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Chris Cannon

And the writers seemed to have favored her as well, she was the most active compared to the rest and I think she’s a better pilot than Haneda. Yeah, that was another one of the few gripes I had, they could’ve done better than that if they wanted to go for a love triangle.

TWF

Mitaka was always a personal favourite of mine. I do feel as though the way she started her relationship with Itsurugi was a little odd, though I can buy she is more of a tomboy compared to Haneda.

TWF

Great.

Jesus

I was finnally able to download it thank you

TWF

Try it again. I re uploaded.

Chris Cannon

This chapter’s had a lot of great twist and turns, loved it. And thanks for giving me a blast from the past, I revisited Airbats and was shocked how short the episode count was. I remember it being longer, but it was pretty enjoyable. Back then, I thought Haneda was the best choice for Itsurugi, but Mitaka grew on me better than before, so it left me in a bind.

Jesus

Im unable to download the last chapter as a PDF file.

GamerLegend09

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

GamerLegend09

😕 yeah good point

Robert Walker

If they could take those jewels out one by one, she will be weakened a lot, and with that immortality, they could probably remove it. Without killing her

GamerLegend09

That is one sick tiny little shit…… 😊 and you’ve grown my disgust of them to a whole new level! Well done Write & company 👍🏻 (😅 I promise that’s a compliment)

William Cano

one of the aspects i want to destact from this chapter is really dont kwon if the red ribbon are good or bad guys 13 in few chapters he was a nice guy also 21

William Cano

i really want to see more in the future i cant wait

William Cano

but dude this chapter revelation after revelation , cameo after cameo i give this episode 5 stars good job

William Cano

well i think gohan wants to forget the past garlic was one of those villians who leave a mark on him

William Cano

pag 67 . that face 18 BEA kwons. girl you shoulnt hide secrets from your boyfriend jajaja

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 72* 😄 well you were still young when they did this (both times) so….. 😅 you get an excuse Spikey

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 71* 😐 I’m not the only one that remembers they could do that…right?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 70* 😄 which only begs to question…. 😱WHY WOULD YOU SHITIOTS STOP SHOOTING!!?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 69* **Top Right Panel** 😅 Friend…Right…Suuure **Top Left Panel** 😕 why? **Bottom Right Panel** 😟 Why though?! **Bottom Left Panels** 🤦🏻‍♂️ ohh you got him/her alright

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 68* **Top 2 Panels** 😳….😳oh **Middle 2 & Bottom Right Panels** 🙂 well, at least they finally learned “something” **Bottom Left 2 Panels** 😅 I don’t like the way he looked at Gohan Specifically when he said that

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 67* **Top Right Panel** 🤭pfft Bea looking at 13 all “…😑 really?” **Top Left Panel** 😄 Nah Trucker-Droid, certain folks would describe that as, 😏 Perfect **Bottom 3 Panels** 😠 look didn’t I just sa-

GamerLegend09

😆 HAH!!

Dean Zamp

What a chapter dude. Applause all around 👏

Roxas Wings

So when is chapter 13 coming out

CrystalFire7x

Interesting cliffhanger. Looking forward to Chapter 13.

CrystalFire7x

That 13 entrance was peak.

EtheVoice

DODGE!!!!!!!!!!!!

De'Andrae White

Nobody is safe from getting clapped by them bullets unless u know magic🤣🤣👀

Silverstrike

you did the abridged android thirteen! o my word!! also it wont work cause Jr is immortal.

Julian Fratzscher

Good thing then that Piccolo focused so much on teaching Gohan how to DODGE.

William Cano

agreed

GamerLegend09

☺️ same

MDD

Abridged Android 13 and abridged Nappa are some of my favorite characters from the abridged series. 😁👍

MDD

Yee-Haw! Abridged Android 13 is back baby! 🤠

Chris Cannon

Yeah, I remember seeing Towa in Gohan’s dream and a teaser for a later saga. Cool comparison. If they already know each other, I could totally see them having a similar dynamic; two scientists with immense brain power that were friends, but share completely different views.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 66* **Top Panel** 🤩😃🤩😃NO!! **Bottom Panel** 😆😆😆 AAHHH! YOU EVEN LET HIM SAY IT THANK YOU!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 65* **Top Right Panel** 😄 well…I give ‘em points Courage **Top Left Panel** 🙂 hm? **Middle & Bottom Panels** 🫵🏻😳😧😳(Gasp)-No

Julian Fratzscher

Awesome. (Also the joke/reference being made in the comic itself prevents the comments doing that.) (Also also, laughed at that for about half a minute.^^)

Robert Walker

My trucker hat, he about to fire that T.H. Death Ball!!! And I am wondering what is taking so long for Bardock to say anything?!!!

AJ

Yeah like Joker in the dialogue and his method but like Ra's as he used his daughter

William Cano

wait soo in retrospective in the beginning of this chapter gohan actually hit a girl in the face NO WAY

William Cano

pag 64 woooh paprika another girl for the harem jajaja

GamerLegend09

I think your right….😅 but something’s telling me it’s gonna be a difficult Process

TWF

Correction- we have seen Baby's Possession ability, which is broken, but that's more science based. THIS is Demon Magic and Demon Possession, so it is somewhat different.

TWF

More Joker, a little less Ras, but close.

