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Naruto: Rogue - Chapter 2 - A New Ninja Way - COMPLETE

🕑 Added 2024-10-04 16:06:22 +0000 UTC

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Chris Cannon

I have a lot of catching up. Thanks to you my notifs are flooded with updates and post from here, I’m perfectly fine with that. lol Another good one and yet again I love how you’re taking the time to introduce this alternate world and characters before we get to the nitty-gritty. What I’m really loving so far is more exploration of the Uzumaki clan, which we’d on get mere tidbits off scattered throughout. I love the idea of each clan having their own unique taijutsu.

Omar DeLaHoz

Incredible work.

TWF

7. Same as Sasuke

AJ

How old is Naruto again!?

Julian Fratzscher

Odd choice, but let's see if it can be pulled off without seeming weird.

Silverstrike

Oh man, so obito, the man who gave his dad such a hard time just lost his Mangekyo sharingan eye, the one which gave him his space time ninjutsu is gone…dang!!! Obito definitely didn’t expect Naruto to be there and he must have flung that small Kunai at obito so fast he did have time to activate Kamui. Now kakashi is the only one who can use Kamui.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 34* 😧 yet something else i didn’t see coming. 🤩🤩🤩 HOW EXCITING!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 33* 😄 Hah, that means 2 things 😄 (😅😅😅 ohhh mama)

DarkTitan5010

Only Old School cartoon watchers would get that "Jump Good" reference, massive respect to you. Also, I like that cliffhanger, cant wait to see how that turns out

Chase Garcia

Obito is going to have a wakeup call

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 32* 😄 you know how to land too right?…….😅 right?

SparkyZinger

On page 32 when Naruto said "Jump Good" made remember something and made realize Naruto's training was similar to a certain Samurai's training to Jump Good.

TWF

One of the replacement Sharingan on the left. But note that the right eye that he got stabbed through is his Kamui eye. You know, the one that gives him his invincibility with absolutely no drawbacks. So what so you think this means?

Calvin Morris

When Madara rescued Obito he mentioned he had a lot of spares. Probably in case he needed to use Izanagi to save himself or something. He still had working Sharingan eyes despite giving his Rinnegan eyes to Nagato.

Julian Fratzscher

Uh... wrong eye, or did Obito steal himself a new left one?

Omni

I look forward to seeing Naruto kick that Uchiha Man-childs ass. Seriously him and the leftover members had their dicks sucked to hard in the series. Fuck Kishimoto

The Jonizuka

BRING ON CHAPTER 3, BAY BAY!!!!!!

Terminator1738

So will this be replacing the fics you originally wrote as far as

Julian Fratzscher

"Am I ready to become a Ninja?" Dude, you're overqualified, in the fighting Department at least.

Julian Fratzscher

Ah, the Uzumaki dimensionhopped to other manga and learned techniques there.

Omni

I can't wait to see what type of chakra techniques this kid will use

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 31* 😁 Heyy good thinking…. 😅 that’s a LOT! to try and redraw in detail (🫠 it would’ve been literal hell to go through I’m sure)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 30* 😄 🎶Rocket Maaaaan🎶 (🤭 don’t know why, the the song just jumped into my head when I saw the Bottom right panel)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 29* 🙃🙃🙃🙃 just…broke apart like a sliced Orange

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 28* 🫢 Eeep!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 27* 😨😨😨 T-Timber?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 26* 😳 and that’s with no Jutsu?! Hot-Damn

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 25* 😁 time to see the fruits of all your hard work huh

TWF

Brace yourself for more cameos. It's gonna get wild.

TWF

He is still below them. He is at a similar level you would consider Itachi when he was a Genin, and he was already capable of straight up taking on Jonin. However, what sets Naruto apart is that he is a genius in physicality, which is the main takeaway from this moment. This is all in preparation for when Naruto is expected to take on the big fish in the pond, such as boxing with literal Biju with his fists alone.

DarkTitan5010

The closest comparison I can think of currently would be when Temari cut down that entire forest, yes she had help from her summon but she still took out an entire chunk of forest to kill her enemy. Although pure physical talent, yeah I’d say that around peak Guy Sensei(not including Eight Gates) or Kage level

DarkTitan5010

Great way to do it, I had to ask cause I was gonna be mind blown, I still was that you did that for him tho

TWF

Nah, that was from an existing manga panel, lol. I could if I wanted to, but drawing the whole village would be a bitch and a half. So I improvised.

Terminator1738

It also looks like you took stuff from Oni and Drifting fic and put it in here as some of these things I recall existing in this fic does that mean you will be adding antagonist from all 3 of those Naruto fics?

