Take Flight, Erasa?
🕑 Added 2024-02-25 15:17:09 +0000 UTCStory and writing by ME
Illustrations by TheWriteFiction
Since I loved the artwork my friend came up with (and I enjoyed editing it), I requested a short comic from him to cap off this month.
I always fancied Erasa, so this'll be an interesting piece.
Comments
Jesus
Will we see new pages in the future
Tobi
Pg 5. Sigh I knew from cover Gohan going get good romp from erasa she just can't go one night without can't she :/
Jesus
I can't read the new pages on the app or website on patreon even tho it says its 11 pages I only keep seeing 8 or 9 pages
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 9* 🤯🤯🤯 OHH DAYUM!! She’s scarfing it down like she’s going to lose it bruh 😎
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 8* 😗🎵 lookit dem Melons work that 5 Dollar Foot Long
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 7* Shokuji o tanoshimu ☺️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️ 😏🍆🍆🍆
Jesus
Can't wait to see this story completed
Juan Cuellar
can you please continue this doujins
Jesus
Will you be making new pages of this one as well
GamerLegend09
🤣
Giorno Giovanna34
Pg. 6: I can't think of a more obvious sign that a girl likes you than her giving the "I don't mind if its you" line.
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 6* 😅 and we’re veering off course from flying lessons…..😁 not that I didn’t see that coming, 😉 it’d be nice if Erasa was the next girl I see Gohan Bang in the sky other than Videl (😄 it was the GT variant of them Banging in the Sky from said Doujin)
GamerLegend09
I see them but I’m just not getting notifications for updated pages in the app
Mrryn
Yeah, I just checked and it works fine checking Patreon through a browser even on mobile. It's just the app that isn't updating for some reason
TWF
I suspect it's an app thing. I opened it in internet/google on my phone and it worked. Let me know if the app manages to refresh properly.
Paul
Same problem
Mrryn
Must be just an app thing. Even the email noti says 6 images, but pulling up the app even from that link still just shows 4. Sadge
TWF
You're right. I'm having problems with this on my phone, not on my computer though.
Mrryn
Is it just me, or are others getting notis linking to this but still only seeing the same first 4 pages?
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 5 Pt. 2* 🤨 also I’m a little surprised I thought Gohan had the tolerance of a saint by this point, or is this before he developed a safely tolerance to nude shenanigans?
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 5* 😛 This’s the Best, 😆 Wardrobe malfunction moment, 🤩 EVER!!!! (Now confirmed, 😤 Busty Blondes are a new hot fetish for me)
Juan Cuellar
ok i love this
Luis2002
Video and 18 comic to be continue????
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 4* **Top Right Panel** 😳 she’sonherknees! **Top Left Panel** 😗 oh my god you could Grind meat off tho- 😵 GAH!! **Middle Right Panel** 😬 from this angle, it looks like something is entering through the valleys **Middle Left Panel** 🫢& From this angle they look like apples 🍎 **Bottom Right Panel** 🤥 & from this angle, they look like melons 🍈 🍉 **Bottom Right Panel** 🫠 Helloooo Doggie
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 3* 😳..🙄😳🙄..😳……..ok I admit it…. Erasa Doujins are a HOT!! 🥵 Thirst Trap
GamerLegend09
*Pg. 2* **all 4 Panels** 😄 ah… way to show off them lethal Weapons Golden Boy (😏 luv it) **Bottom Left Panel** 🤩🤩🤩oooo that’s a cool new Design for a hover Car
GamerLegend09
*Cover/Pg. 1 Pt. 2* 😉 also, I love what you did with the title just like the take flight Videl episode in Z
GamerLegend09
*Cover/Pg. 1* 😆 I can just picture Goten saying “mommy why is she wearing underwear with no clothes on?”
Dean Zamp
Interesting theory 🧐🤨😜
Dean Zamp
😂
Chris Cannon
I like this. Given her carefree go with the flow type of style, it goes to show she’s a natural born talent at this compared to Videl. *Spoiler* Although it does make me wonder if she’s unintentionally using magic instead of ki.
Chris Cannon
Videl: (Scoffs) Beginner’s luck. Goten: Earlier, she also learned how to shoot pew-pews! Goten: It was awesome! Videl: WTH, Gohan!? Videl: I wanna shoot pew-pews!
Dean Zamp
Erasa 😍 in her very own "Flying Accident" what a good idea TWF. Since you have lots of pull with Write I was wondering what you think about possibly some creatively unique sex positions for this project since both are able to fly & it's flight themed? Thoughts? Also Gohan for whatever reason is particularly... let's say "manly" in Flying Accident, could this be a sequel to that? Since this could be (I'm fairly sure it might be because they're clever); why wouldn't Write wanna build certain concepts together in an alternate universes pertaining to specific tropes topics that align.
ShadowRipper
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