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Chapter 7: Highschool of the DxD

🕑 Added 2023-05-25 16:06:01 +0000 UTC

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BronzDeck

The heart cards are rare drops from chests and enemies

Greekfirefly

Overall though I’m really liking the direction the story is going with the harem idea. The only think I would warn you about is be careful with what you give out as rewards for the relationship check marks. I feel like it would make the most sense to have these rewards be both tied to the girl he is getting the reward from getting close to them but also be somewhat be power scaled to the girl as well. An example would be let’s say he gets a human girl that’s really good at cooking all the way up to 100, perhaps the 50 reward could be a boost the the levels to his cooking skill and the 100 reward be something physical that could maybe boost a skill in this case the cooking skill and also be a symbol of the relationship the MC has formed with the cooking girl at the same time. Like with the pervert glasses girl the 50 reward could possibly be the MC getting her really unique but not really to useful ability to tell a person’s sizes merely at a glance. That’s all I can think of saying at the moment will add more if I can think of more things to suggest later.

Greekfirefly

Also I think you should give a little clarification where he got the Silver heart card. I’m assuming he got it from the 2 gatcha pulls he did at the end of the last chapter, but it’s not really clear where he got the card from

Greekfirefly

Great chapter, want to mention something but I’m not really sure if this was a mistake or done intentionally “barely leaking barely” think you put two barely here on accident and it seems someone else also commented on this.

Kraxis93

Great story so far I'm looking forward to more😁

James French

Real quick you might want to change the sentence where Sona is initially brought up to ‘I am barely leaking any cursed energy, if at all’

James French

Thanks for the chap!


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