Terminator1738

While the final panel seems more like a copy and paste it does seem like your increasing the scale from the jump considering Naruto before he graduates can now cut a large hill into pieces that mean hes already Kage level here or the scale has changed and he's still belownguys like Hiruzen and Kakashi?

DarkTitan5010

Did you hand draw ALL OF THAT???

Jesus

Damn this manga is getting to be very exciting every time yaaaaaaaaaay

DarkTitan5010

NO YOU DIDDDDDDDDDDNT DO THAT FOR MY BOY, YOU ARE GOAT’D FOR THAT👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿🤟🏿🤟🏿🤟🏿🤟🏿

DarkTitan5010

Yooooo, built kid Naruto is gonna have all the confidence he needs when he ends up on a team

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 24* (said in a high pitched tone) 😄 time for the ne- 😅😅😅😅😅 judis Priest they say that with such a straight face

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 23* 🫤 damn…that boy is swoll as Hell

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 22* 😮 Wow that fox can hold their own pretty good

The Jonizuka

Pg 22 foreshadowing that it’s about to go down🙂‍↕️

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 21* 🤔This reminds me of a certain episode from Ranma 1/2 in a way (the one where Ranma has the fight his arch-rival Ryoga after Shampoo's great grandmother decides to train them in the deadly Breaking Point)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 20* Ummm ✋🏻😅 Tamamo-Chan Tamamo-Chan, 😅😅😅😅😅 isn’t that-….a bit much

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 19* 😊 trained by animals of nature, 🥰 such a warming site to see

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 18* **Top 2 Panels** 😠 destroy that bamboo!, 😡😡😡 OBLITERATE THEM!! **Bottom 5 Panels** 😯 oh? 😍 a new cute animal! 😄 and they’re a training partner too…🙃 feels like Snow White’s recruiting teachers here 🙂 I’m not complaining though, 🧐 I mean look at the detail put into this beautiful little swallow…..🥰 Cheep! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 17* Huh….🤔 so that’s how it works…cool 👍🏻

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 16* 😁 nothing to see here folks juuuust some Paperweight

DarkTitan5010

yooo, that’s cool, instant glue. I wonder what the weakness is?

Chase Garcia

Such youthful training lee and gai would approve

TWF

Yes, a lot of anime training methods aren't viable in real life, but that's because they don't have energy sources like chakra in Naruto, ki in DBZ, mana in every isekai, and parody in One Punch Man.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 15* **Top 2 Panels** you know… I keep seeing some fitness videos Debunking Cartoon and Anime Training Methods **Middle 2 Panels** 🤔 but my curiosity’s eating at me… like to what extremes would be safe and practical in real life? **Bottom Panel** “😡 208, 209, 210” 😳 woof

DarkTitan5010

Slowly reminding me of Zoro or Demon Slayer training

The Jonizuka

Newbie gainz on page 14💪🏿

Jesus

Damn best story arc so far I'm loving it a lot.

De'Andrae White

Keep grinding Naruto 💪 my boi

Key JX

I was wondering....Naruto doses have a school?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 14 Pt. 2* Is this prep work for the entrance exam in the Konoha Academy?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 14* 😥 yeesh… kids pushing a bit hard from the start here

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 13* 😅 I almost forgot this was 3 months ago

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 12* 😃 cooool!! 😀and convenient

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11* **Top 2 Panels** Now that’s sage advice right here **Middle Panel** 🥴pfft, “Paperweight” **Bottom 2 Panels** 🤔 do I smell foreshadowing?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 10* 😄 I love hidden compartments like this one, kinda brings a sensation of safety in a way

DarkTitan5010

Ya can’t be OP at the jump, ya gotta start somewhere. I know people hate seeing the grind sometimes but I love a character that starts at rock bottom and rises to where they are.

TWF

Whirling Tides Shadow... the Kage of Uzushiogakure.

DarkTitan5010

Interesting family secrets, plus it makes it clear that some skills are best learned later on too unless your too curious

Julian Fratzscher

Uzukage?

MDD

Story is looking good so far 👍

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 9* **Top 2 Panels** 😁 absolutely, can’t go a day without having- **Bottom Panel** 😍……..,😍 what’re we talking about? 😍😍😍

Julian Fratzscher

Was wondering about that part anyway, if the Uzumaki clan had a place near/in Konoha, why didn't Naruto live there? Well, as an adult at least, as a kid he would have needed smth in the village.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 8* **Top Panel** 😆 SO MANY FOXES 🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊 **Middle Right Panel** 😣 ouch!… my Mother injured her thumb one time too, 😓😓😓 a door closed hard enough for it to turn black……😅 luckily it took a week or two to heal and turn back into a normal color again **Middle Left Panel** 🤔 those doors are called Shoji right? ☺️ I always found them strangely relaxing. **Bottom Panel** 🥰🦊🥰 Lucky Kid, gets to hang out with an entire Skulk of Foxes🥰🦊🥰🦊🥰 AND they help make short work on repairs! 😍😍😍 I’d be in complete and total Bliss (😆 they’re so fluffy I’m gonna die!!)

