Mina?" She shuddered in excitement but nodded.
"Yyyup~ I came here preparing for it after all. I want that cock in me big boy~! I don't think I can stand being this horny so you better take care of me."
I nodded sagely, if this was what Mina decided, it was what Mina would get.
Ignoring my wounds and still unhealed body I moved with supernatural speeds, flipping Mina over, making her face down on the bed before pulling up her skirt and tugging her panties down. I slid two fingers over her slit, making her arch her back from the stimulation and smirked.
"You are already completely drenched, you were looking forward to this weren't you?"
Mina moaned as I massaged her buttocks but still wiggled her ass enticingly.
"Can you blame me~ now f-fuck me already! I have waited too long for this!"
No more needing to be said, my hands gripped Mina's waist before pulling her closer to me, the tip of my dick rubbing against her completely wet and slimly soaked pussy, eliciting moans and shakes from her before thrusting into her.
"Auhhh~ Fffuck y-yes!"
I buried myself in Mina, and her feel was completely different from all the other girls I have been into. Her insides were completely slimly and hot, while not as tight as Midnight the slimy muscles inside of her contracting as they tried to milk my dick certainly gave a unique and pleasurable experience. Of course, I still found her weak points without any problem, my tip scraping up against her insides, stimulating her sensitive spots and drawing out guttural moans from Mina as she came relentlessly.
Plap Plap Plap!
My hands wandered further up, grabbing Mina's breasts and pulling her closer to me while I started pumping harder and deeper into her, her feeling no discomfort at all as she was more lubricated than any other girl would ever be as long as they weren't made of literal slime. I tweaked her nipples as I whispered in her ear, blowing into it slightly as I heard her moan audibly.
"Mina, I'm going to blow your back out."
I growled into her ear, knowing how much she was into my deep voice, being rewarded by her insides clenching even further as I smiled and gave up tweaking her breasts and instead hugged her torso to me to get even more leverage, thrusting with all of my might into her like an animal as I held her hot, sweaty and slimy body against my own.
"Ah~! Ah! Ah! Ah~ I'm gonna go stuuupid~!"
"Mina, I'm gonna cum in you. Take it."
With that, I hugged her tightly against me while filling her pussy up with a water bottle's worth of jizz as she shook like she was in a blizzard against me, having the biggest orgasm in her life.
After a solid 20 seconds of ejaculating, I released Mina's body as she went limp, flopping onto the bed and out of my cock, making cum drool out of her pussy. Despite the pounding I gave her, she seemed to not be sore at all. Marvellous quirk.
"Wooow~ You really went at poor Mina-chan without mercy huh Hakari-kun? That was so hot! But since poor Mina-chan is out of commission I wonder how you will sate your poor lusts now."
Toga teasingly sing-songed before climbing onto the bed and plopping her ass on my thighs. Undressing from her nurse outfit with extreme speeds.
"You won't mind if I occupy Hakari-kun while you rest right Mina-chan?" Toga smirked toward Mina who was still looking drunk.
"Yesh~~"
"Whelp! You heard her Hakari-kun!"
I chuckled and kissed Toga. This girl really was insatiable.
~~~~~~r18 - End~~~~~~
⚀—⚁⚂⚃—⚄—•⚅•—⚄—⚃⚂⚁—⚀
~Kotaro Hakari~
...I admit, I have definitely gone overboard.
I couldn't help but think that I watched Toga lying down on the sofa in my private infirmary room while Mina was tucked away in my bed. All the while I, the patient was just sitting in front of the window and soaking it all in with Chlorophyte to regenerate from my severe internal damage from using stack.
Regardless, I still felt like a king for blowing out Mina and Toga's backs while being almost as injured as All Might. Every day, I thanked Nothing's Wrong Here™ for making sure people ignored strange sounds that they heard coming from my room. Without it, my life would have been way harder.
And my system agreed with me always, and I also had to get my reward for beating Shoto, and what better time than now?
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Feat Achieved! Give therapy to and defeat Shoto Todoroki
+1x Platinum Ability Gacha Ticket
Feat Achieved! Add Mina Ashido to your and claim her virginity
+1x Gold Trait Gacha Ticket
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Indeed, it was all worth it, I decided to roll the lower-ranked ticket since it was tradition to go from the bottom up.
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Rolling Gold Trait Gacha Ticket...
A rare trait!
[Aware]
|Rarity: Rare|
You have an enhanced sense of awareness, far beyond the average. You can easily tell when there is something wrong with your body, it is hard to catch you by surprise and you can more easily tell what is going on around you. It's like you are paying attention to your surroundings at all times.
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Oh, yet another sensory ability for me, it's only my... 4th one? First Shivers, then Byakugan, then Scary Monsters. Well, more senses were always good in my thoughts. Surprises are never appreciated unless they are the ones that Toga gives me.
