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Sexy Space Babes: Chapter Thirty

🕑 Added 2021-02-25 05:25:04 +0000 UTC

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White Neko Knight

There's a bit of dissonance in this chapter. After everything Jason has been through, the attempted rape, being shipped off and isolated from everyone, and the interrogation, you would think he'd be a bit more socially aware. He's even pondered these very things in previous chapters. I get that the potential horrors of what might happen to him haven't really sunk in, hell I was almost raped and can relate with how unreal the experience was, but that didn't stop me from learning from it. Either Jason is as intelligent as you make him out to be, or he's an idiot. If he's intelligent you really need to show that he understands the new society he's in. He doesn't have to accept being in a lesser position, so long as he understands other will act as if he is. If he's an idiot, then you're writing him as if he's not.

White Neko Knight

That's like one of the main themes of the series though. Showing a male what it's like to live in a world where the other gender has all the power.

tibbish

Yeah this too. Just seems like a really bad idea to take her deal. Getting a message out isn't THAT important to risk dealing with someone you know who will take advantage no matter what.

tibbish

Eh he was more than a bit stupid here. He should (and has shown) he knows better in the past. He should've made absolutely clear that if they try some funny crap (read: rape) he'll defend himself and be carrying some sort of weapon. And that if he couldn't carry a weapon or if self defense was a issue then he wouldn't go at all.

Matthew Greco

we get it jason doesn't like being treated in a sexist manner you don't need to constantly show his displeasure (probably just saying this cause I'd completely welcome the treatment but eh) beyond that amazing chapter that left me desperate to see what this noble party turns out

Sean

If you wanna go dark make it like Society and they try to eat him.

Eich8noe

Yea, probably. On the other Tusk the plot is actually pretty good and it would be pretty interersting to get a little deeper into Shivali society and maybe there will come an opportunity to sow the seed for a better integration of human society into the empire. I mean they can't be all vindictive sexist grunts can they? Ah, who am I kidding, orgy it is.

ErisDeer

Bro, even if this isn't an orgy (which I hope it won't be), do you really want another opportunity to make enemies in high places? Especially in high places around where you live?

Carlos Torres

I don't know I get the feeling this is going to be an Eyes Wide Shut kind of a party with an attempt at date rape and someone O.D.ing.

OneAngle Heaven

let's be real this will be an orgy. What else can it be.


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