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Sexy Space Babes: Chapter Twenty Nine

🕑 Added 2021-02-21 12:09:38 +0000 UTC

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T.A. Carlson

Good points, agree. Maybe autocorrect?

Malquidis

And when you think about it, Afghanistan has actually been going since Kipling was writing. The US is just the latest in a long line of invaders failing to "pacify" Afghanistan.

Malquidis

Freaking loving the story! With respect I would like to say that in the paragraph "Assumably whatever it hit – if anything at all – made a noise as it was hit, but it was drowned out by the initial retort of the rail-gun.", the words "Assumably" and "retort" feel a little off. I would suggest "Presumably" and "report" instead. But clearly, your voice is your voice. I'm just grateful you're sharing your story with us.

Andrew

Thank you!

luke

It's going to be funny when the imperium has to ask Jason how to figure this all out. Imagine if literally the whole Interior on earth is biased and was giving the imperium biased reports like: humans are dumb weaklings, they have submitted and will soon be a good source of commerce and labor etc. Then some human contracted cargo shuttle that's normally used to supply the military with basic foodstuffs, delivers a bunch of "the resistance" onto a small to medium size military ship. Instead of taking it and fighting the imperium, they just send it into a non-earth imperium city and just blow the drive. Killing millions. The empress is pissed at the interior, because they've been telling her and by extension the entire imperium that there's nothing to worry about. Then she demands a human tell her directly what the hell is going on, then there's literally just Jason. Just him. All the other humans in the imperial military are MIA after the attack, gone off to join "the resistance". Took a few ships with them as they left. Then the empress has to convince him to tell the truth, cut through all the propaganda bullshit. He then explains the concept of terrorism, and how literally he only joined the imperium because he was forced to, not because he wanted to but rashida is pretty nice so he'll stay. Then the empress asks him how long it's going to take to properly integrate earth and he tells them that he doesn't know, and the closest example he can think of is Afghanistan. It was still going at 27 years when the imperium arrived and it still hasn't really stopped. The imperium was expecting like 1-5 years max. Nowhere near 30. They're not even prepared for 30 years of this, their marines are used to 1-2 year deployments, not permanent ones. Just some thoughts I had on the 'verse.

Blue Fishcake

"An open mind is like a fortress with its gates unbarred and unguarded."

Nathan Desrochers

That exo better have Better have been blaring 40k quotes


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