AJ

You mean Joker and Ra's Al Ghul

AJ

Wow Garlic pulled a Batman Beyond, this is a good combination of how Joker and Ra's survived death

Aaron Burke

Agreed! Return of the Joker was a great movie, and Batman Beyond was a great series! So, if that crystal is how Garlic Jr. is controlling his daughter, does that mean it can be destroyed and she can be freed?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 64* **Top Panel** 😤Stay focused Gohan **Bottom 2 Panels** 😡💢💢💢💢 Twisted Sonuva#####

Chris

Page 64 makes me think that garlic Junior forgot about the Dragon Ball. I can see it bothering Gohan to kill someone who is innocent.

GamerLegend09

😮 Damn your right!! 😊 Good eye there Aaron

TWF

Good spotting. That awesome DC movie, and one of the best mind you, was my inspiration for this scenario, since we've seen plenty of absorption and mind control, but we've never actually seen a past villain actually physically possess another for more power.

William Cano

i dont kwon how gohan is going to defeat him after hearing he has his own daughter as hostage

William Cano

poor girl now i hate garlic more

Aaron Burke

Pg. 63 This is like Return of the Joker!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 63* 😐…🙂 that is of course….😈 if “Gohan” doesn’t find a way to kill you first

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 62* 😧 ohhohohhhh- 😡 I really hope Nyar/ Gaunter O’Dimm has a painfully fitting Punishment for you Bastard

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 61* [Looking at Garlic Junior] 😠😠😠😡😡😡😡😡👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿 A Child Is 🤬🤬🤬NOT A TOOL!! 😠 I always thought he was shit but this is even lower than Dirt in the Pecking Order

TWF

That is in character- he has made it a habit to blurt out his advantages when on a tirade.

TWF

She definitely would be intrigued by Garlic Jr, so she would want to acquire this ability as well for her study.

De'Andrae White

Pg. 63 Is bro bout to turn Beast?👀

Silverstrike

And he just had to be an idiot, and tell gohan everything…🙄I know it was teased last chapter, but beast transformation?

Silverstrike

Ah, ok, and I got the name wrong too, lol!

Julian Fratzscher

Wanted to write how 21 is probably listening in and might try to recreate that possession in a scientific way, but then I remembered how two of her flunkies had taken over the bodies of audience members during the Intergalactic Tournament.

TWF

Don't worry. Towa is still canon in this universe. After all, there is more than one scientist in any world. If Einsten and Hisenberg can live on the same planet at the same time, so can Arisu and Towa.

Chris Cannon

Wasn’t expecting to see Arisu so soon. I’ve been holding off from watching Daima, but know a few details. I’m gonna take a guess and say this role was originally going to go to Towa, but Arisu was thought of at the last minute because it suits her better than it would have for Towa.

Chris Cannon

*Page 61* Soldier2: (Whispers) Dude, are you getting any of this? Soldier1: They lost me when Shrek’s bastard daughter brought up the part about “demonic possession”. Soldier2: It’s getting good, this is some Supernatural shit. Soldier1: Wait, the show, genre, or that one game that everyone thought was based off the show? Soldier2: Yes…Also, why does she have to be a bastard? Soldier:1 (Shrugs) M’mm.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 60* ……..😑 nope… still can’t picture it… 🤢 definitely don’t want to either

TWF

You haven't seen DAIMA yet? You have to. It reveals everything we need to know about the Demon Realm in DB canon.

Julian Fratzscher

No idea what you just said, but I'll take you word for it.

TWF

Uhm. The back-door relates to another pathway to the Demon Realm. In DAIMA it is stated you can only use Warp-sama to get too and from the Demon Realm, except he knows a way around to get there himself without a ship or password. His backup/insurance plan, which he is now using to possess his daughter from the Dead Zone because he has no more power to break out himself due to the risk, is what we are talking about right now.

TWF

Correct for 2 things except 1. Paprika is one of Gotens girls.

Julian Fratzscher

So, I assume Garlic could have also used that backdoor plan depending on what the Galactic Patrol would have done with him.

Silverstrike

I just realized something, gohan is going to defeat garlic jr and free parsley spirit then she is going to be added to Gohan’s ladies…and there is the daima connection!

Fenrir Good

In your Naruto story, will Hinata also be his partner?

Vegeta, the Ultimate Super Saiyan 3

Garlic Jr. is using HIS OWN DAUGHTER'S BODY?! OH, HELL NAH, THAT'S CRAZY!!

GamerLegend09

Not that I’m not a fan of those forms, 😅 I don’t think they’re cannon to TheWriteFiction Verse

TWF

Yes, you did. Still dead, btw. And Beerus and Whis were in it too. And yes, THAT is happening in this arc.

William Cano

ok jejeje

TWF

Wait and see

William Cano

in this chapter i kwon we are going to see gohan beast , i want to kwon if is going to apper orange piccolo that would be great ?

William Cano

goku is going to get back in this arc with his transformation of super siyan 3

William Cano

i have another question i remenber when bardock has his visions i saw goku

William Cano

AH right sorry i forgot

TWF

No. He still has it. It's the reason why he was in Prison in the isolation cells.

William Cano

?

William Cano

i have a question if garlic is in another body he lose his inmortality granted by the dragon balls

De'Andrae White

Stealing yo daughter's body is diabolical asf 👀

Dusty Farqaharson

I just thought that Garlic Jr has a Dauther

Dusty Farqaharson

I never thought that Garlic jr

TWF

So happy to see someone remembering all the important bits of info from the previous chapters. When in doubt, always go back for a re read.

