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Sexy Steampunk Babes: Chapter Twenty Eight

🕑 Added 2024-05-06 09:24:37 +0000 UTC

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Blue Fishcake

At the end of the book the releases for the final three chapters default to weekly. Then I need to rebuild the backlog for the new book.

mraanonymous

Can't wait for the next chapter. Anyone got an ETA or a schedule?

aera

Very enjoyable chapter. What is the schedule for the last 2 chapters of the series, now that it is complete ?

Dancingrage

Loooong chapter following another one.

Alexander

I m kinda confused since I only subscribed this month, but is the 2week delay between chapter a normal thing or is it just because it was a long one ?

Blue Fishcake

It's a discord position.

9 o’clock

How do you become a beta reader?

Blue Fishcake

Beta readers have it :D

Random Information

Come on, you don't have to kill off ALL the characters.

Blue Fishcake

Fuck me, it's at 5000 words and still going strong. This scene keeps going and going. And ideas for more scenes keep popping up. At this point I'm just going to make it a two-parter to fit the rest in. I'll post up what I've got tonight and then continue on with the rest. So yay, ya'll get more words before the end of the book :D

John

it is wednesday my dudes

Jay

Actually are we still on for tomorrow? Doesn't Blue usually say when the Beta readers have the chapter?

The Fire Piper

Just one more day... just one day more...

DMR1

Playing dead is a perfecty rational play, and there are healers on hand, so next time Verity just needs to kneecap the bitch. If they can replace a jaw, they can replace a kneecap.

Laenthis Tranchesoleil

Eh feels unlikely in such a world. Given the status of men it's probably a given that they have the disgusting "key / lock" analogy we have but reversed. To them a girl who manages to lay countless men is amazing, and an "easy" man is a slut. So there's no glory to be found in being a "kraken slayer" in that sense.

MarakEvans

No?

MarakEvans

Been thinking about the Griffith and Lindholm scene in CH 26. What if "kraken" was a euphemism for lady parts... the violent and fishy smelling kind. Would his Aunt bestow him the title knowingly? Or would it be more believable that the public bestows such meaning onto the title, to William's chagrin? And, specifically, his Aunt's dismay.

Skonnchy

Wednesday is okay.. I'm definitely not tweaking out.. I'm okay..

Blue Fishcake

Wednesday is looking like the likely candidate. A little slower than I'd planned, but with it being the epilogue (and last chapter being longer than a double), I'm perfectly fine with that. My apologies to those of you biting at the bit for more of them sweet-sweet words and my thanks for your patience :D

Elkaziel

4:32AM on Sunday June 3, 3742….that’s my best guess anyway.

Skilk

Can we have a hint as to what day of the week it'll be?

mike wade

It’s being dumped into the sea, not the river I believe.

Cerbero300

Hello, good morning. Will there be a chapter today?

mike wade

STAY STRONG COMRADE! FOR DEMOCRACY!

Eastman

I have changed my mind we will not survive this delay in the release schedule

SmallTownBo

Are the Krakens attracted to the cores though? I would imagine the only reason the Krakens lair had multiple cores wasn't because they were attracted, but because the cores that fell there couldn't be recovered, and therefore they ended up stacking.

Random Information

On the subject of the latrines, it does seem to contradict part of chapter 4:- "Indeed, on the way over he’d more than once made out the occasional flash of fish darting through the wash kicked up by their vessel’s passage. Something he was sure wouldn’t be the case if the city were dumping waste into it."

MASC

Would be funny if the latrines get emptied and William has to explain to the Queen why a Kraken has suddenly taken residence in their local harbour after the core gets dumped back into the sea. Means he’ll have to give a live demonstration of how he killed a Kraken in front of the kingdom.

Eastman

Eh we've gotten sunday or monday chapter before we will be fine

mike wade

*mr. Incredible voice * “we will get there when we get there!”

Souplizzardo

Wooo hoooo!!!! Go first years :).

Random Information

I hope William brings up the Tala - Verity situation to the judges. If the rules are not changed, someone as strong as Verity could easily kill or severely injure an opponent in such a situation. (And think how much of a catastrophic situation that would have been if Tala was killed.) Tala should thank Verity for not severely injuring her - she's not going to but she should.

John

mommy? i need my chappies

mike wade

I actually asked him this before. He responded that he would be moving right into book two of steampunk.

