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Sexy Sect Babes: Chapter Twenty Eight

🕑 Added 2022-09-01 16:41:26 +0000 UTC

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Guadsman Miku

No worries mate

Blue Fishcake

My humblest apologies! I completely spaced on releasing new chapters on Patreon.

Guadsman Miku

Blue did an oopsie it seems

Weed Pigeon

Reddit just got Part 28, where's part 29 for us Level 1s :(

Blue Fishcake

Beta Readers have it. It's now officially two chapters long. Which means that I'm once again technically not late :D

Blue Fishcake

Hold your horses, I'm just a few hours from completion. And I'm still within forty eight hours :P That is technically still within the bounds of 'tomorrow'! Just finishing up the epilogue now.

john grissom

"Today or tomorrow" just stop setting a time frame of when to expect things. Just sets up disappointment when you don't deliver.

Jason Hornbuckle

I like this guy better than the guy in Sexy Space Babes, personally.

PalindromeJoe

Dang, now I'm interested in that original ending!

Christian White

Woohoo! Thanks Blue. Now to check every 5 minutes for the next two days! Edit: Though I'm glad you're getting more practice with combat scenes. As much as you say they are difficult to write, the end product is always really damn good!

Blue Fishcake

Should be out today or tomorrow :D It could have been out two days ago, but I realized that I'd kind of written myself into a corner with that ending. I'm much happier with this new ending and I feel it will give me a lot more fun options going forward. Thanks for your patience and all that. I know these last few chapters have been a real slog. (Which will teach me to write a story with a lot of 'combat scenes' when I know I struggle with them)

Christian White

Hey Blue! Any timetable on the next one? Dying to know what Jack's ace is

Darth Hypno

I would say that the main plot of sexy space babes is the protagonist having an effect on the world around him. In sexy sect babes the world around him has an effect on the protagonist.

Andrew Webb

However I would argue that the secondary characters in this story have more personality and are more interesting than in Space Babes.

Darth

I'm really loving this series so far, though I have to admit I am less invested in the current MC than the MC of Space Babes. He's just harder to empathize with for me

Folly Industries

Damn. You've got me really hoping you'll pull trick with Kang.

Moth

You know how to always leave us on the edge of our seats, Blue. Excited for the next one!

anonymous

"the Scandinavian miner roared as she charged" -> as he charged

White Neko Knight

Playing music in a foreign language is an effective. Perhaps he'll tell her that It Has To Be This Way.

Allen Mainville

Whatever Jack’s Ace in the hole is, it’s bound to be a hell of a show.

Carlos Torres

I get the feeling the back up will be an infusion of "Nano Machines Son!".

Vanathor

Supersoldier Serum being delivered by rocket needle? The main character does need some sort of method to get with Ren after all, and An was *barely* within what he could handle

Orion Dye

Its usually 2 weeks before the next chappie. Well see if he gets the next one out sooner.

White Neko Knight

He also said that a .02 variance would rip him apart. So it's some sort of enhancement.

Root

Damnit, whats the backup? He said he didnt have time to make new drones, so it cant be that...

White Neko Knight

The Kang scene was worth the wait.

Blue Fishcake

Fixed, thanks :D

Andrew

Thank you!

Blue Fishcake

I was hoping to have this book finished by the start of this month and intended to take a two week break before the next. That has not panned out :P Either way, I'll be finishing the book as intended - and we can consider the pay break a fine for being slow :D

Jason Hornbuckle

"Jack fired his boosters, throwing her off him as he skidded along the crowd." Prob supposed to be "ground" not "crowd" “God knows, I’ve felt more alive these past few months than I ever did in my entire before.” Seems like the word "life" is missing

Timothy Walsh

Fantastic addition and can hardly wait to see how it all wraps up. Gotta ask though, what's with the notification that payment on patreon is paused this month?

Blue Fishcake

Have I ever finished a chapter without a cliffhanger? I'm genuinely not sure.

Blue Fishcake

Nah, I'll keep writing until the book is finished. Only then am I going on break. It'll just be the second half of this month rather than the first :D

Nick

This is a worse cliffhanger than the last one

Deinos

One cliff after another, I'll call you Cliffman from now on. Although it's a good cliff if there is something like that

mike wade

its ok. your only mortal. im assuming that we wont be getting anymore until next month?

Christian White

Thanks Blue! Now to resume the torturous wait for another week!

Christopher Manoff

Kang was a good man. He was done right by. Another spectacular chapter, my friend.


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