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DxD Chapter 11: Vitality or Viritlity?

🕑 Added 2024-03-19 22:21:46 +0000 UTC

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Clyde

Man, Takumi should really create that fire glove already and use the water/ice glove as a combination attack of Flashfreeze or using it to create blue fire, if it even works like that, that is. Anyway! I can't wait for the next chapter, and I actually think I prefer this DxD book over Necromantic. The pace is slower, but I also feel like it's just the perfect amount to not feel like you're being held back while reading it. And I'm really looking forward to him mutating his body, If he even will that is, and becoming some weird fucking cool ass chimera!

Loghead101

Well man, I gave it some time and with all the chapters you put out, I can honestly say I prefer this much more to Necromantic. The pace is a bit slower but not so slow that the plot drags on. I much prefer Takumi’s more cautious but driven personality over Akira arrogant and reckless one. No matter how fun he was to read I just couldn’t stand Akira and how he would bash through all his problems with a reckless abandon. Takumi while confident isn’t so full of himself and I can appreciate how he is trying to be careful but not stressing over the situation he is in. And Iter Melius is a nice way to make this a pseudo gamer-fic without giving too much potential to become too strong. And while I do appreciate munchkining I hope that things won’t get too easy and Takumi will mostly have to rely on intelligent use of his skills rather than brute force. Also, please make him less of a solo act and help others grow strong too. That’s what’s great about any crafting protags. They can help everyone get stronger in more unique ways. Now while I have no doubt he will get the Boosted Gear and maybe Absorbtion Line, I do wonder whether he will need to become a Devil. He could opt to become Rias’ contract magician and she could be allowed to use him in the rating game since she has so few members. And if he stays human he can be more of a third party that can work with all the factions. His potions, elixirs and whatnot would be all he needs to get immortality. Considering Gabriel is one of the pairing I think that’s the way you might go. All said and done I have higher hopes for this fic. Thank you for what you have wrote and can’t wait for more. Have a good day!


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