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Sexy Steampunk Babes: Chapter Thirty Seven - NSFW

🕑 Added 2024-07-26 13:36:15 +0000 UTC

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Hue Man

I see that the part of “Will’s mom putting the contraception charm on him after catching him with one of the maids” was changed to “Marline off hand commenting that there will be many noble women after him, so he might want to get a contraception charm”. One reads as not wanting their delinquent to making an army of bastards, no matter how useful they could be, and the other reads as “bro there are going to be women who want to baby trap you, you might want to get a magic vasectomy”. Both make logical sense, but I like the second one better because it is funnier. But since he only recently got the contraception charm put on, there could be a chance that he has children that he does know about with some Maids, that one Dwarf blacksmith in the academy, and the Orc sailor from chapter 4?

Tony

I just love the smut with a plot, nice to see that the Sexy dark elf gave as good as she got.

Richard Anderson

That was enjoyable, every young man’s dream when stuck in a classroom with a hot teacher.

andreas

So who collects? Blue?

bob semple

Gimme

Blue Fishcake

Beta readers have it :D

morten.p.h

I have 300 on Monday at 02:00 (AM for you Americans) UTC+2, since that's technically stil Sunday in the US

Floplays

i saw the notification, i saw the right pfp AND IT WAS A LIKE :-(

Isak Mark

I think your patreon subscribers are more mature compared to other web novel writers. Many have seen multiple series ruined or abandoned because of pressures. This comment from reddit puts it into good words. https://old.reddit.com/r/ProgressionFantasy/comments/1czlcdc/im_not_feeling_the_same_for_super_supportive_now/l5ki6x2/ We can see it in this chapter that you were rushing it. It needs revision if you are ever going to publish this story as a book.

mike wade

150$ that it's 11pm eastern time on Saturday

Spintool

I got hundred on Sunday

MarakEvans

Reminder: Uncharged Month Suggestion: "Doooo whatever TF YOU WANNA DOOOOoooo..."

mike wade

Lay your bets people, I got a hundred bucks on Saturday.

Ryan Gammon

As long as your happy with it, there's a reason this is the only patreon I'm on

Blue Fishcake

Well, seeing as a number of people are saying to forego the attempted extra chapter and just have a regular release on... let's split the difference and say Friday, it seems it won't be Thursday after all. Which I'm hardly going to complain about :D I'll not deny that I was rushing a bit to get this one out the door, so some extra time for some extra love and care is actually quite... nice :D As ever, thanks for being awesome people.

MarakEvans

"Are you sure about that?" *John Cena Theme*

mike wade

Push it to Saturday. Don't burn yourself out.

Floplays

guys its thursday, where is the capter?

Drunk Pop-Tart

The great leader has spoken!

fezman81

Honestly yeah, a reset would be the wise call. Pushing all the way to Saturday will give Blue more time to edit and more space to breathe, creatively speaking. Better to do a light jog for 1 mile than try and sprint it but collapse before you're even halfway.

SmallTownBo

But you're still gonna aim for another Sunday release? It's just going to keep compounding. Just release the next on on Saturday, and start fresh, one a week again.

The Fire Piper

Hooray for Thursday!

Blue Fishcake

Welp, I knew Wednesday was ambitious for me. Thursday it is.

SpecterJedi

I don’t need it… I don’t need it… I don’t need it…

SmallTownBo

I imagine that she taught him how to use it, rather than have it permanently applied

The Fire Piper

Is true, and the fact it will allow non mages to fly them. However, a hybrid in addition to regular ICB shards would allow for a class of super shards capable of much more than what a regular shard can do.

Spintool

The whole thing with the shards is that there Relatively rare. Sure there’s a lot more of them than Cores but I bet that there’s only a thousand of them in the entire kingdom. The benefit of having planes not running On shards is that you can mass produce them.

Found&Lost

Any update on when I should start spamming refresh?

Hue Man

So does William have to go back to his mother or whoever put that contraception charm on him, or can he remove it himself? I thought it was a good thing to create many bastards, since they would have more mages/members to benefit the house.

