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94. The King of the Forest II

🕑 Added 2021-01-02 17:48:10 +0000 UTC

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Kotawa Ma

I had a really stong case of déjà vu at the start of this chapter, I'm not sure why though

Adrian Gorgey

Intense. Eight and Yuki together have a truly obscene amount of qi - I love it!

Imran

Thanks! So this is their hail mary? It doesn't sound like there's anything left if the attack fails.

3seed

There are two reasons why I changed the perspective: 1. The immediacy. There's a sense of distance when Eight merges with Yuki that I didn't want for the novel's biggest fight scene. I'd much rather people feel Eight's more embodied experiences. 2. The struggle of writing these latest chapters. When I struggle writing, it usually means that I'm either (a) having a hard time articulating a point or (b) I've strayed from the direction the story wants to go. There aren't any deep philosophical quandaries in these chapters, so I ruled out (a). I also felt like the order of events was correct, which ruled out (b). Honestly, I was stumped. I figured maybe it was the stress of the holiday season and end of year catching up with me. Then it hit me one morning (too early) that I had the perspective wrong, which was why I was struggling so much. I jumped out of bed and ran to the computer to edit all three chapters in preparation for today.


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