SmallTownBo

Blue, are you moving right into Steampunk book two, or will there be a vote? I suspect Steampunk book two would win, but I still got Sect in my heart

Jay

My inner fiend demands gratification now, but take your time. Please don't get burned out. As long as you communicate it's clear that everyone here are very willing to accept delays for the sake of your health (and writing quality too, but your health is more important).

Blue Fishcake

For those asking about this weeks chapter, I'm most certainly not taking the week off. With that said, it - being effectively the epilogue - is another long chapter. It most definitely won't be Friday, but I don't intend for it to be a week on Friday either. Beyond that, I couldn't say :D Making sure everything is wrapped up properly will take a bit of time.

mike wade

Perhaps someone of the world war 1 or 2 era? Just not with an education like William, or they would of already have radios. Perhaps someone who died young?

Harrison F

Yes, what’s the schedule looking like right now?

DMR1

So... Shard carriers, crystal network... I'm beginning to think SOMEONE in house Blackstone just maybe, possibly, might be a transplant the way William is. Not in the noble bloodline, but someone who got their attention and is being well paid.

The Fire Piper

Just double checking, we are not getting a chapter this week correct?

The Fire Piper

I believe it was a bolt-bow, not a spell bolt, which uses ether gas and not a spell charge. Or something like that.

MarakEvans

Rereading... Did William use 3 of his spell charges? And he shot one spell bolt at Tala at the end? Did he power nap a spell charge or does he have more than 3 spell charges?

mike wade

Can’t be, unless she can shapeshift. They shower together.

The Fire Piper

"It is if you’ve got a pair of testicles,” Marline muttered - look! More foreshadowing of our femboy!

The Fire Piper

Totally agree with you. I think the reactions are going to be better than the fight itself :)

Laenthis Tranchesoleil

Aaaaaaaaah it was amazing ! Thanks for the chapter ! I NEED an immediate reaction POV from Tala, her mom or William's mom. Or the three. And the queen. And Griffith. I need to see everyone gawk so badly because no one actually believed he could do it especially after the change of battlefield at the last minute !

Dankenobi1

My bet is its been flushed to sea as all the sailors for the floats came down with stomach problems meaning he'll end up giving up his core

Gjim

Next chapter starts with William digging through the latrine with the line " even in victory still in shit." As he plans to bake party cupcakes with an annoyed Marline just glaring at him doing the Jackie Chan meme with her hands slightly raised above her head in annoyance. Now the question is what problem will he have to miracle himself out of next.

Monday

Verity really said “Puny Blackstone”

Jon Thorn

Made my day. Love the stories as always and somehow you turned my day from horrible to ending off with a smile on my face. The way you describe the world makes me want to go there.

Gabriel Felix

There are no words to express my excitement in this chapter

Hunter

Harpy venom bomb sounds like an excellent new invention!!!! God the idea of invention and innovation in a magical world is so damn appealing!!!!

Hunter

Dear god I need to read the aftermath!!!!!

Catamaran

Yeah I'm thinking it would be a good move for Blackstone to launch a coup during the match that they know everyone is watching.

Jay

He's absolutely going to be able to visit his sister, because his next conversation with his mother is probably going to go something like this: "Hello Mother" "What do you want William" " I just wanted to let you know I've accepted an engagement proposal, and I think it will make you quite happy" "... And what could possibly make you think that?" "well, you're looking at the new Prince of Lindholm" "..." "..." "... which... *ahem*... which of the Queen's daughters are you betrothed to?" "All of them. And the Queen herself too" "..." "..." "... How?!?!?" "How isn't important, what is important is the fact that the next Queen of Lindholm will have Ashfield blood running through her veins. The entire royal bloodline will in fact. I'm sorry for the chaos I've caused but I think we can both agree that this is a better outcome than the plans you had for our House, can we not?" "... Yes" "So all is forgiven and I can come home for the summer break?" "Yes, we'll be waiting for you, your Highness" "No need for titles between family. Love you mom" "I love you too William.

Jeremy Grundy

I was wondering if they have sound dampening spells do they have sound enhancement spells? The public or special viewers being able to hear their banter would be funny. If William didn’t at least lay 5 to 1 odds on them winning with most of their gold I will be very disappointed, and so will Bonny. If William powdered the harpy venom and put it into a grenade like device would it reconstitute with their perspiration or breathing it in and cause paralysis?

James Ryan Bell

I feel like the next chapter is gonna be the party after and all the girls feelings on how insane the upset of the match was.

