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Sexy Steampunk Babes: Chapter Fifty Five

🕑 Added 2024-11-30 06:34:20 +0000 UTC

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Blue Fishcake

Beta readers have it :D

Drunk Pop-Tart

Can't wait, love your stuff.

Trevayne

I have this image of the twins saying "That was just a tactic, we each deserve a full day."

Blue Fishcake

Saturday :D

Blue Fishcake

'Saturday', 'Fierce negotiations over genital time' and 'A salty reach-around'.

Trevayne

The Queen might suspect, however she has lots of work for her spies and figuring out if William is building a new type of shard is probably low on her priority list. Her spies have to worry more about the upcoming civil war and keeping somebody from kidnapping William. After all, she has already got what she thinks of as his big secret, the details of the krakenslayer.

The Fire Piper

It's hype time! Its hype time! All aboard the hype train! Just one more day! *Holds breath in excited antici...........pation*

Conrad34xdsa

So, just one more day til the next chapter. Can we get a hint for what is coming?

Conrad34xdsa

I second that. It would be nice to know how far everything is in relation to each other

MaybeASquid

From what hints have been dropped in the story, I suspect George was a black American than served in either Korea or WW2 and lived through the civil rights movement. He stated he didn't rock the boat in his previous life and it was implied he regretted not being more active in those changes

Business Casual

But they already have reason to believe this may be different by virtue of it coming from Will. The queen knows damn well that Will can and will invent absurd shit. They may not suspect just HOW different it is, but they should know it will be something previously unseen.

Lurkemancer

Don't forget that the military does have engineers of it's own. In fact, there are militaries that send in engineers with the ground-pounders, because having people with mechanical inclinations means that there are people to quickly figure the new toys out for deployment. The cogbrain reads the manual, the cogbrain understands the manual and the cogbrain explains the operation of the new toy to the jarhead. It's also possible that George, after his service, simply became an engineer. Finally, there have been plenty of cases where a military commander that has seen combat vastly underestimated the difficulties with achieving victory. Though in George's case, he does have a point; The tactical and technological advantages he holds genuinely puts him head and shoulders above any potential opponents in the civil war (which I'm now half hoping never actually happens due to William's moves throwing too many wrenches into the works too quickly, making peace the only reasonable option).

Hunter

I keep having to back out because my iPhone resets the page, then my phones “reader” feature seems to picks up the previous stories at the bottom of the page and displays that entire story instead of the one I currently have open. It’s really annoying but atleast I know what’s breaking on my end instead of wrongly assuming I lost my place or opened the wrong story like I used to.

Trevayne

Pretty sure by that standard this book has already had multiple climaxes. Just ask Griffith.

Jacob

Great chapter. No notes :-)

Trevayne

I don't think the twins are part of his group yet. I think Xela was messing with him and used them to fluster him. I expect she has heard of them in passing in previous discussions with William. He is a Count and she is both aware that he needs to marry and who the potential candidates are.

Dancingrage

{facepalm} Didn't the climax just happen? Ba-Dum-Tiss!

Dancingrage

Well, she suspected the moment she spoke with him, and flat out asked him if he had Harrowed himself. His reply was rather carefully worded, but basically was 'I have never sought out to Harrow myself', and it's true, apparently. He's been Harrowed almost his entire existence as William. Meaning Wil accidentally Harrowed himself when he was still a baby, and George, along with the engineering information of a late 20th century military superpower. Wil's aware that, if Marline, Yelena, Piper, and Xela suss it out just from being around him, it'll eventually get out. Right now? He's currently just controlling flow of information, knowing someone's going to have loose lips and let the cat out of the bag. While that's still on the down low, so to speak what he is doing, however, is getting himself a cabal of trusted souls, who he can let in on some of the schematics and plans, who he can trust to keep his secrets (albeit by geis, but what he's got is more than important enough to warrant it!), who understand some of the larger scope. Yelena wants that, and has obviously considered every possible way to put him directly under her, all the way up to having herself and ALL HER DAUGHTERS that weren't attached become the man's harem. And Griffith, because she's got eyes and it was that obvious. The problem is can each trust the other's motivations? They don't know each other well enough yet for that, and Will's got a habit of bucking off in random directions from her point of view. I'd picture Yelena in that dreamscape would be a very strange and humbling experience for her.

