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Sexy Steampunk Babes: Chapter Twelve

🕑 Added 2024-01-11 20:56:44 +0000 UTC

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Blue Fishcake

They're different. The Skeleton just hasn't been described yet.

Andrew Lechner

Is there a difference between the Skeleton and the Floats, because here they are described as two distinct training grounds, while they were talked about as one thing early in the story.

Harrison F

Feel better Blue!

Blue Fishcake

Felt iffy yesterday but ultimately fine. Been sick as a dog today. Just warning ya'll in case this doesn't clear up after tonight.

MarakEvans

psst... Griffith... *cough*

Folly Industries

I'd held out some hopes and that perhaps the betrothed would have been a second world hopper individual or something. But I think that ship is thoroughly crushed with this stream. Regardless seeing her perspective was pretty interesting. And we left off on quite the lovely cliffhanger about the flashbang. You're always so good at teasing the next week's chapter

Lanze

sigh. the nsfw parts are always my favorites. My friends have me reading a lot of smut targeted for women so it is SO DAMN nice to read some targeted at men. but the uncle dynamic to his team is very endearing.... siiiiiiiiiiiigh. I GUESS i love it smh my head

MarakEvans

First: Same. I also want to know when Will meets Bonnie's Fam. Second: You've been hit by... You've been struck by... A Smooth CliffHanger!

aj0413

yeah, have to agree with this; could take or leave the setting, but the MC is the best so far

MarakEvans

Hmm... this is where I would foreshadow something... Like having two silent cloaked figures standing across from Lady Ashfield. *Must add Drama*

Andrew

Thank you!

Found&Lost

Two things: First: couldn't Will spend his break with our dwarf and her family of merchants and craftsmen? They would be quite happy to capitalize on being able to salvage things. Second, you couldn't have added another paragraph or two of mommy writing to her black sheep of a son or instead heading over there to see wtf is going on?

Blampie

This story is arguably shaping up to be your best. Not much of a fan of steampunk, pirates, or patchouli, and this dude wants to be the steampunk pirate king. Still, this MC is superior, imo, to your previous MC's. Nice work.

Blue Fishcake

Ask and ye shall receive.

allsampah

I would love to get a map of this world. Obviously the northern houses border orcish tribes. Where are the rebellious elven kingdoms located? Also, a listing of known noble houses would be great.

SmallTownBo

Cute chapter. And as always, I love other perspectives. Keep it up Blue!

MarakEvans

Obligatory Beach Episode?

Batou

As always a nice surprise. I hope William also finds some peace even if it is only for a few hours

kaalveiten

Should probably elsewhere in the Ashfield manor, not somewhere, if you're referring to her desk in the latter part.

MarakEvans

Later on, I think Bonnlyn might have an advantage in logistics and managing. Not sure if it would qualify as stealth MVP.

MarakEvans

That's a clip for the end credits (if it was an anime). Black screen Audio of paper letter being removed from envelope. Lady Janet Ashfield let's out a deep sigh. Cut to close up of letter in freefall. Camera tracking a falling letter. Camera pans down to a pile of letters. Camera slowly unzooms to show growing pile of letters next to a desk?/chair? without revealing Lady Janet Ashfield [Lady Janet Ashfield] “What in the devil’s name is a ‘flashbang’ spell?” *slams fist on table* Camera shakes briefly as the pile is disturbed and scattered. Roll Credits/or the credits were rolling the entire time?

Erik Hansen

This is great. William has a chance to trade the flashbang to his mom for her to trade; it won't be to get the marriage canceled, but he'll definitely get something helpful out of it. And, Bonnlyn coming in clutch as the stealth MVP to make it look like William is actually going to snub Tala over practice time. If she finds out that HE created the spell, she is going to get desparate about spinning the narrative to his mom about what a good influence she is.

Third Ailing Primate

"What in the devil’s name is a ‘flashbang’ spell?” The dough

MarakEvans

YEEEES!


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