Well, hopefully, the Elite ability Shoto gives me is better.
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Rolling Platinum Ability Gacha Ticket...
An elite ability!
[Seek Guidance]
|Rarity: Elite| |Class: Thinker|
When this ability is active, you are able to view commentary of those who were, could have been or would have been. The commentary can be helpful or even deceitful. You might find text written on the ground in front of a treasure informing you it's trapped, or text showing you the location of a hidden wall, or a text telling you to stand in front of a trap. Basically the messages from Eldensoulsborne Games.
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Uhh, that's certainly an ability? How is that even going to work?
Curious, I turned it on and immediately saw text written on the ground in front of the infirmary bed Mina was blissfully lying on.
'Cum ahead.'
...I really wonder what I expected.
A/N: Mina finally got her chapter and is officially a part of the harem! I decided to go all in with this one. Do you guys prefer shorter scenes in the middle or a chapter really focusing on the r18 scene? I would love to hear your thoughts about it, me personally, I am partial to both so your input would be appreciated.
Other than that, Hakari's rolls are dubious as always, any more thinker abilities and Hakari is going to start gaining metaphysical awareness but I am glad that he got Seek Guidance because frankly, it is hilarious as hell. Also, if you guys want to, you can also give your own advice to Hakari that I may or may not add to his Seek Guidance when he activates it. So if you are guys interested in that feel free to leave to your suggestion or guidance below
Comments
dragongod0117
Finger but whole
BronzDeck
Depends, if the ability is only about going to another world and its limitation it can even be. If it is something like going to another world randomly and have a cooldown limit it can even be Elite or Epic, a portal ability that lets you world travel is Legendary. It wouldn't turn them into requiem, but thats how I interperet it, if you are writing you can make it so they requiem instead. But in the list they just get upgraded, hell, one of the newest abilities I added to the list is just an upgraded Sethan called Shadows of Time. Those look like good suggestions, I will probably add them all things considered. Most devil fruits are already in abilities, just under slightly different names sometimes. They arent in items because I didn't want to deal with adding 90 items but I might. Ratio is only good if you are experienced with it, creating a critical strike on a very specific condition is not that great compared to most Rare abiltities and need auxiliary abilities to be worth it. Dismantle is not just a ranged cleave, unlike cleave it can't instantly kill someone and it doesn't automatically adjust. Where Cleave has instant destruction Dismantle has travel time and is essentially an invisible wind slash.
dontenglish
Also question what’s the lowest possible rank to get a ability which can possibly enable someone to go to another dimension or universe also another question so I got the power boost an I was wondering for the like stands and such which meet its requirements would it create a requiem or would it convert the stand into just a better version of it self simaler to like a act stand and finally a couple power suggestions from me for a uncommon power it’s called bat belt and it would let you get an produce any common or uncommon non magical items which you’ve have touched before an produce it if it best suits the situation your in atm another is just a basic hammer space yes I know there’s a inventory already in the roller but I was thing this would be a rare or uncommon one which has the downside of it weighing you down based off what your carrying and also only being to store weapons and stuff also I haven’t seen any from my rolls but I sugest adding to both the item and abilty category’s devil fruits and there abilities maybe having it so there’s two versions in the abilty section one being awakened and other being basic whilst the item version lets you train it up an have it permanently simaler to modified compound v but at the downside of the normal devil fruit weaknesses also another thing which is more like a critic I think ratio dismantle and cleave are all either ranked too high an or low for example dismantle is the ranged version of cleave so in theory it should be better whilst for ratio something which makes a gaurented critical hit/weakness on a target should not be ranked as uncommon I’d sugest maybe a rare or even possibly elite
BronzDeck
Thanks to Shivers and Awareness he can basically ask Destiny's Child and it will give him a very detailed vision of an oppurtunity, he no longer has to be specific, he can just ask for something cool and Destiny's Child will bankroll him
BronzDeck
"Father ahead." "Rat ahead, therefore, parent." "Time for family."
BronzDeck
Nurses, I accidently forgot the edit that part of the draft.
Quyan640
I wonder if there’s a synergy between any or all the sensory skills with Destiny Child, allowing for more or better uses.
dontenglish
I have one thing to say the next time he’s with Nezu an he has guidance on all the father related comments will hit Hakari off the head
Alex I
Slight issue at the start, are they dressed as cheerleaders or nurses? Because you used both.