Dancingrage

If it's likely he fought in World War II and lived through the craziness that followed, he should know far better than to tempt Murphy, because that is the time period where Murphy's name (alongside Finnegan's) became synonymous with bizarre and unfortunate events crashing through the well-thought plans of mice and men. That he did so in spite of that understanding tells me it's the Harrowing tweaking his mindset, because he wanted to be strong, and as we all know, strength invites challenge.

Trevayne

True, but until they are seen (or heard) in action, why look inside? There are lots of House-specific shard designs. Until they have reason to believe that these are different, why look inside? I agree that once they are heard or are seen to be faster, then they will definitely merit a closer look.

Conrad34xdsa

Unless they look inside and find out there isn’t anywhere to place a shard core.

Conrad34xdsa

Considering William repeatedly quoted Moltke “no plan survives contact with the enemy” I am Surprised that he is forgetting that fact. I wonder that due to the greater stakes and limitations that he was operating on in book one, he had a lot more focus and contingency plans. Bigger point, Has William forgotten that when the Summerfield Scuffle and the Civil war as a whole kicks off, the other empires will gang up on them while the the respective fleets are busy pummeling each other? He has had discussions with the Queen about that eventually happening. William speaks of peace, however he will be stuck with fighting a drawn out war unless he prepares with modern munitions (shape charged rockets, modern explosives, WMD if all else fails) and he would need to stockpile. Also, how long has it been since between meeting the twins and now? Seems a bit abrupt that they are already part of his retinue. Great chapter. Can’t wait to see the Blackstones stealing the secrets of the radio and gunpowder.

Moonlightwind

Hey Blue, I wanted you to know that it makes my day whenever I see a new chapter get posted. There have definitely been quite a few shit days vastly improved by getting to read something from you, so thank you. Anyway, about the chapter, really enjoying getting to know more about Xela. She seems like a smart lady, if more reckless than she first seemed, and her maturity definitely gives her the edge up on William quite a lot. Also since you brought up chopped off a piece of territory by giving it to the Orcs, I looked back at the old map you had posted before. Definitely had the map of Lindholm wrong in my head, but would it be possible to get maybe a more updated map for Lindholm sometime? I definitely thought the Orcs were fighting over a totally separate territory to Lindholm, and I’m realizing that maybe I don’t even know where the capital is on the continent. That and I noticed there is stuff I’m not even really sure what it is? Have you talked about that big island off the coast? Also what is that 4th/5th country you labeled on the old continent, Orich?

Gjim

Is it officially harem o'clock? With William: The Cougar conqueror. Once again another lovely chapter.

Trevayne

Err, no. He can't field modern jets with all the electronics, but something like a 1940s Gloster Meteor or a 1950s F-86 doesn't use much electronics and could be done. The problem with them is they would be difficult to impossible to use from an airship. As for bombers, they certainly do have a context since that is how airships attack ground targets. They understand bombing quite well, although they have to use incendiaries rather than high explosives because they do not have conventional explosives, just ammo enchanted with fireballs and lightning bursts. I agree that B-17s would impress them, but it is because of the combination of size and speed. An airship could carry a much larger bombload, but I doubt an airship can do more than 60-100 mph. A B-17 could carry a bigger bombload than any existing shard, but at much higher speeds than an airship.

ChaosAndBunnies

There is no way he'd be able to field the logistics necessary to maintain jets without some serious advancements in production infrastructure. Given how long it would take to build up enough to maintain or produce a significant number, let alone being able to maintain them abroad, I think we can safely say jets won't be seeing the main continent for a good many years. On the other hand, considering all the arms they have available are bolt-bows, I think a fleet of B-17s doing bombing runs on Solites and Lunites cities is entirely viable within the relatively-near future, and very hard to counter at that. Doubly so if he knocks out some major airfields before they realize his strategy, since they have no context for bombers.