Julian Fratzscher

1. That one Galactic Patrol member stated Garlic is immortal, which is why he was transported with the other prisoners. 1-2. Likely his soul is immortal, and that affects the body. 2. Probably, but it'd be stupid to do that again. 3. Got caught stealing those crystals that are now all over his body, probably Meerus caught him. 4. Would say he, as Garlic seems to go by he/him. (Just my thoughts on the matter)

Julian Fratzscher

That's an interesting way to escape, and to explain why he looked so similar to himself with the hood up. Also, now I'm reminded of Leah from Diablo 3. Let's see if it ends the same way.

Aaron Burke

Can Paprika escape her father's possession?!

GamerLegend09

😳 I know!! 😒 I’m still having a hard time figuring out who would even “Think!” of having coitus with….😵‍💫 them

William Cano

thats so evil posses his own daughter body

Robert Walker

Jeez Jr. He is a jerk in all of that, and I'm wondering whose the mother

Batur Ulus

Wow I have some questions. 1. İs garlic jr. Still immortal in his daughters body? 1-2. İf he is still imortal, does it mean his soul is immortal? 2. Can he still use dead zone portal? 3. How and why the hell did he get caught by galactic patrolers? 4. Do we call him/her he or she?

GamerLegend09

🙂 easy now Fellow Patron

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 59* **Top Right & Middle Panels** ☺️ solid recap Spiky **Top Left Panel** 😑 no shit Garlic Knot **Middle Right Panel** 😶 smooth…did your therapist help you with that one? **Bottom Right Panel** What Villain/Bad Guy/Terrorist doesn’t have one of those **Corner Left Panel** 😧 that shrimp F###s? 🤯

Killer RakeemStar

So I was partially right

Killer RakeemStar

Oh thats fucked

DarkTitan5010

Well....I got my answer and man does it fit the situation. I wonder if its possible to bring the poor girl back. Although by this point she's probably gone, but it would be cool to see if they try and take that lane.

Gbraz

Please tell me this chapter is finally over! please!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 58* **Top Right Panel** 😄 yeahno that’s new **Top Left & Bottom Panels** 😐…🫤 uh-oh

DarkTitan5010

Ok. I'm following so far, now that THAT is covered, I hope Garlic Junior does his Villain Monologue Speech

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 57* 😅😅😅 wow, I don’t think anyone could’ve seen that one coming (😗 admittedly I certainly couldn’t)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 56* what?😳😳😳 What!?😮😮😮 Wuuuut?!😧😧😧

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 55* 😙 eyyy Baeteen’s here

andrew lance

Page 58 makes me want to rewatch that arc

Killer RakeemStar

Oh is this like dragon ball z legacies fanfic is this his daughter maybe another dimension counterpart

Silverstrike

Huh?! How…why…I have so many questions!!!! And possibly another intro to a new one of Gohan’s girls, and notice the symbol on her sports bra, galactic patrol.

William Cano

its a clon of reina

William Cano

WHAAAAAAT garlick girl

Aaron Burke

Wait?! Is that Garlic Jr. turned female, or an OC?!

Chris Cannon

“What a twist!” - Robot Chicken M-Night *Slight Spoiler Alert* I can’t believe I forgot about her from one of Write’s old fanfics. It’s been ages since I’ve last read it and forgot which story she was from but wow, I’m actually glad I forgot. Since she’s here, I’m looking forward to seeing if some other old OCs will make the cut, especially another more memorable pointy eared character in the future. *Whispers* Valhalla…

Tbone019

Pg. 56 Oh... wow. Didn't see that coming.

Julian Fratzscher

Did Garlic take over someones body? Or is that the effect of those stones on his body? Excited to see more.

Robert Walker

Uhhhhh what, my brain is broken, we've been jebated

andrew lance

Ngl i would respond with "i thought it was someone else instead of... who are you?"

DarkTitan5010

Uuuuuummmmm, I HAVE SOOO MANY QUESTIOOOOONS????

Gregory Stewart

WHO THE FUCK IS THAT AT THE END LOL

GamerLegend09

😂😂😂😂

Julian Fratzscher

"Sorry, we were fighting and flying so hard that we didn't see where we were going."

GamerLegend09

🫤 ikr?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 54* **Top 4 Panels** ☝🏻😦 uhhh…✊🏻😐 mm…….😒 You’d think they would’ve learned from the cell tragedy **Bottom 2 Panels** 😯 oooo 😎 Celebrity moment

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 53* 😅why… why park your asses so close next to a military base

DarkTitan5010

I know they’re just doing their jobs but all these people need to clear the area FAST

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 52* Android 13: 😱 NOT THE TRUCK!!!

Dean Zamp

Monologues about to go crazy 😁

TWF

Since Cells last level was approximately SSJ2, it can be assumed they are designed to handle that level. You will see how effective they are shortly.