Better World Project
Also thanks for the advice. I really appreciate it. BTW jjk has a built in plot device of stronger heros equal stronger bad guys. Plus mixing villains together sounds fun. 😉
Better World Project
Oh no I understand. Yeah you're right I have a different scaling then you do. I'm using the stats to keep it more balanced. Like a two year old even with super strength doesn't have the mass to use it properly. The curses he got randomly genreated thru chat gpt as a way to give him something to improve on so he isn't OP even with that many skills. Yes he easily could reach sirzechs tier but I imagine the skills are weaker versions of the orginals. Because the abilities are based on your mana stat which he doesn't even know cause curse. That and I'm doing a rhing where they came from doomed timelines, so they never reacehed their full potential and he has to do that on his own. He will have to struggle also with A hard limit I imposed but am hiding with the max he can get with abilities, traits, items and skills. Making him give some up to comrades to keep the better stuff, or fusing things to keep open possibilities. I honestly rolled all of the stuff he started with and his race was from a set of 20 I created. 20 is OP but he will suffer the most agonizing odds. Blown away by diegos beginner's luck. Yeah I thought the emojis might be a nice touch but I'm reconsidering it. Cause they do take you out. I'll leave as a mind plan thing. Maybe. Probably not.
Colin Peden
I like both, sometimes the short scene works better with the story, sometimes the whole chapter being r18 can be a good change of pace. It is more how you feel it works out best. As for this chapter, AWESOME!! Mina got her time and with her go getter attitude it felt like a good fit to go all the way. I hope she gets more r18, maybe a scene with her, and Mirko going at it with Hakari. I know he doesn't have Mirko yet, bit it is only a matter of time.
BronzDeck
Altough it isn't exactly my cup of tea(Not really a mass crossover kind of guy) but I like what you did. Altough I have some suggestions you can feel free to ignore them. In my opinion, using emoji's while writing feels off, especially because they sharply contrast the text based descriptions and take you out of immersion with the story. I personally would replace the emoji's like Smiley face with my lips quirked with a smirk or I couldn't help but smile to keep the immersion. Also, this is strictly from the original interpretation of the gacha and not the way you are probably using it but... I don't get his complaints or worries with the amount of stuff he got? With Peak Specimen, Surging Magic Power, Iron Skeleton and Berserk, on top of being a fallen angel he would be strong enough to splatter any Special Grade curse from JJK with a single punch, Peak Specimen and Surging Power would also make him the single most talented and gifted fallen angel in history, basically the Sirzechs of fallen. Of course, I definitely understand if you want to take the gacha scaling a different way to make sure the story goes smooth, hell that's what I do with MHA. Still, good luck with your writing.
Loghead101
Honestly. Why not just give it to your other protags as well. Feels like it should be a staple. Make it souls like. Like “The Multiverse has been Irrevocably Changed” and just give them the perk. Given the perk is Soulsbourne it would be good for a laugh to fuck with them.
BronzDeck
I mostly agree, I prefer to do smaller scenes all around for fun and full chapter features of important scenes for the girls. I already do implied sex a lot for Gambler but maybe I should do it for CxC too I suppose. They appear as messages in front of people when he is close to them, so if he met Rumi and had it active there would be text on the ground in front of her feet like "Battle Maniac ahead, therefore try battling" or if he was in front of Aoyama it would be 10 messages making fun of him for being french and 5 calling him a traior. Though with the echoes part you gave me a new idea for an ability. He will figure out something similar next chapter though. ...Yeah I... ...kinda overdid... ...it with the... ...'s this time, I'll... edit the chapter to fix... it. Some of the examples I have for the targets for example are: Jiro "Music Lover ahead, therefore try instrument" or for Momo "Sheltered rich girl ahead, vulnearble to teasing" or for Bakugou "Brat needs correction ahead". This is definitely one of my favourite abilities to get pulled.
Loghead101
Both types of sex scenes are fine. Every girl should get her dedicated chapter when it’s her time and any time you want to write something special like threesomes and orgy. But you could also end of a paragraph making it clear that yes sex has happened, not that we need to see it. Just use your judgement. And does Seek Guidance work with people? If so then the occasional tips on how someone is feeling or a good response to them would be. If it decides to troll him then nothing that could hurt or ruin a relationship. Also, I hope it shows the echoes as well. Like Hikari thinks do something might be stupid and he sees an echo of him doing it before death or injury happens. Also emote sighs everywhere. A few do work so he has to do it every time. As for examples, they have to be vague but it could try to help lead Izuku to making bigger leaps in judgement about the truth of his quirk, the right words to say to Iida so he doesn’t go to hard in the hunt for Stain, and maybe gift ideas for people. Honestly the possibilities are endless with their application. Faults that can be exploited and secrets so vague that when said throw people’s perception into disarray.
Better World Project
Another great chapter as always. I would say a mixture of both. I think for the main get into the harem or important mile stones need a whole chapter. Small stuff that is their daily fun time should be brief. I think hakari is getting redundancy is useful in case someone has a counter to one skill. Also the souls messages are gonna be hilarious. Do more pls. Also in case you missed it here is the link to my story I'm using to beta test the gacha system. Let me know what you think. https://www.quotev.com/story/16954662/JujutsuXSlayer/1