Trevayne

Thinking some more about harrowing, I expect we place a lot of the responsibility for William's actions on his harrowing. Part of that is justified. Without the harrowing, William Ashfield would have grown up as a normal male child and probably been reasonably content to marry Tala and go along with the rest of his family's plans. Unfortunately for the Countess of Ashfield, William somehow contacted the Fae and asked the wrong question. William gets overwritten by George, who takes William's name and body, but is a different person with an established identity who is much less willing to go along with his mother's directives. It is unclear just how much of "William's" personality and actions are continuing to be influenced by the Fae via the harrowing. It is just as easy to blame things on his upbringing, with a 78-year-old man with his own opinions and judgement having to go through childhood again as a second-class (male) person. We see that he seems to prefer getting his own way through planning and conflict. That could be due to harrowing, or IMHO more likely simply due to his not being able to get his own way any other way for the last 10-18 years of his life. To get more information and be better informed on this, it would be nice to see another harrowed individual in the story. We know from the discussion by the two Queen's agents that most harrowed people seem to be mentally ill. That is why they doubt that William is harrowed.

Trevayne

It could be harrowing. It could also be George's engineering background coming into play. Remember this line "Still, that was the best solution his engineer brain could come up with. Neither side would back down – and one side had nowhere else to go." He is thinking about a political problem in engineering terms because of his engineer brain. Is it because he is harrowed, or because his earthly background was as an engineer?

Trevayne

I think the actual production is just beginning. I also don't think the watchers realize just how different these shards are. The idea of a shard powered by a large, non-magical engine is just outside their experience. Until they see and hear them in operation, they will not know. I expect half the counts or high nobles in Lindholm have their own shard projects. That was why the nobility houses at the academy have their own designs.

Conrad34xdsa

Also, we know that the Queens spies are split between watching him and his family, but what about his projects? Where are they hiding the weapons, completed engines and proper aircraft that he is building? Unless they are hiding everything in a bunker or cave, how have the spies not figured out what he is building? Also, has William told Piper and everyone else that’s involved about the queen’s invisible watchers? Bit of a oversight if that is the case. Great story, would like to know more about a few of the particulars, about how big the island nation is and how far everything is relative to Williams county. Will we get a hint for what the next chapter will be about?

Conrad34xdsa

I have had a few questions regarding the Skyships, are they capable of reaching 20,000ft or more? If so, do they ever go that high with magical/mechanical equipment for the crews to breathe? If they don’t have the equipment to breathe then William could bring back the diving suit and a pressurized hull idea and make it impossible for anyone else to engage his carrier. I ask this as during all the flight training that we have seen so far, there hasn’t been any description of any oxygen masks being used by anyone.

Prometheus

It also might be part of the harrowing manifesting. His machines NEED to be used, and what better way to do that than ensure peace is never an option? "The war is already won" until it isn't, and then william now just happens to need to bring out BIGGER and DEADLIER weapons to keep his powerbase. All a coincidence...

BelligerentGnu

At last, the big events are on the horizon.

Trevayne

"... he considered the civil war practically won already ..." That's the most idiotic thought that William's had. War is never certain. As @Random Information pointed out, this is a really foolish statement. To me, this suggests that William never served in the military and only has an academic knowledge of war. Anybody who has served would realize the enemy always gets a vote. This looks a lot like George having been a defense engineer with some knowledge of history, but no practical experience of war.

Trevayne

The best information from the story is that he died at 78. The reference to 96 is his combined age, 18 years on Lindholm and presumably 78 years on Earth.

Trevayne

No problem. The 78 is from an earlier entry which mentioned that he had a combined age of 96, 18 years in this world, which implies 78 years in his previous life. Assuming he showed up in Lindholm just after he died on Earth in 2023-4, that would mean he was born in 1953-4, so too late to fly Corsairs operationally. Edit: Here is the line stating his combined age as 96. He’d lived a full life after all. Even with the heart attack, he was chronologically something like ninety-six when he combined both lives. We think he was a pilot because of references to memories of flying, but what kind of pilot is unclear. He could have been a fighter pilot, a commercial airlines pilot, or a general aviation pilot. For all we know, he could just have several thousand hours in Microsoft Flight Simulator and/or War Thunder.

Lurkemancer

He definitely had to make it to the mid 2000s, as Wikipedia, especially amongst the older population, was hardly a big thing to use.

Templar9999

My mistake. Thanks.

Trevayne

No he wasn't in his 90s. He was 78.

Templar9999

William was in his 90's when he died. Given the timing and his stated nostalgia, he likely served in WW2. It also means there is a good chance that he knew people that were slaves in their youth when he was a child. At least the children of former slaves. And his own experiences in WW2, witnessing the things that the Nazis and/or Imperial Japan did would certainly cement his opinion on any similarly "dehumanizing" sentiment. For lack of a better word. Also internal harem politics. Lol.