William Cano

i have a question those jets are weapons design to beat super saiyan 2 level treat or they design to beat only cell level treat

William Cano

i didnt spect to see gohan bleed from his nose

William Cano

iam spechless garlic really is strong as full power super saiyan what kind of training he did?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 51* 😯 ooo 🤭 I wonder if 13’s gonna feel a Tingling from this one

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 50* 😓😓😓 hoo boy are these two in for it… 😕 I mean yeah I know they’ll be ok and have both had their fair share of action, 🙃 but I’m not so sure their ready for what’s going to happen next……😵‍💫 I mean if it was me i’d have thought I was in an incredibly realistic movie set…… 😳 omg just like Hercule Pre-Cell

Fabian Milciades Rogel Fuentes

But in fanfic universe:

TWF

Dragonball is gonna keep it monogamous. Otherwise it'll alienate its audience. It's going to keep it traditional to what it is.

Fabian Milciades Rogel Fuentes

What do you think of Dragon Ball Daima? Do you think there’ll be any references in the story?

Fabian Milciades Rogel Fuentes

If we analyze it, many women would wish to have someone like Goku or Gohan as a partner, and the way they would accept it would be to avoid hurting them, staying with them or something like that. What do you think?

TWF

I... can't. Because you just asked if Goku ans Gohan were getting harems canonically in my story? If you meant broadly in DBZ canon, no or maybe.

Fabian Milciades Rogel Fuentes

More than Naruto or Ichigo? Explain

TWF

Yes

Fabian Milciades Rogel Fuentes

Canonically Goku and Gohan would be the characters who could even have a harem?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 49* **Top 4 Panels** 😅 Ahhahhahhhh Hercule’s gonna have a Field day with this one **Bottom 3 Panel** 😅😅😅 Who knows, 😀 maybe they can write this off as a field 😳Teeee(😱)eeooOHHCRAPTHAT’SRITESHE’STHERE!!

Julian Fratzscher

A Clark Kent disguise works alot better than you would imagine.

TWF

There is a very good reason.

GamerLegend09

😤 it’s the hood I tell ya

Aaron Burke

I'm sorry, but how does Gohan still not recognize Garlic Jr.?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 48* Quick! Aim for the Knee!💥 Or the Shin!!💥💥 Doesn’t matter how many times they heal they’ll still remember the pain!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 47* I get that Gohan first met Jr. when he was practically a toddler 😊😊😊, but i’m surprised nothing has sparked his memory banks on their first encounter. Has he considered? I don’t know knocking off his hood?

Chris Cannon

*Pg 43* Whoa WTH!? I was expecting the Tom Cruise dude to show up soon based on Bardock’s visions and that drawing of Top Gun you made some time back, but I never would’ve expected Airbats. This might be a one time thing, but I hope to see some of the others later, especially Sakura.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 46* **Top Right Panel** Saw a couple episodes of the anime, 😁 and I must say I really admire this Girl’s spirit **Top Left Panel** 😁 hee **Bottom 3 Panels** 😎 You ready to question your religion?

William Cano

top gun es una de mis peliculas favoritas

William Cano

wooooooh que referencias jajaja

GamerLegend09

……..😑 funny story… and I swear this is the god honest truth…that “was” my first guess… I just thought it was a clever Wolf and sheep’s clothing… I mean to me the face somewhat closely resembled Miles…….. 🤷🏻‍♂️ guess I should’ve went with my gut on that one, ☺️ i’ll stick with my first guess from now on though.

TWF

It is implied Android 21 came across this. Being she is a genius and capable of pulling off tech capable of outright matching Z fighters potential, it is not impossible for her to acquire this, either through mining it from meteorites, from finding a deposit on this fantasy version of Earth, or mining it from space using tech not even Doctor Gero had. After all, she has been canonically stated to be more capable and smarter than Dr Gero in this field. And it has been shown through other media that Katchin has been found in vast quantities in universe. Also, it is not a fleet of jets, just two prototypes, meaning they had enough metal to make them, but not a lot. They are new machines after all. That being said, Z fighters do struggle with fighting against opponents made of regular metals and alloys. Meta Cooler and the Androids are good examples of this, as even a Super Saiyan struggled to break the metal on Cooler and it is implied he can make his metal even denser and stronger as a fight progresses. So Z fighters will struggle against dense enough materials.

Charisonic

While cool. I gotta wonder where they got it from. Since the Supreme Kai and even DBS make it seem like it's not naturally on earth, just universe 7 in general. Plus, if the strongest weapon in the universe and by your statements, the strongest mortal in the universe couldn't damage it, how in the hell could earth tech mine enough for a fleet of jets, let alone a single one.

TWF

Dang, I was hoping you'd pick up on my two references. I thought THOMAS CRUISER would be a bigger hint for yah to figure out who the man is supposed to be, lol. Oh, and the girls aren't OCs, they're actually cameos from an old school anime I love- a small one but a goodie. Look up 801 Airbats anime. You'll see.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 45* **Top Panel** 😳 case and point with a side of 13 **Bottom Right Panel** 😑 Your company needs more thorough background checks man **Bottom left Panel** 😶 ah well, that retracts my statement from the last page

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 44* **Top 2 Panels** Is it just me or does this gentleman look like Miles Teller? (Might just be the Top Gun Vibes talking from the last page) **Bottom 2 Panels** I’m not very Jet Savvy but the second I hear RED RIBBON, I can’t help but see RED FLAGS

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 43* ☺️ I love the Top Gun Vibes I get from this Page (😚 the OC’s look cute too)

TWF

Most likely.

TWF

Vomi is currently the head of the organisation. She is trying to do good with her technology, however... there is a sinister plot also taking place.