Jay

House Blackstone has to have a contingency planned in case they lost. There's no way they would have assumed a victory over a cadet that they strongly suspect killed Al'Hundra. There's also no way they'll meekly accept being beaten. A house as proud and ambitious as Blackstone isn't going to just accept being forced into political irrelevance after coming so close to gaining ultimate power. There's almost certainly going to be a core of their allies who will never accept the abolishment of slavery given the insight we got into Tala's reason for her personal opinion on slavery. They'll shed the more opportunistic and pragmatic allies but they won't be as alone and isolated as the Queen thinks. The Queen has admitted that she doesn't really understand human strategic thinking, I wouldn't be surprised if Blackstone deciding to make a drastic and desperate move in the immediate aftermath of the match catches the Crown off guard.

FireFox

That was well worth the wait. Got to admit, at the end when it turns out Tala's Crystal Network(tm) isn't as unique as she thought... I couldn't even.. well played good sir, well played.

Andrew

Thank you!

mike wade

He Probably should take a break.

mike wade

It can be. Remember the phone call to Williams mother to prove that the spell bolt is his? It’s explicitly stated They recorded it as proof if she claims it as as the families later on.

Mikołaj

Do you plan on taking a break here or continuing weekly release?

JR9364

Love it. If the crystal broad cast can be recorded, you know everyone is going to be combing though it second by second.

MarakEvans

Imagine your country getting Oppenheimer'd by your ex because he specifically didn't want to go out with you... Ouch, I felt that one and I'm into the ladies..

Chargcake

Nice, eagerly waiting for the aftermath, hopefully soon

MarakEvans

Yeah, I want before and after pictures of Smug Olzenya and Humble-r Olzenya. Frame it on a wall.

MarakEvans

Very Curvy Elf Milf

MarakEvans

Aye, Lady Blackstone will suspect something, but she will take a while to accept his "communication beads" being within his capabilities. She will re-evaluate after the Live Demonstration of the Spell Bolt. But the Blackstones will be sus of everyone anyways. That the Ashfields may have "stolen" a secret with military applications... Either way, the relationship strains whether William intentionally exploited it or not.

MarakEvans

Can't tell if I've been shaking to the cold or how freaking wild the ride was. Nice chapter. Very nice.

Wotün, the Butterlord

Outstanding work, Blue!

Blue Fishcake

The logic from her being that needing to basically 'cheat' was beneath her. It's a dumb argument, but people can be dumb :D Plus, the match hadn't actually started yet :P Either way, that's my logic and I'm sticking with it.

Jacob

Awesome chapter and definitely worth the wait. I'm curious if Lady Blackstone might recognize William's team's coordination for what it was while watching through the orbs, since they secretly use a similar tactic. If she does that will have very interesting consequences (especially if she does spell-slot math and deduces that William's version is *far* cheaper). If the Blackstones ever shared that secret with Lady Ashfield then they might now think Lady Ashfield has betrayed them and is backing (or directing) William. If they didn't share it with the Ashfields, then they now have more insight to William's true capabilities than the queen, which might have interesting ramifications as they both jockey over him. Either way I fully expect an anime-style "How did they defeat and/or steal my secret technique?!" tantrum from Tala 😁

Dancingrage

Just like the Queen has a backup plan for that situation? Yelena is showing herself to be shockingly decisive on things.

Allen Mainville

Definitely my favorite chapter you’ve written for this series so far. I was grinning like an idiot the whole time Team 7 was talking to each other after the battle.

Serpent_Bon 274

Cool chapter! Excited for the next!

MarakEvans

! *is waking up to Blue Fishcake

Ryno Botha

REALLY looking forward to the aftermath

John

great chapter. can't wait for the reactions next chapter

BelligerentGnu

Enjoy your crow, Tala.

cyrgon

I really love the character development in this, both for the team’s opponents and for Olzenya at the end. She’s really come a long way, hasn’t she? Going from a prickly need to be the best to a true team player has been a long journey, and I’m happy to see it! She seems to represent the “elven common sense” perspective likely shared by other elves, and recognizes the giant leaps in capabilities spawned by William’s inventions—given that she’s clearly politically aware (eg her sister’s grudge and being a scion of House Sumond), I hope she’ll be playing a bigger part in the politicking that follows. William will need to walk a tight rope if he wants to forestall conflict in a way that doesn’t give either side cause to go after the other, and elven politics aren’t something that he learned in a previous life, haha. (After the… intimate… dorm celebrations later that evening, of course.) I hope the team pick up their spell-bolts after being paralyzed—and wonder if the back of the rounds will show evidence of propulsion if others acquire spent/missed ammo… Looking forward to seeing more of the Ashfield/Blackstone and Crown reactions to this win, but it doesn’t seem like he can hold his end of the promise with his sister to come home for the holidays if he’s now voided such long-term plans of the Ashfield family. Not to mention that the Crown will likely send a few hidden minders to ensure his safety and all.

