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DxD Chapter 25: Discipline

🕑 Added 2024-04-13 22:59:25 +0000 UTC

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Daddy Ivan

Can’t he also boost the potions after creating them? A simple double on that Life Potion would be killer

Sir_dood134

milf aphrodisiac-> is that supposed to be mild? Or just a VERY specific aphrodisiac?

Rolando Mejia

It’s a murder of crows, not a gaggle

Loghead101

The 18+ scene was alright. Ray are needed a little something to put her ego in check. My only hope in regards to the trio is that they won’t simply be there in the background like in your Necromancer fic. At times I’d forget that they were a thing. They were voted to stay so give them some more relevancy. Let them talk with MC and other characters, maybe they have some surprising talents that could help him in his endeavors. If he really wants to help them grow stronger then let them help with excursions. Because they didn’t have any before in the previous fic. My philosophy is if a carry is important enough to stick around then their needs to be a purpose to them, no matter how minor it is. Overall great chapter, enjoying things thus far and can’t wait to see where it goes.

Dragedogg

I prefer fewer 18+ scenes with more details/quality over 18+ every 2 chapter. The story needs progress after all which is why i prefer 1 or 2 scenes per character after that its okay if they dont get a whole scene for a while. I know its a balance thing but to be fair i prefer less 18+ if it means the story progresses.

Rauko the varment

A week to tame and have her bouncing on his lap? Psh, it'll take a few days to a few hours depending on the goodies he could dangle in front of her~. Raynare craves for power so much that there are only a few lines she's willing to cross.

Clyde

I think the 18+ scene was nice... and hot. But I'm glad my boy finally got his lifespan back and then some, and I wouldn't mind seeing him spank/tame Raynare some more. Also, him having unlimited access to fallen angel materials is one helluva godsend. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and more 18+ scenes!


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