TWF

Not exactly. Katchin alloy is the same alloy that snapped the Z-sword and didn't get a dent. And because this is an alloy, it is much stronger than the same one the Grand Priest used to make the arena for the Tournament of Power. Sooo... if Gohan tried to punch it as a SSJ2, he'd break his wrist.

Julian Fratzscher

And then Gohan and Garlic crash through one of those raptors mid-flight without even noticing.

William Cano

no puedo creer the red riiboon army is back with new tech pero que descarados vender armas para poder destruir sus propias creaciones despues de todo ellos crearon a cell

Fenrir Good

Ósea que el poder está en el alma pero solo necesita un cuerpo para canalizarlo?

TWF

You can use the spirit in ki the multiply, grow or split or transport ki, as stated by the Yardrat race who taught Goku instant transmission and Vegeta Spirit Fission. Souls are apparently separate from ki. Basically the soul is put into a body and that body needs ki to survive, so the person can learn to increase ki through training, whether it be the spirit, mental or physical aspects.

Fenrir Good

If ki is also spiritual energy because they need their bodies to use their power when they die?

TWF

Reina- absolutely. The others, kinda, unless they are weakened.

Fenrir Good

Do the dragon ball characters have immunity to soul manipulation?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 42* 😄 that’s what she said

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 41* 😑 right, energy manipulation… 😒 damn

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 40* 😳 Dayum…Golden Frost ain’t no joke

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 39* So is everyone from the Frieza Race able to use that signature move? or did Frost learn it from Freeza using it once or twice?

Roxas Wings

What about caulifa and 21

Silverstrike

I think they are In trouble…

Fabian Milciades Rogel Fuentes

What do you think of aeos in its large form?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 38* 😏 heh!

GamerLegend09

Does snake princess not count because she tried to eat him? 🙂🙃AhThankYou🙂🙃

TWF

Suno and that girl he saved from the two gangsters... aaaand... that's about it for now. He's met very few girls on his journey, surprisingly.

TWF

That's because it affects ki and the soul is made up of ki. If it has it, it can destroy it, but it doesn't work 100% because it can still be blocked and resisted, as proven by both Frieza AND Vegeta.

Fenrir Good

Antimatter only destroys on a material level by annihilating physical matter, while Hakai completely erases the victim’s existence, affecting both body and soul.

Fenrir Good

If Goku had a harem, who (apart from chichi) would be his wives?

TWF

No, not really. Not as far as Beerus showed hitting pressure points to knock someone out.

Fenrir Good

In this story ki has networks in the body like the Chakra?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 37* 😁 it’s all in the Flick- err 😅 Wrist!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 36* 😆😆😆 NICE BLOCK!!!!

William Cano

wooooh one hit from from mooro and bye

Silverstrike

Jeez that was close!

De'Andrae White

*Pg. 36* Bro almost got turn into a shish kabob💀 sis came in for the clutch😭

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 35* ………….😬 Trap

CrystalFire7x

*Pg. 35* You best come to their aid Nappa.

GamerLegend09

☺️ well said

TWF

Localized or not you still can't quantify or compare them, because they fundamentally function different from, as I stated before, hydrogen and other elements of the known universe. These calculations are also inaccurate as hell, due to the whacked up power scaling of DBZ.

TWF

That would be an interesting matchup. I'd say out of pure exploitative talent, Alter Age Gohan could potentially surpass Golden Age Gohan.

De'Andrae White

Yo Write who's stronger, Gohan (Golden Age) or Gohan (Alter Age)

LeoValdez5650

I'm only joking (mostly) lol. I've already waited this long, I can wait a bit longer.

TWF

We will, but remember this is a big arc. This Moro fight is just a warm up for the best shit that happens next.

LeoValdez5650

OK, this Moro stuff is cool and all, but can we wrap up the Yamcha/Vidro stuff first? I wanna see as much of them being cute together as I can...

Fenrir Good

Although the energy required to destroy a planet like Vegeta in Dragon Ball Z is enormous, this energy is concentrated at a specific point. Let's break down why this does not necessarily imply the destruction of the entire solar system: 1. Energy Calculation: • To destroy a planet with a mass approximately 10 times that of the Earth, it is estimated that an energy of 10^{33} joules is needed. • Converted to tons of TNT, this is equivalent to approximately 2.38 \times 10^{23} tons of TNT, which is an astronomical amount. 2. Energy of the Freezer Supernova: • The calculated energy for the Freeza Supernova is 2.24 \times 10^{22} joules. This is massive but even less than the total energy calculated to destroy a planet with a mass of 10 times that of the Earth. 3. Concentration of the Attack: • In Dragon Ball Z, the energy of attacks like the Supernova is concentrated in a single point, the target planet. This means that, although the energy is immense, it is directed and focused specifically to cause destruction on the planet and not necessarily on the entire solar system. 4. Localized Impact: • The series shows that even attacks with enormous energy do not destroy the Earth or the entire solar system. This is because the energy is concentrated at a specific point, limiting its impact to that objective rather than affecting the environment on a wider scale. In conclusion, the reason why a high-energy attack like the Freezer Supernova does not destroy the entire solar system is because the energy is directed and focused on a single point. Similarly, although the ki attacks in the series are extremely powerful, they are designed to impact specific areas and not the entire surrounding environment.