The Fire Piper

Woot! Hooray the conquering heroes!

Third Ailing Primate

From personal experience, 6 months as an outsider doesn't mean anything compared to 3 years + a life before

SmallTownBo

Damn, Im not gonna lie, I almost expected them to lose. Or for something to happen mid match. But I'm hyped that they did win! If only for the Queen to show up again.

aj0413

Welp, who wants to bet sore losers have a backup plan to try and steal the stone/Will anyway?

Caleb Gurney

Bright and early update! Good work, and worth the wait!

MASC

Chapter ended perfectly and happy that Olzenya got a big win along with great character development. She’s come a long way from her first introduction.

Cormac

Thanks for the chapter. I actually thought that the fight was disappointing. Bonnlyn faffing about in the open despite six months of training was bizarre. And then Verity. I stopped reading for a few moments to process that. How can she be so uselessly stupid after all this time?

DMR1

If he wanted to be crafty, he'd "give" that one to his teammate and keep the one hiding in the outhouse.

RottenTangerine

Thanks for the chapter!

Mario Beretic

Nice. Worth the wait.

Aresswe

Hell ye, loved the chapter it was great! Cant wait to see all the reactions later lol

Dancingrage

Yeah, this was well worth the wait for. Cleverness wins the day as it should, and now Tala has to follow through. William played several mean hands of Texas Hold-em back to back pulling this off! EDIT: can't reply worth a damn on mobile because you can't Shift-Enter. I suspect Eleanor will suss out that somehow Will made communications on his side, and possibly that he did it better. Tala's mid-fight realization that she had to put on hold was priceless...That *William* may have been the driving force on the innovation, just to get out of that marriage, is going to do horrible things to her self-esteem. Finding out your fiance *reinvented* warfare to get away from you...ouch. And now, after all's done and said, Yelena will slay our boy William....by crushing his pelvis to dust under her hips! Also, don't think we didn't notice the hints all this time in regards to Marline.

Patrick Chang

This chapter made my subscription today soooo worth it! Keen for the fallout

Dancingrage

Whipping up a better comm system than the Blackstone's secret Trump card, no less!

Amit Gupta

Also super curious what William's going to do with the public core now.

Baron Von Mott

Definitely the right choice to have the whole fight in one chapter! Great stuff as always!

Amit Gupta

Great writing. The objection from Sala felt a bit...dumb. From a third-year cadet, in a presumably great third year team, who knows that a Mithril core and Blackstone reputation at stake, questioning their commander's orders just before the match felt forced.

Blue Fishcake

Thanks! I'm a firm believer that the best products come from people utterly convinced that they're one errant word choice from fucking it all up, losing their entire fan-base and being revealed for the fraud they are. The fear and neurosis is what gives the writing flavor :D (That's mostly a joke. Make no mistake, I'm a very happy person ninety percent of the time :D )

Found&Lost

Fucking awesome chapter... No skeet comment though /cries

Footbraclet

Homie just casually whipping up a comm system, oh Queenies gonna love that invention

Kaywye

Hell yeah!! As a former comms guy I just gotta say...Tactical Comnet for the win!

Sea Wolf

Side note on second read through: This is now the fourth innovation from William and probably tied for most impressive. He can, at least temporarily, outdo an Blackstone Advantage that may possibly be something like a house secret. And he can arguably teach an entire Royal army to do it. And the Queen doesn't even know about that one yet. Yeah that'll be an interesting talk later I'm sure. Possibly several interesting talks as the Blackstones and Ashfields try to figure out what the hell happened.

astatine

That was super well paced and written! I'm glad you took the extra time if this is what we get from it

CatMaster

Man this was definitely worth the wait. Almost thought they'd lose for a second there, but of course William just casually drops some world-altering technology at the last second.

Eastman

Definitely well worth the wait the fight was awesome

Sea Wolf

One hundred percent worth the wait. Recover as you need, Blue. But yeah I'm very much looking forward to the fallout and aftermath.

Divinor

Worth the wait. Looking forward to the aftermath.

Guille Hummel

Lets goooooooooo its hereeeeee


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