Richard Anderson

Is George’s hatred of slavery just because he is an American or is something else going on, it also seems to me he was a corsair pilot in the war and he died in the 90’s as an old man since there has been some eighties pop references in previous chapters and he felt nostalgia for his chosen fighter plane. Still think he should go with a SBD to kill airships.

Trevayne

He nearly said as much, before he saw the wood elf’s lips curl into a sly smile as she leaned forward. "Now come on. Enough heavy stuff. Think you can conjure us some skies to fly that beast through without melting your brain? You can tell me all about how this engine of yours works while we do." William grinned, standing as the world around them shifted. The café dissolved, replaced by the familiar sight of a long, sunlit runway stretching into the horizon, the scent of jet fuel sharp in the air. "I think I can manage that," he said, his eyes glinting with anticipation. This raises another interesting question. If they can smell jet fuel, I wonder just what else William might show her. The Corsair may be impressive, but I suspect it doesn't perform that much better than a conventional shard. At a guess, it is 100 mph faster and can out-climb and out-dive normal shards. However, it can't hover or turn as tightly. On the other hand, if he shows her an F-4 or F-15 taking off, I think it would blow her mind. Especially if she can figure out how fast they can climb and fly. He probably can't do jets yet, but in 15-20 years he might well wind up making the Solites and Lunites nervous about being a potential target for Lindholm's expansion.

Business Casual

I wish the whole series could be animated.

Trevayne

The boy paused, frozen on the doorstep of his home. “‘Us?’ Divide ‘shit’ up?” he asked, obviously completely clueless as to what - or rather who - they were talking about. The wood elf smiled. “Who gets which days? Birthing order? How many other women we’re going to allow in? Actually, do you think I could argue that the twins, as a pair, should have to share a day?” It was amusing, the way the color drained from his face at her words. Clearly, despite being very familiar with a woman’s body, he’d not much experience with actual relationships. Further evidence that William had not really thought that much about relationships since his previous history in this world was focused on sex and avoiding a relationship/political marriage. This is a significant weakness. If he doesn't know what he wants, he will get maneuvred into other people's versions of what they want. He already knows he will need to get married at some point. He is now a noble in his own right and is one of the most eligible bachelors in LIndholm. Since this is a polygamous world, he can't even try to pit his suitors against each other because sharing is the expectation. At some point in the future, I wonder if we will see more reflection by Xela on what she has seen of William's world. I wonder if she picks up on the idea that monogamy is the norm where William came from.

aj0413

Lmfao And she’s not wrong! Will is definitely part of why the crazy-hot matrix exists, when ya consider genders flipped lmao

Trevayne

I suspect it is a combination of his own memories of modern day earth, combined with his upbringing. I think George was an American, although he could have been British, Australian, or really from any Western country. I expect he is American because of his gut-level attitude towards slavery. From his perspective, the really successful countries are democracies. Monarchies are either part of constitutional democracies, or are gone with the historical winds. The same with nobilities, which arguably have even less justification. This was compounded by William's childhood. He is raised with the clear intent that he is a tool for his family's benefit. He has no real freedom and no expectation that he will ever have any. All he has to look forward to is a life as a breeding tool in a gilded cage. Given these two things, I am not surprised that he wants to change the existing system. There is room for a whole prequel novel about George's childhood and adolescence in the Ashfield noble family.

Trevayne

Great update with lots to think about. It may be the single most thought-provoking chapter so far. “And while there was plenty of space for humans in the rest of Lindholm, the same wasn’t true of orcs. Or at least, not the Northern tribes. …With that said, it definitely rankled that his plan called for the creation of what was essentially an ethno-state. Creating an orc homeland sounded a lot nicer than societal segregation. Still, that was the best solution his engineer brain could come up with. Neither side would back down – and one side had nowhere else to go.” Does William plan on living forever? Effectively what he is proposing is to carve an orcish Scotland out of the Lindholmian Great Britain. Given the OTL history, why does he think this will work? Or is it just the knowledge from the harrowing telling him with sufficient power I can do anything? The real question is how is this separation going to lead to peace? Given that they have hundreds of years of hostility, there are going to be cross-border raids and wars between them. Eventually, the Orcish territory is going to get crushed, unless William is immortal and can keep feeding them enough tech to make up for their smaller population and economy. IMHO the better solution would be to make Blackstone an orcish duchy inside Lindholm. End slavery, give the Orcs self-government in their own duchy, and keep them part of Lindholm so that the the rest of Lindholm doesn't see them as an external threat that needs to be crushed. Especially since I expect this will involve the ethnic cleansing of the Blackstone duchy. All the humans who left will be agitating to go back, especially once William the accursed is dead. Thinking some more about it, we know he had a background as an engineer and has an immense amount of technical knowledge from the Fae. I am very curious about how much history and political science he knows. I suspect not that much, just enough to let him think simple solutions are easily imposed.