TWF

This is all speculative fan head canon. Just generating that amount of energy would've melted his own face off before it even reached its full size for him to throw it. Plus that amount of power would've annihilated the whole solar system, not just the planet, so realistically this is not the case.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 34* Great coordination, I’m impressed Ming can keep up with Golden Froze

Fenrir Good

The Freezer supernova that he used to destroy the planet vegeta that has 10 times more gravity than the earth, which used 224 x 10^17 gigajoules of energy to destroy the planet Vegeta, would reach amazing temperatures of 22,400,000,000,000,000,000 Kelvin, Therefore, the temperature of the Freezer supernova is equivalent to approximately 1.5 x 10^12 (1.5 billion) times the temperature of the Sun's core. This illustrates the extreme magnitude of the energy involved in the explosion and how it far exceeds the conditions in the solar nucleus.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 33* **Top 2 Panels** 😌 ah yes Scissors and Rock 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️ an ultimate combo to be reckoned with

TWF

They may be able to destroy planets, stars, galaxies and moons, but it is clear they don't function mechanically identical to hydrogen or other universal elements. Not only do you have scale to account for, but utility and functionality. Hakai is just amped up ki that can delete ki and matter like anti matter, but it is not anti matter since it can still be resisted. So Scorch, being composed of such a potent mixture of energies, effects his environment differently to other forms of energy.

Fenrir Good

In Dragon Ball, when characters release energy attacks capable of destroying planets, stars or even galaxies, the amount of energy involved is immense. Given the magnitude of these explosions and the power of these attacks, it would be incorrect to assume that they do not generate extremely high temperatures. In addition, Dragon Ball characters not only launch these attacks, but also resist similar energy impacts during their battles.

TWF

If he was, he'd ignite the entire planet's surface he was on. His core will be like a sun, but the creature itself is like a walking nuclear reactor exposed to the atmosphere. He gives off heat, but not enough to annihilate everything around him.... yet...

Fenrir Good

What is the approximate temperature of scorch is billions of times higher than the sun's core?

De'Andrae White

🔥🔥🔥

TWF

Correct.

De'Andrae White

Let me guess, Froze gonna have a black form in the near future?

TWF

Froze, in his exile and hiding from Friezas scouters, learned how to suppress his ki even when undergoing the transformation process. It's a trick Gohan will learn to pick up later when training to fight Reina to deceive her ki sensitivity. I'll fix the wording, but what Moro means is that even though Froze is clearly emitting a high volume of energy, Moro can't detect it. What is meant by energy is the force and light he can see coming off him, he just can't detect it through ki sensitivity.

William Cano

wooooh really pense que zangya seria la mas fuerte

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 32* I have looooong put to rest any remorse for this Goat bastard, may you toss and turn into the bed of nails made for yourself 😠😤

Julian Fratzscher

He can't sense their Ki output... Then what the Hell was that giant explosion?

TWF

Erasa. She is the one destined to destroy the biggest threat in the greater multiverse.

TWF

I will try my best.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 31* Good assessment…..👹 it won’t save you from the pain

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 30* 😤 This Panel is a perfect portrayal in measuring their anger

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 29* OH HELL F###### NO!!!! 🔥🔥😡🔥🔥

William Cano

y quiero saber un poco sobre el futuro cual de las futuras esposas de gohan es la mas poderosa por favor

William Cano

este manga no deja de sorprenderme the write fiction de verdad espero ver a teen gohan beast por favor pinta ese panel de lo mas epico psible jajaja

William Cano

pag 30 no se si puedo perdonar a esta version de mooro ya quiero ver que reina le de una leccion

De'Andrae White

*Pg. 30* PEAK🔥🔥🔥🔥

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 28* 😣and now I’m feeling anxious

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 27* 🥹 another model Teacher right here

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 26* 🫢……..😣🙏🏻

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 25* **Top 2 Panels** These kids have no idea **Middle Right Panel** Hard Pass, I like my muscles the way they are **Middle Left Panel** 😮‍💨Smart choice **Bottom Panels** 😶 ohh good grief

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 24* **Top 4 Panels** 😊 another peaceful session, 😄 Hah! This’s probably one of the few peaceful moments we’ll see her like this **Bottom 3 Panels** 😶 ohhh crud 😅 I hope their young age can save them from their lack of delicacy

GamerLegend09

😑 damn app’s blocking me from commenting, web browser works fine if anyone has the same issue

TWF

Thanks. I put a lot of thought into that one.

Julian Fratzscher

That she is a Mr Satan fangirl?^^

De'Andrae White

Yo Write, been currently reading Naruto: Maoyu, got to say shit is amazing🔥🔥🔥

Silverstrike

Why do I have the feeling he is going to wipe out this school and everyone in it?

TWF

I've also kept Reina's true weakness close to the chest to make the payoff in the story later a surprise.

TWF

Oh, magic can still effect her, she just takes it head on, lets it fuck up her body, then keeps going after her opponent because she doesn't care. And that's what makes her scary- she gets off on getting messed up.

Julian Fratzscher

He'll probably gets surprised by the Inner Martial Arts before he then makes use of magic to deal with the ones on the court... And then Reina wakes up, who can somehow outmaneuver magic.

