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42. The Lions of Dawrtaine I

🕑 Added 2021-06-01 15:18:17 +0000 UTC

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I had a starting place for each character, but then they led the way after that. Really, the biggest struggle was just making sure my ideas didn't interfere with their journeys. When I gave the characters space, they revealed themselves to be so much more interesting than anything I planned.

Alexander Dupree

Hahaha. I love how Milo tries so hard to understand the world around and does such a good job of getting close and then having his mind fucking blown by Hallon or the General because people are just almost impossible to model. I'm still sad about Noor but I think you did an excellent job of showing the differences between adults who have faced death and the child who only thinks he's jaded. The emotional distance that Milo has because of his trauma pushing his anger into "logical" retaliation (no idea if you intended that or it just came through from your instincts about the character) and self destructive justifications which aren't overly dramatic.


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