DarkTitan5010

Oof, I’ve been there Naruto, I hate when I miss the nail😫

Dusty Farqaharson

This one is Really Good 💯

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 7* **Top Right Panel** Ook I see now, in this Timeline he developed this mindset to learn with focus at a younger age (😅😅😅 thanks for that refresher Write) **Top Left Panel** 🫢…😍😍😍 MIKON!? Omg🥰😆🥰😆🥰😆🥰 **Middle Panel** ☺️ Deepest Thanks to all Local Farmers far and wide, 😊 I always appreciate the healthy Veggies they Cultivate for us **Bottom Two Panels** 😄 also convenient… 😁 he can build a better relationship with other people outside the Village, 🥲 hopefully they’ll still see him as the child on the outside and protect him even if they learn the truth

GamerLegend09

………🥲 it’s been too long since I’ve watched Naruto….🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲 I am ashamed

Tobi

Pg 6 smart gal even tho the hidden leaf village occupants know he's a jinchuriki but others outside of the villages occupants don't know well played to her and to you matt

DarkTitan5010

I never really thought about the outer perimeter of the main village, cool to see that incorporated and cool to see little homie taking as much knowledge as he can to live life a bit easier

TWF

This is the Naruto we get BEFORE the Naruto in the canon timeline where the full goofiness persona he's famous for sets in. It was introduced in Episode 480 of Shippuden, where we see THIS Naruto struggling with loneliness, but shows extreme focus, resourcefulness, and a surprisingly level head on his shoulders. In the episode he doesn't have enough funds to make it to the end of the month, so instead of wasting the last of his money on ramen despite wanting it, he goes out into the woods, practices his ninja skills on his own, goes fishing, and searches for ingredients to make mushroom soup (which he shares with Hiruzen who appears out of nowhere, but he has no idea who he is). And we can assume he learned all of this BY HIMSELF, so the kid did have a sense of maturity before he became the clown he sank in to when he realized he could act like that constantly to get attention.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* 😗 huh….🙂 for a kid so young he has everything planned out pretty far ahead. 😁 This boy’s far more mature than the canon series Naruto at this age.

DarkTitan5010

Well, having a plan for the long run is nice to have

DarkTitan5010

Good that he’s got his own place now, but I’m sure a kids not gonna be able to fix all that up anytime soon

GamerLegend09

☝🏻😤 Facts

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 5* Huh 😐……☺️ well that’s convenient, 🤔 i’m a little curious about what the property’s like personally

Robert Walker

Pg.5 The Third Hokege doing something besides just giving him money. That's how it should have been, he was literally born a bad hand. Everyone hated him for something he never did, or have control over.

GamerLegend09

😊 hopefully it won’t take a disaster like when pain attacked the village in the canon Naruto series to earn that respect… 😅 but at this point I’m just raising a red flag hahhahhh

TWF

Thank you, friend. :)

Tobi

Pg.4 At least there calling him fox boy better then being called demon glad to see some see him as kid instead of jinchurik Btw love first chapter

GamerLegend09

😆 nice

Jesus

Alright sounds good thank you

TWF

Haha. You'd think so... but this, my friend, is the training of Samurai Jack! (P.S - You sent a DM to TheWriteFiction's old account, which was deleted. If you wish to speak to them, DM me instead)

Efiong Uwah

He better jump good after this

Chris Cannon

(Naruto removes his weights and leaps a good 150 meters in the air.) Naruto:(Excited) I can FLY! Tama: Kon-Kon! Translation: Not fly, jump good!

Robert Walker

He is following Samurai Jack's training to Jump Good.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 4* **Top 2 Panels** 😄 hey she taught him how to understand Fox **Middle 2 Panels** 🤨 Either these 2 don’t know about our boy, 🥲 or they’re the Right kind of Adult that don’t see “him” as a monster **Bottom 2 Panels** 😊 now that’s improvement

DarkTitan5010

Oh yeah, I need to watch those movies agaain, its been too long since that 1 vs 10 fight

TWF

Yep, and with ridiculously heavy weights. Suffice to say, he's gonna be a power house in this one, with a fighting style like Bruce Lee's and Ip Man's.