De'Andrae White

Moro basically inviting himself to the ass whooping that's bout to come, it's calling for that mf🤣😂

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 23* **Top Panel** 😑 shit **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 😣 aw dang it they’re so CUTE!!! (😒 even though one of them could give off the impression they’re the Spawn Satan when Threatened) **Bottom Left Panel** 😫 and this’s so inspiringly heart lifting I’m gonna cry!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 22* **Top 2 Panels** 😑 Goatman’s Hunger is Insatiable **Middle 2 Panels** Over the river and through the woods🎶 **Bottom 2 Panels** To Grandmothers House we g-🎶 *Reads Sign* 😗 oh

Vegeta, the Ultimate Super Saiyan 3

*Pg. 22* Wait, School of the Mantis? *remembers Reina* ...Ohoho, he's about to get his s**t slapped.

William Cano

oh no mooro this going your greatest mistake go to that school

GamerLegend09

👌😉 nice

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 21: Oh, hey and now we get to the part where discount Garou teaches off brand Krampus the meaning of fear.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 21* 😩 Ahh just when it was getting good!….. 😠 and now there’s this cu-… oh yeah 😑 Goat Prick

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 20* ☺️ (sigh) young love, 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 comes in all forms so beautiful it’s power overwhelms black and white into color

LeoValdez5650

I NEED MORE! MOOOOORE! I NEED MORE YAMCHA AND VIDRO THIS INSTANT!

Fenrir Good

Pg20.Now when will the episode of how they will spend it on their honeymoon will come out?

William Cano

escena 10 de 10

Chris

Page 20 I would've never guessed her skin color was blue until now

Killer RakeemStar

Ah love at first sight... my favorite trope..one of them anyway

ShadowRipper

Así que todo este tiempo era de color azul y cabello morado eso sí no lo vi venir

Dusty Farqaharson

So page 20 in full color AMAZING 👏

Giorno Giovanna34

I have to agree with you on that. He sounds like someone my OC would kill on his way to either kill a universe ending threat or help stop a multiverse ending threat.

William Cano

pag 19 amor a primera vista

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 19* **Top Right Panel** 🤤🤤🤤 Talking Shop part two (still hot 🤤🤤😈) **Top Left Panel** 😆😆😆 THEIR FIRST INTERACTIOOONNN!!! **Bottom 3 Panels** 🥰🥰🥰 Their first Meet Cute! 🙃🙂🙃🙂🙃

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 18* **Top Panels** 🤤 hearing her Talk Shop’s so hot **Middle Panel** 🫤 huh… i guess the people in this area’ve never seen a flying alien before **Bottom Panels** 😂 you of all People shouldn’t be Suprised… 🤣🤣🤣🤣 YOU HAVE A DRAGON FOR A MAID!!!

GamerLegend09

😊 all part of my Favorites collection

Julian Fratzscher

Neat cameo

Giorno Giovanna34

Just when Kobayashi thought her life couldn't get any stranger this happens.

Killer RakeemStar

Miss Kobayashi was a nice cameo

TWF

It's the perfect ending in Xenoblade 2, Highschool DxD, Cat Planet Cuties, Fate Stay Night, Champione, Arifureta, In Another World with my Smart Phone, Demon King Daimao, Sekirei, World End Harem, among many others. Aside from the benefits behind it, these are all the endings I need.

Fenrir Good

Mr. Author, for you is polygamy (harem) morally incorrect for a story and how can it be carried out correctly?

Gregory Stewart

Give yamcha that booty the Boi deserves it lol

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 17* **Top Right Panel** 😀 I suddenly feel in the mood for Breakfast **Top Left Panels** 😕 oh Yamcha, it’s not the player 😤 it’s damned Ball Game **Lower Right Top Panel** Honestly that current style suits you much better **Lower Right Bottom Panel** 😳 wow, what are the chances **Lower Right Panels** 😍😍😍😍😍😍 THE FIRST FATEFUL NOTICE!!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 16* **Top Right Panel** 😂 I hope Chi-Chi gave permission for this……😗 ooo Vanilla **Top Left Panel** 😀 while she’s not the young aged Troll version of Vidro we’re all familiar with 😄 I guess in equivalence she still has her childlike innocence in The Universe “this” variant is from **Middle Panels** 😄 she just made every mans day flying through that traffic dressed like that **Bottom Right Panel** 😅 Yamcha’s gonna have his hands full teaching her about Earth Culture **Bottom Left Panel** 😅😅😅 I stand by my last statement

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 15* **Top Panel** 😃 look at that view…..😍 that ass compliments it very nicely **Bottom Right Two Panels** 😌 I’ll say **Bottom Left Two Panels** ☹️ aww poor dear

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 14* 📣😮 NOW WAIFU #2 TO THE RESCUE!!!

William Cano

quiero ver como vas a llamar la nueva forma de garlick jr espero que tenga un nombre genial como la forma asura de tien

William Cano

espera zangya dice que garlick jr es casi tan poderoso como ella que clase de entrenamiento hizo se volvio mas mamadisimo una pregunta es casi tan poderoso como un super saiyan o mas

William Cano

YEAH ! ve zangya ve salva a la persona que amas

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 13* 😥 oh no… I hope the stress doesn’t affect the baby too much

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 12* 📣😮 WAIFU #5 TO THE RESCUE!!!

TWF

There's a big history behind Scorch that will be revealed later. But let's just say because of his origins, he can give even Gods of Destruction and angels problems. There is a good reason for this, and it's not just because of his ability to eat energy like a champ.

Fenrir Good

Let's see. Are you saying that he was as strong as a black frieza when he was just a mortal? You don't think that scorch is already too inflamed by his ability that he can defeat Beerus hakaishin and give problems to an angel

TWF

As strong as a mortal good be at that point. His friend was a Hera and a Frost Demon who could use a Black form like Frieza, so you can guess how strong he is at that stage.