MaybeASquid

Oh no Xela found George's biggest weakness: C. O M M I T M E N T

Morpheus

drooibbling?

Baron Von Mott

Of course, I never believed you were implying anything, I just found that funny 😂

Blue Fishcake

Yeah, it's a sticky line, that is (and I'm not being sarcastic here) most definitely *not* an allegory for any real world conflict. These are orcs. Just orcs.

jkbscopes

I think that's a hint of his harrowed nature peaking through

MarakEvans

Trippy. That dream sequence needs to be animated.

Baron Von Mott

"the only way I can see the human/orc conflict ending is through the orcs having their own homeland. They've been fighting over that same stretch of land for so long now that neither side will ever know peace until it’s settled once and for all." Hey, I've seen this one before! 😂 In all seriousness though, great chapter! Definitely one of the best-written in this series! 👍

DMR1

No plan survives contact with the enemy. But this is definitely top tier hilarity.

Random Information

"... he considered the civil war practically won already ..." That's the most idiotic thought that William's had. War is never certain.

Spintool

This episode really surprised me, I think this is the best one you’ve written so far

Spintool

Well, George is someone that lived in The modern western world and most people in the west really hate slavery. We’ve been conditioned to hate it since the moment we enter first grade and George has been conditioned to hate it for over 70 years. I think that is more than a good reason for him to want to end slavery. As for why he wants to suddenly be a leader I think it’s because he wants power and has the ability to take power. I know that if I was suddenly thrusted into a medieval society and had the ability to create firearms that my top priority would be taking over the world and that’s because I am normal

Andrew

Thank you!

Vlad Cold

Managing harem might be difficult... but worth it 😁

Marius Petrauskas

nice, thx.

Tim Speller

Made of squares with seven sides that sounded like purple Ow my brain

Oreo-belt25

I still don't understand George's motivations? Is he just a zealot? Like a violent vegan eco terrorist? Johenson's character was well developed. He started out as out for himself, sudden freedom from Corporate slavehood, poverty and gang membership, shaping his starting actions and beliefs. But by the end of the story, he learned how much he cared for his followers, and stepped up to the responsibility of leadership. George is starting with stepping up to the responsibility of leadership. Why? Johensons background of corporate upbringing and poverty, influenced his philosophies and methods at every step of his journey. He was written in a surprisingly complex way, where he didn't understand how dystopian his world was since he knew no alternatatives, and yet when given a chance to create his own civilization, he managed to be better without even knowing that the corporate or empire's ways were wrong. He had no zealous philosophy, he simply related to the downtrodden who followed him, and wanted to improve their lives and do right by them. And through that, he grew into a true leader. Why does George relate to/ or want to do right by the orcs? Why does he have problems with fuedalism? How has his background shaped his conspiratorial methods?

Kaywye

Awesome. Glad to hear you are continuing on.

Oreo-belt25

The dream scene reminds me of that new Oasis Ai. Where colors or patterns are continued but transformed into different things, all in a futile attempt to use pure pattern recognition to recreate a coherent experience.

Carlos Torres

He's being a little to smug for his own good regarding his enemies thinking he's already won. He's in need of a reality check for the people he keeps calling ignorant not stupid.

CW

I wonder how long the Queen has had a suspicion of William being Harrowed because there's no way it hasn't come up yet

Blue Fishcake

Part of the book.

The Fire Piper

Hah! Love the cheeky ending!

Kaywye

Final of this book, or final FINAL? Cause I really want to see what William will do once his plan comes to fruition.

Skonnchy

It always brightens my day when I see Blue Fishcake in my notifications

Szulczyn

Like then Read

Blue Fishcake

Officially marking the end of the inbetween we now move into the climax and final arc.


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