J03MAN

We had half a book of buildup and then a bunch of other shit happened for the second half of the book that killed the momentum. I think a little more buildup in this scene is warranted given how stalled that plot thread has been until this chapter.

mike wade

We had an almost an entire book worth of will teasing her. I think that’s enough buildup. If your for some reason reading this without the prior book for context, then it doesn’t matter anyways. You’re already utterly confused.

The Fire Piper

I had a thought. What if you made a hybrid shard? Have an internal combustion engine but a Mithril shard to provide more lift? You could either have an amazingly fast lighter than air aircraft, or stock it with much more ordinance, or deck it with so much armor no other shard could touch it.

J03MAN

I had trouble being invested in this. There was just no buildup, it felt like reading a stand alone porno compared to their previous scenes that had a lot more tension and characterization. I feel like it needs a few paragraphs of her anticipating propositioning William, conspiring to be the delivery girl, and thinking about how she can finally release the tension he wound up in her. Especially when this is released as a second book this scene could use some work reestablishing their dynamic.

Found&Lost

Thank you

Gabriel Felix

Curious as to what verity is thinking. Jeolousy or "gosh, William getting rapes"

O

While I appreciate the speed, please try not to over do it.

Hue Man

Thank you Blue Fishcake, my thirst has been quenched. Great chapter. I think it is hilarious that William is a brat. Glad to know that Griffith wasn't told to seduce Will and her suspicious actions last chapter was her being nervous. And there wouldn't be drama if there was not a misunderstanding at the end.

Morpheus

Her reaction to his question is interesting. Given your worlds being gender flipped to greater or lesser degrees, in this case particularly the use of the term 'honey spoon'. Obviously it means the stereotype is using hot guys to get girls taking rather than hot girls to get guys talking. Makes me wonder if she just hadn't considered the idea of HER being in the semi non-con situation of being ordered to seduce a man. That is of course assuming that she ISN'T in that position. The queen might still have said, or implied, something to her. The fact that she DID have a thing for him making it easier of course. The queen is also well aware of Will flirting with Griffith, considering he did it in front of her pretty openly. (Griffith even blushed). Even if just on a 'friend' level. Yelena MUST have at least talked with her about Will and her crush. I'm VERY curious to know what conversations ACTUALLY happened there. I believe her that she wasn't directly ordered to fuck Will, but I'd still be shocked if there wasn't some 'girl talk' on the topic at some point. Purely between friends of course.

9 o’clock

Thanks

Basil Harpham

Orc

9 o’clock

Can someone tell me which one is Verity I forgot and I’m too lazy to look back through the book to figure it out

MarakEvans

*cringes harder under face palm* Yes. I know she feels she needs to do something. No. she isn't going to be subtle about it. ... Maybe. She might ask the right questions to prevent herself embarrassment. Her mother? On how to protect and impress boys? ... Sorry @Uub, *sigh* yeah, she is a fool for him.

Szulczyn

Well, he’s no longer a member of his mother’s house, he’s the head of his own, so she can hardly have a say. Only way he, or his children could have a claim is if his sister’s line died out, and even then it would be his wife that would take over if he had one. Although I’m not sure about the wife part, because while it is a matriarchal society, males can still rule houses, as William does, but possibly only if there’s no females in said house. Blue would have to give some more details.

The Uub

She is already a fool head over heels for him.

The Uub

It's probably morphed into an expression of horror by being found out, walked in on, and the realization of who it actually was who discovered them about to "re-coitus"

Cerbero300

I love that they play with reverse roles. It makes it more interesting.

Blue Fishcake

As to the above comment, which really didn't need to be removed as I did say I was aiming for another chapter this week as this was just the second half of last week's in my mind :P Tuesday or Wednesday is the current planned window (though we know how my plans go, so take that with some salt) with the following chapter on the Sunday. Then I can have the chapter after that on the Friday - and I'll be back on track once more :D

DMR1

You may not realize this, but this is the sort of question that tends to burn out authors from engaging with their readers.

Found&Lost

I don't know. I think she'd be funny and cute pouting. With Veritys innocence it's just horrifying.

mike wade

Probably mad with an unconscious spike of jealousy. She's to good of a person to be motivated by petty jealousy alone.

Found&Lost

DMR1

That's the best case scenario. Given their positioning she might think the Crown ordered him killed and she just took him down. That's the worst case scenario. No matter what though... it's gonna be interesting...

