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Sexy Sect Babes: Chapter Twenty Nine

🕑 Added 2022-09-16 12:03:26 +0000 UTC

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Harrison F

edit suggestion: It was a curious thing. So short that a man could easily step over it, yet dotted with an intricate silver filigree in a language he couldn’t even begin to understand. One did not need to *be* an inquisitor to see the hand of the hidden master in this.

Alex

About how big exactly are the microbots? Like a grain of sand?

Ove S

... the likes of Yin and An. Don't you mean Ren and An?

Andrew Webb

I love this is his tech-up, but I am sad it doesn't address his inability to safely romance Ren.

Nicholas Payne

Good shout, that's good imagery

Tictack$

Hey Blue found a typo. "but the monster the Hidden Master had summoned to defeat the treacherous hidden master." Why would Jack fight himself?

Lord Dave

The other scene which comes to mind is the villain from Big Hero Six

Tim Wolff

I can't help but get the image of Megamind emerging from the swarm of robots shouting "PRESENTATION!" when reading about that microbot swarm.

Matt Barron

There are multiple typos throughout the story. Also I would of liked to of seen An and Ren's reaction to the aftermath of the great fight :(

Kurtis S Whittington

Ah, the joy of the meme references. Nicely pulled.

UnHommeEtrange

"Ignoring the sight of Yin and Ren at his side", doesn't he mean An or Lin instead of Yin ? I also spotted a few typos but it's not easy on phone to find the exact sentence. "were members of the militia or their* immediate family".

Justin

Suggestion: -a reminder that only be pulling together can we triumph. -> -a reminder that only <b>by </b>pulling together can we triumph.

Ya Boi Klepto

Beautiful

Andrew

Thank you!

Blue Fishcake

Yes indeedy :D I had the idea and spent the longest time avoiding it because I was worried that would be the immediate comparison. Then I got over myself and realized that a good bit of conceptual tech is a good bit of conceptual tech. It's not like I've ever cared about being 'original' before :P

Orion Dye

Whelp he’s slowly increasing his tech base. Sooner or later I’m sure hell go full nano or else upgrade his swarm to do more functions than just combine and move. Cool volume, will be looking forward to the next one.

CM

The new nanite cloud, that's basically the same as the one from the movie Big Hero 6 right? Either way that was a really awesome fight. Thanks for the story!

Marcin

Technology is the ultimate horror... :D

amogusboyboss@gmail.com

I think you mixed up Kang and Gao in the funeral part. Great chapter still!

Blue Fishcake

Fixed, thanks :D

Blue Fishcake

Fixed, thanks :D

Abhishek

“So long, old man.” Kang murmured to himself.( Isn't Kang dead)

Arkyrion

Unless Kang's ghost stuck around for the funeral, I think you switched Kang for Gao in a few paragraphs.

The Fire Piper

Spectacular as usual! Thank you!

HandsyUncleTickles

Haha nanite cloud go squish

Christopher Manoff

Now that, that was badass


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