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Chapter 51: Grayfia

🕑 Added 2023-08-13 20:17:30 +0000 UTC

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Andy Smith

Never been more disappointed in this story till this chapter. Maybe you shouldn’t have destroyed the essence of the gamer system. It’s way weaker than the original. Kinda sad he had make this decision. This whole pathetic MC storyline has started to wear me down.

S

Can't help but feel the same as those above. Chapter 45 was hype, he'd finally had enough after being treated like an inferior being, he proclaimed they were his enemies and he wanted death and revenge... yet here not only did Grayfia threaten to execute him -yet again- without him even batting an eye, but after 50 chapters of being steadfast, he happily caves and settles on Grayfia being a part-time maid as recompense? I'm sure I'm going to enjoy what you have in mind for the future, I was just hoping for something more satisfying, taking his own route and sticking to his own methods, maybe finding a solution to Riser and bypassing the rating game entirely, rather than relenting and going along with canon.

MaisiIsu

It was going so well, but it got immediately ruined. I'm sry but hentaing up Grayfia is not a satisfying revenge but cringe. He is literally showing that he is sexually desiring some bitch that treated him like the lowest scum in the world. You know after the last chapters I expected him to finally man up, go on a training arc and start to plot against the underworld, eventually destroying it, crushing Sirzechs and his shitty wife with it, and then eventually kill them. We could have gotten a great, understandable villain MC for a change, great conflict between him and characters like Rias, but instead we got this shit. Biggest sip of dissapointment juice this month for sure.

Rolando Mejia

I’m liking how his system/ innate technique is now much more agreeable with him after he awakened it, or I guess found out about?

BronzDeck

If you read again you will note the path he chose does not list a race change.

Owlfurret

You lost me on this one. I was really hoping for a fic where the mc doesn’t join the devils.

James French

Someone’s been on Shiro’s server lmao

Greekfirefly

Looking forward to the later chapters

Greekfirefly

I wouldn’t really say that this is that dark of a think to do, also since he chose the pride path, wont he still get a race change?

Bombasticlambast

I’m not surprised since Akira’s a jujutsu sorcerer he has to be a little wrong in the head to be a good one to easily generate negative emotions to fuel his curse techniques

YeeetPrayLove

Great chapter. Excited for the next one.


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