Fenrir Good

A doubt and that is that ¿how powerful was Beerus at the time of fighting with scorch when he was young before being hakaishin

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11* 😥 oh boy, I think I see his reckless showing a little

Chris Cannon

Also, I love this cover! New fave of mine. It symbolizes Gohan’s growth in overcoming his fear & insecurities. Whereas with Garlic, at the moment I think it symbolizes how he started out as a confident demon that has regressed to being overconfident,vengeful, and hateful in each encounter. The latter of which could possibly turn into fear like with Cell by the end of this arc.

Chris Cannon

Garlic probably thought he knew Gohan well enough to know how he operates in battle, but he’s whole new type of fighter now.

Chris Cannon

Garlic jr.: Who IS this man!? Hercule: The name’s Satan… (Pulls out flamethrower) Hercule: Now burn, BITCH! 🔥

GamerLegend09

😆😆😆 FEEL THE BURN BAYBEH!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 10* **Top Panel** 😣 ooooo nobody wins with a headbutt **Middle Panel** 😅 stay hydrated **Bottom Panel** 🗣️🔥 oooOOOOOAAAAAAHHH!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 9* **Top 2 Panels** 😫 why are you just floating there gawking! **Bottom 3 Panels** 😶 maybe he was securing the safety of some of the Patients, Videl, & her Family’s Safety in those few seconds

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 8* 😠 ohh you damned little F####r!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 7* 😓 try to catch up Bea

TWF

Ugh. I always hated the concept of this guy. Too strong for anyone but an OC to deal with, and too weak that he is just a nuisance to Beerus.

TWF

Once I'm not over encumbered with other work.

Fenrir Good

Out of curiosity if you had to introduce mechikabura to the story in what way it would be

Fabian Milciades Rogel Fuentes

I have a question for you: are you going to continue the Naruto and Tayuya project? I say it out of curiosity

De'Andrae White

*Pg 10* Knocked the wind out of lil bro💀

William Cano

pg 10 i like this reminds uando goku se enfrento a piccoro en el torneo de artes marciales y le dio un cabezazo

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 7: Honestly, I would have the same reaction as 18 if I saw that happen. I mean seriously what the hell?

William Cano

me gustaria saber mas pero mejor no me des spoilers jajaja solo quiero saber si vas hacer con un capitulo de como se conocieron radits y launch por que creo que seria un buen capitulo por que en la serie original launch estaba muy deprimida por la muerte tien

William Cano

really soo launch is also like a cyborg

William Cano

thank you

TWF

No, Raichi's wife is completely different, since she is a tuffle. Launch is a human with an interesting bipolar disorder, but she is still human. Though she has received cybernetic buffs from her connection with both Raditz and Android 21.

TWF

Ooh. Might be in a future chapter soon. She meets Gohan earlier, just like Videl did.

TWF

Thank you

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* **Top 2 Panels** 😄 at least the Weathers still nice for now **Bottom Right Panel** 😬 Yikes…Alluva Sudden my Wallet hurts **Bottom Left Top Panel** 😶 you 2 should run, bring your Wife **Bottom Left lower Panel** 😑 why are you still here?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 5* 😳 Crapbaskets

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 4* **Top Two Panels** 😅 Hercule I admire your courage but maybe stick to protecting your daughter instead **Last 4 Panels** 😕 orrr just make yourself a Target too…that’s also a choice I guess

William Cano

pag 5 referencia a civil war ant man estaria orgulloso de mr satan

William Cano

writefiction tengo otra pregunta es sobre launch es que se parece a samantha raichithe tuffle is launch somehow connected

William Cano

tengo una pregunta en que capitulo aparecera erasa lo espero con ganas

William Cano

me gusta la portada en este capitulo es uno de lo smejores representa muy bien la conexion de estos dos personajes

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 5: You know if he wasn't immortal this would be the part where he died.

De'Andrae White

Vroom vroom mf😭

GamerLegend09

👆🏻🙂 yes

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 3* **Top Two Panels** 🤦🏻‍♂️ oh Gohan **Middle Two Panels** well on the upside at least they don’t have any minions fighting for them? **Bottom Panel** 😱 OH NO THEY LEARNED!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 2* **Top Two Panels** 😆 BAM RIGHT IN THE KISSA **Bottom Right Panel** Good work fam, Golden Boy’s got this **Bottom Left Panel** 😅 dooon’t worry, you 2 still put a good enough fight…..😌 specially you Hercule, Prime Example Father move back there

Dean Zamp

It's fucking fire aye

Klutz

So, what's thr timeline for the two Android 18s? Like, which one was absorbed by cell, and which one was save by Gohan? Was 18 only cloned after the saga?

Dusty Farqaharson

Finally DBZ Golden Age Chapter 12 is here

ShadowRipper

Se que no le hará nada pero igual es muy satisfactorio ver su reacción antes del golpe

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 1/Cover* 😆 SO COOL!!! 😁 a literal look back to their first 2 interactions where he unconsciously uses his hidden Saiyan Power and their 2nd interaction (after he pounds Chi-Chi’s Tuna 😏) Before said power is awakened tooooo round 3 after 7 or 6 years maybe less🤩🤩🤩🤩 😉 here we go