Batou

Is it me or is it getting hot in here 🥵

Morpheus

Both is good

Morpheus

Well your Emoji is already verity's POW of William's face. Hopefully his big 'fucked the teacher' grin will assure her that he wasn't being taking advantage of.

MarakEvans

Bonnlyn.

SmallTownBo

Ah, the question. Is she mad with jealousy? Or does she think Griffith attacked her team leader?

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter and the cliffhanger.

Isak Mark

Next chapter is going to be so amazing

werotan

Blasted cliffs...

DMR1

He's nobility. Having kids is kind of a requirement.

Hunter

Dang it, I was hoping to read the next chapter while I had downtime at work. Cant enjoy the nsfw chapters when I’m not home. Also, my “show reader” setting in safari keeps showing either of the previous 2 chapters instead of this one for some reason.

fezman81

Very relieved Griffith was acting on her own free will, story could've taken an ugly turn there. Still might, if Verity is feeling chivalrous and protective 🙃

Moonlightwind

I’m assuming Verity is assuming this was an older teacher taking advantage of a younger student. Going off that assumption, while I’m sure William probably hates people being protective of him, I think it’s very cute how quickly Verity rushes to his defense, even against her instructor for which there could be serious consequences.

mhaj58

I hope one of the girls gets pregnant, I have always wanted to read one of your characters dealing with parenthood. Jason wasn’t ready and Jack was too busy, I know William is young but did George ever have kids?

Marius Petrauskas

great chapter, cant wait to see how Verity will react :D

MarakEvans

*palms face* No... Verity, please don't make a fool of yourself.

CM

Thanks for the chapter! Calming his quickening pulse as best he could as he tried not to ( state > stare? ) [ Her pants slid down, joined a moment later by his. ( Then later ) His own erection felt like iron in his pants ( The pants were removed prior to this. ) ] looked for all the world like some kind of succubus as she languidly rose ( of > off ) him

bob semple

The magic of a marine-knight Is a pathway to many abilities some consider unnatural.

MaybeASquid

I can her the cry of Verity's mental image William about to crack a planet

MaybeASquid

Thank you, I needed that laugh 🤣😂

MarakEvans

! <3 Edit: *pffft* "honey spoon"

Morpheus

Stick a Kazoo up your pussy, Blast Aether through it.

Dancingrage

Griffith is apparently that flexible, I imagine....

Frederic Vincent

No talking.” She said casually as she looked up at her from between her knees. -> who’s looking up at who?

The Fire Piper

Hmmm... I wonder if William will invent a vibrator at some point 😉

The Fire Piper

Oh no! Lol!

Andrew

Thank you!

Ember

Blue you glorious cheeky bugger, leaving us on a cliffhanger like that. Amazing chapter as always, absolutely cannot wait to see Veritys pov next chapter.

Slade

Oh no what is verity gonna assume today

Jeremy Grundy

In an earlier chapter you wrote that bastards are useful to the family as probable future magic users. He is not the heir so his children would only have a very weak claim. His mother probably wouldn’t encourage his philandering as it would be unseemly to use your son as just breeding stock, but I don’t think she would be overly concerned especially if it made the county much stronger. Strong Magic users would be very valuable.

Blue Fishcake

You're not wrong. Fixing now :D

Morpheus

"She said casually as she looked up at her from between her knees." Lots of pronouns here. some of which must be wrong.

Tim Speller

Ohno.gramaphone

Matthew Zbaracki

Verity! It's not what you...

Bookwyrm

Oof, Verity definitely walked in at a bad time, and given the description of Griffith ‘standing over his prone form’, she definitely walked in on a situation that could be misread. Hopefully, nothing important gets broken.

MockingBird

God I'd kill for a Verity POV next chapter. I can totally see her misunderstanding the situation, and thinking he's been taken advantage of by the much older mentor.

The Uub

Oh. Fucking. Shit. Idk if Verity can contain her little man-crush or if she thinks Joanna is attacking William.

Third Ailing Primate

Oh no Verity, it's not what it looks like!

Dancingrage

Ah, nice, perfect timing. And breakfast is served!

Found&Lost

Anyone but Verify XD

Garrett Anderson

God dammit, Verity, you have terrible timing.


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